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Nazar Se Nazar Jab Mile ..... -
25th May 2002, 09:13 PM
tamam dost-o-ahba ...
salam ,aadab, tasleemat ..... men tamam ahbab ka shukriya ada karta hon jinhon ne meri ghazal ( muhabbat or doree ) pasand farmaee .... or mashkoor hon ke himmat afzaee bi ki ......... maikash ji ne chand mufeed mashwaron se nawaza .. onka behad shukriya .. or hamari muhtarima shumaila ji ka bi shukriya onhon ne ghazal pasand farmaee ....or mene bi inke chand ashaar pare .....bare peare andaz men likhti hen ... or maikash jo ka kia kehna ...... wo bi buht peyara likhte hen ...or hamre muhtaram feroz saheb ... aapne ne be marhaba kaha or himmat afzaee ki .......... behad nawazish ...ummid he ke aap hazrat hamesha meri ghalteyoun ki tasheeh kia karenga ... jo khule dil se qabool ki jaeen gee ... ab aap hazrat ki khidmat men chand ashaar pesh karta hon .. nazar se nazar jab mile to .......... peyar rehta he kisi ko kisi ka .........bara intizar ............. rehta he tamanna-e-qurbat ...... satati he rat bhar mujhko magar ha-e doree he ......... dil be qarar rehta he zameeN dekhta hoN kabi aasmaN pe nazreN heN idhar dekh loN ya odhar .... dil men yaar rehta he wo so zulm dhaeeN magar ham to onke ho jaeeN ajab dil he ...... ho zulm phir bi ...... nisar rehta he faqat aapka ... SAGAR KASHMIRI |
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Beautiful..!! -
27th May 2002, 05:59 PM
Wah Wah Wahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!Kya baat hai...aapki is ghazal ne dil jeet liya..
 Waise agar aap ek aur sher add kar dete to aap ki ghazal muqammal ho jaatinazar se nazar jab mile to .......... peyar rehta he kisi ko kisi ka .........bara intizar ............. rehta he --Waah!! tamanna-e-qurbat ...... satati he rat bhar mujhko magar ha-e doree he ......... dil be qarar rehta he --Bahut khoob!!! zameeN dekhta hoN kabi aasmaN pe nazreN heN idhar dekh loN ya odhar .... dil men yaar rehta he wo so zulm dhaeeN magar ham to onke ho jaeeN ajab dil he ...... ho zulm phir bi ...... nisar rehta he Saare hi ashaar behud pasand aaye....Shukriya hamare saath share karne ka!! Keep it up!! Shumaila kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!! |
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shukriya aapka ... |
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shukriya aapka ... -
28th May 2002, 01:15 AM
salam shumaila ji ...
is qadar dani ka shukriya ...... magar men ye zaroor kahonga ....kia piddi or kia piddi ka shurba ....men to mahz mubtadi hon .....sikhne keleye aata hon .... dosre lafzon men aap talib-e ilm keh sakte hen .. aapke ashaar bi to kam nahen hote ..... aap se ...maikash ji se ...feroz sahab se ...men sikhta hon .... koi kami nazar aae to zaroor muttale kia karen .... or sath sat aap hazrat ko batadon ke net par aana mera kabi kabi hota he ...isleye agar kabi der hojaae jawab dene men to mazoor samajhna ....... faqat .. sagar kashmiri |
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14th June 2002, 04:08 PM
sagar sahab
aadaab bhaii aapki ghazal paDhii.....pasaNd aayi.....lekin ta'suraat maiN tab tak na'iiN de sakta jab tak ke aap ghazal muqammal nahiiN kar letey......mi'aaN ghazal ka "maqta" kidhar hai....? aur 5 ash'aar kam-az-kam hone chahiye.....ye ghazal ki rivaayat hai........ziyada se ziyada 27 she'r hone hi guNjaayish di gayi lekin is pabaNdii ko aaj-kal nahiiN maana jaata.....baharhaal...maqta keh daaliye...phir hum dobara haazir ho jayeNgey tab tak ke liye ijaazat dijiye maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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zaroor maikash ji .. |
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zaroor maikash ji .. -
15th June 2002, 02:18 AM
aadab ..
ghazal parne ka shukreya .. bhai koshish karonga ke mukammal kardon .... aapne jo baten bataeen hen onka shukriya .... or han bhai kabhi ho sake to : aawzan par .... roshni daldia kijeye ...mera matlab aam tor par kuch bhi sheir ke bare men ... acha 1 sawal he : misal ke tor par mene koi wazan ikhtiyar kia .. MAFA EELUN ( 4 MARTABA ) ab mukammal ghazal isi wazan par honi chaheye .. lekin agar kisi jaga mafa eelun ke bajae ( mafa ilun ) ho jae kia wazan men gar bari waqe ho jae gi ? ok ... ab ijazat allah hafiz sagar kashmiri |
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MAIKASH JI ....HAZIR HUn .. |
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MAIKASH JI ....HAZIR HUn .. -
16th June 2002, 01:15 AM
AADAB MAIKASH JI ..
UMMID HE KE AAP KHERIYYAT SE HOnGE .. AAPNE KAHA KE ( MAQTAA ) LAO .. ISSE PEHLE SHUMAILA BAJI BHI KEH CHUKIn HEn KE AGAR 1 BET LIKHDETE TO GHAZAL PORI HO JATI .. BAHAR HAL HAM HAZIR HEn .......... GHAZAL YE HE : nazar se nazar jab mile to .......... peyar rehta he kisi ko kisi ka .........bara intizar ............. rehta he tamanna-e-qurbat ...... satati he rat bhar mujhko magar ha-e doree he ......... dil be qarar rehta he zameeN dekhta hoN kabi aasmaN pe nazreN heN idhar dekh loN ya odhar .... dil men yaar rehta he wo so zulm dhaeeN magar ham to onke ho jaeeN ajab dil he ...... ho zulm phir bi ...... nisar rehta he batata he kiyouN raz apne .... ae SAGAR-E nadaN kahaN is jahaN meN koi ......... raz dar rehta he!!! FAQAT ...... WASSALAM SAGAR KASHMIRI |
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ye huyi na baat |
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ye huyi na baat -
16th June 2002, 01:26 AM
Waaaaaah Sagar!!
Ye huyi na baat...ab lag rahi hai ghazal muqammal Maqta bahut hi shandaar hai..Mubarak ho!! batata he kiyouN raz apne .... ae SAGAR-E nadaN kahaN is jahaN meN koi ......... raz dar rehta he!!! Kya baat kahi hai..bhai wah!! Bahut khoob... Tumhari, Shumaila baji kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!! |
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SALAM |
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SALAM -
16th June 2002, 03:33 AM
SALAM BAJI ..
AAPKA BE HAD SHUKRIYA AAPKO MAQTA PASAN AAYA ... ALLAH AAPKO KHUSH-O-KHURRAM RAKKHE .......AAMEEN ALLAH HAFIZ SAGAR KASHMIRI |
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