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Love Haqiqat bhi khwabon se........... - 11th January 2010, 03:33 PM

Khud hi tere sawaal hum khud hi tere jawab hum,
jo naa samjhi gayi tere liye woh kitaab hai hum,


dekh toh jao humko ki kuch toh nayaab hoon main,
waqt ke sehra mein ujdaa hua gulab hoon main,


kuch der hi sahi par tere dil ki mehmaan hoon main,
abhi hoon pass tere toh iss lamha khush naseeb hoon main,


palkon se bah jaye toh aansoon ka sailaab hoon main,
jo har pal tanha raha woh mehfil ka andhera hoon main,


kisi ke dil mein sama jata apna bhi yeh dard zara chahti hoon main,
apne haal e dil ka hamesha se naqaab khud hi hoon main,


apni hi khushboo se jo mehroom raha vo gulab hoon main,
haqiqat ho kar bhi samne unke kyu fir bhi khwaab hi si hoon main........


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6th February 2010, 10:38 AM

Hello Muskaan ji,

Kaisi hain aap?...aaj aapke kayi kalaamoN se ru ba ru huyi huuN....aur har kalaam me kaafi khoobsurat ehsaas haiN....aap taqreeban 5 saal se sdc member haiN aur aapne derjanoN thread post kiye haiN, per maine notice kiya hai, ke logoN ka sahi responce nahi mila aapko, shayed iski ek wajah yeh hai ke aapne apne kalaam ko kabhi techniques follow karke nahi likha hai,

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2125


meri aapse guzarish hai ke plzz is thread per nazar daaliye,aur thoda sa waqt nikaal kar apni ghazaloN ko radeef aur kafiye ke bandish ke saath hi likhiye, taaki aapki ghazal aur bhi khoobsurat ban jaaye..

ummid hai aap meri baat per zarur dhyaan dengi..


DuaoN ke saath




Zainy


PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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