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8th December 2011, 12:52 PM
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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8th December 2011, 01:29 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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Wahhhhhhhh....... Anjaan Ji........... Boht Boht KHubsurat KHayalaat Ko Qirtas-e-Qalam Kia Hai Aap Ne........ Aap Ke KHayalaat Ki Urran Boht BHali Lagi........... Dheron Daad Qabool Farmayen Is Khaksaar Ki Taraf Se........ Yunh Likhtay Rahen........ Khush Rahen
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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8th December 2011, 01:31 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Anjaan bhaai kya baat hai
mujhe ek-do sher achha nahi, balki puri koshish hi bahut acchi lagi
dil ko aNdar tak hilaa dene waali hai aapki peshkash
dil se daad hai, qabul farmaaiyega
bu yuN hi aane deN.
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8th December 2011, 02:04 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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sorry bhai, aapko is laajawaab,behatreen,khoobsurat aur umda ghazal par reps nahee de pa rahaa hu.kyuki rules allow nahee kar rahe hai.lekin aapko mere dil ke hazaaro-lakho reps...... god bless u
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8th December 2011, 02:28 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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wah wah anjaan saheb badhiya, bahut badhiya...kya qalaam le kar aaye haiN aap mehfil meN...saare sher hi bahut khoob haiN....
yuNhi likhte rahiye aur bazm ki raunak badhaate rahiye...
daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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8th December 2011, 08:56 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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AchChhe Ehsaasaat Se Gune Aur Bune HaiN Ashaar ... AnjaaN Ji !
Ummeed Aor Behtar Ki Tumse BaDhii Hai ... !
Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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8th December 2011, 10:59 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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bahut bahut khoooooooob ... anjaan ji ... dil se daad hazir hai ... radhe radhe ...............
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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9th December 2011, 08:09 PM
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Originally Posted by AHMAD SHAKIL
Wahhhhhhhh....... Anjaan Ji........... Boht Boht KHubsurat KHayalaat Ko Qirtas-e-Qalam Kia Hai Aap Ne........ Aap Ke KHayalaat Ki Urran Boht BHali Lagi........... Dheron Daad Qabool Farmayen Is Khaksaar Ki Taraf Se........ Yunh Likhtay Rahen........ Khush Rahen
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Bahut bahut shukriya Shakil bhai. Aise hi saath banaye rakhein. Aapka sath or muhabbat hi hai jo meri is adna si kavish pe bhi aapki behisaab daad mili. Aapko bazm meiN padhna hamesha achha lagta hai. Ho sake to thoda waqt diyaa kareiN. Or taareef ke sath agar khaamiyaaN bhi nazar aayeiN to bejhijhak poochh liya keejiye.
Izaazat deejiye
DuaaoN meiN yaad rakhiye
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9th December 2011, 09:08 PM
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Originally Posted by Rajeev Sharma
waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Anjaan bhaai kya baat hai
mujhe ek-do sher achha nahi, balki puri koshish hi bahut acchi lagi
dil ko aNdar tak hilaa dene waali hai aapki peshkash
dil se daad hai, qabul farmaaiyega
bu yuN hi aane deN.
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Shukriya Rajeev bhai
Aapki hausla afzaaii se tahe dil se mamnoon hooN. Aapki dariyadili hai huzoor jo aapne dil se behisaab daad di haiN. Bus aap sath banaye rakheiN Rajeev bhai, qalaam to yuNhee aate rahenge. Kuch kachhe kuch pakke
Izaazat deejiye.
Apna khyaal rakhiye
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9th December 2011, 09:17 PM
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Originally Posted by uff ak
sorry bhai, aapko is laajawaab,behatreen,khoobsurat aur umda ghazal par reps nahee de pa rahaa hu.kyuki rules allow nahee kar rahe hai.lekin aapko mere dil ke hazaaro-lakho reps...... god bless u
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Uffffffff........bhai ab kya kareiN rules hi aise banaye gaye hain. aap bas mauka dhoondte rahiyraga reps dene ka
Moderators kahaaaann hoooooooooo aaaapppp??????????????? Ye rules bhai ko bhai se door kar rahe haiN. :P
Uffak bhai reps ki bhi kya jaroorat hai, bus yahi to pata chal jata hai ki kis post ka reponse kaisa reh raha hai. Aapne yahaaN par taareef kar di wahi kisi reps se bhadkar hai hamare liye. Aap dil khol kar taareef kariye
Aate rahiye
Khush rahiye
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10th December 2011, 09:44 AM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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Aapke kalaam se na jaaane kyon nazar nahii haTtee... koi to baat hai jo baar baar hame kheench laati hai.. khhyaaloN ki udaan bahot acchi lagi hame.,.. par kuch baateN jo humne aapko bataai unhe DEKH LENAA TUM...
khush rahiye...
Shaad...
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11th December 2011, 08:57 PM
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Originally Posted by vikramjethi
wah wah anjaan saheb badhiya, bahut badhiya...kya qalaam le kar aaye haiN aap mehfil meN...saare sher hi bahut khoob haiN....
yuNhi likhte rahiye aur bazm ki raunak badhaate rahiye...
daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
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Shukriya Vikramjethi bhai. Aap ka saath pakar mamnoon hooN. Aapko qalaam pasand aaya ye qalaam ka naseeb or qalam ki aarzoo thi jo poori hui. Aage bhi saath banaye rakheiN.
Khush raheiN
DuaoN meiN yaad rakheiN
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11th December 2011, 09:04 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
AchChhe Ehsaasaat Se Gune Aur Bune HaiN Ashaar ... AnjaaN Ji !
Ummeed Aor Behtar Ki Tumse BaDhii Hai ... !
Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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Shukriya Naresh ji........Aapki ummeed par kharaa utarne ki poori koshish rahegi sir. Aapne qalaam par nazre inaayat ki ye hamari khushnaseebi hai. Aage bhi sath banaaye rakheiN.
Khush rahiye
DuaaoN meiN yaad rakhiye
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11th December 2011, 09:10 PM
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bahut bahut khoooooooob ... anjaan ji ... dil se daad hazir hai ... radhe radhe ...............
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Radhe Radhe Rajinder bhai........Kaise haiN aap?.........Mehfil meiN aane or qalaam pe nazre inaayat karne ke liye tahe dil se mamnoon hooN. Aapki daad sir aaNkhoN par. aur duaaoN ka intezaar hai ummeed hai ki hamesha mere saath bani raheNgi
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11th December 2011, 09:28 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Aapke kalaam se na jaaane kyon nazar nahii haTtee... koi to baat hai jo baar baar hame kheench laati hai.. khhyaaloN ki udaan bahot acchi lagi hame.,.. par kuch baateN jo humne aapko bataai unhe DEKH LENAA TUM...
khush rahiye...
Shaad...
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Shukriya shaad bhai.........Aapke bazm meiN aane se ek baar fir qalam ki syaahi wasool hui hai (Waise I am using laptop ) Aapki is hauslaa afzaaii ke liye bahut bahut bahut shukriyaa. Khyaal bus aise hi kab udaan bhar gaya maaloom nahiN chala
Ji aapki naseehtiN or islaah ko hum tawazzo na deiN, aisa maukaa shayad kabhi naheeN aayegi
Khush rahiye
Aadaab
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13th December 2011, 01:42 PM
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
Sumit MiyaaN.... wah wah wah.... boht khoob...
dheerooN daad qabool karieN.....
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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13th December 2011, 06:40 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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Tasleemaat Anjaan Bhaee!
Ayk bayhad khoobsoorat wa gehray kalaam ki inayat par khaaksaar aapko shukriya kehta hay aur saath he daad paysh e nazar kerta hay. Aapki tasveer daykhi aur aapka kalaam daykha...MASHALLAH aap apni umr say kahee aagay ki soch kay malik hayn. Har shayr ka saani hamaray qalb kay taaron ko choo gaya. Buhat umdah soch wa takhayyul.
Duagoh
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13th December 2011, 07:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
Sumit MiyaaN.... wah wah wah.... boht khoob...
dheerooN daad qabool karieN.....
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Shukriyaa Hassan miyaaN........Mehfil meiN haaziri daakhil karaane ke liye bahut bahut shukrguzaar hooN aapka. Aise hi aate rahiyega beech-beech meiN shaql dikhaane ke waaste
Khush raho mere bhai
Izaazat talab
Allah haafiz
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13th December 2011, 09:53 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Shukriyaa Hassan miyaaN........Mehfil meiN haaziri daakhil karaane ke liye bahut bahut shukrguzaar hooN aapka. Aise hi aate rahiyega beech-beech meiN shaql dikhaane ke waaste
Khush raho mere bhai
Izaazat talab
Allah haafiz
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theek hi jii... aa jaya karien ge...
and yes... your composition worth rep ++
take care, regards
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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14th December 2011, 04:33 PM
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Tasleemaat Anjaan Bhaee!
Ayk bayhad khoobsoorat wa gehray kalaam ki inayat par khaaksaar aapko shukriya kehta hay aur saath he daad paysh e nazar kerta hay. Aapki tasveer daykhi aur aapka kalaam daykha...MASHALLAH aap apni umr say kahee aagay ki soch kay malik hayn. Har shayr ka saani hamaray qalb kay taaron ko choo gaya. Buhat umdah soch wa takhayyul.
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Shukriya Ahemad bhai. Aap ne hamare sheroN ki gehraaii tak pahuNch kar unhe padhaa iske liye dil se shukriya. Ye chand khyaalaat to sabhi ke dil se uthte hain. Par shayad hum log cheezoN ko nazar andaaz karna seekh gaye hain. Aap mehfil mein tashreef laaye aur hamare likhe is adna qalaam par gaur farmaaya iske liye behad mamnoon hooN. Aage bhi aate rahiyega aur sath banaye rakhiyega........
DuaaoN mein yaad rakhiye
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18th January 2012, 03:00 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Mere dil se kabhi kaaNte utha kar dekh lena tum
MareezoN ko kabhi seene laga kar dekh lena tum
Badi aawaaz aati hai samandar ki fizaaoN sii
Kabhi wo seep kaanoN par saTa kar dekh lena tum
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
JahaaN bhar ki to daulat ko shehaNshaa tak naheeN paate
TumheiN paanee ho to sabkuch lutaa kar dekh lena tum
Kabhi dhulta nahiN hai daag jo daaman pe lag jaaye
mile mauka kabhi ganga nahaa kar dekh lena tum
Tere andar ka wo insaan zinda ab nahiN lagtaa
Bharosa gar nahiN bahar bulaa kar dekh lena tum
ShareefoN ke muhalle meiN ghuse shaitaan baithe haiN
Mile fursat kabhi to aazmaa kar dekh lena tum
Jo kehte ho falak se chaanD taare toD laaoge
kabhi sooraj se thhodee dhoop laa kar dekh lena tum
Khudaa kee zaat se jo ban ke tum AnjAAn baithe ho
hawaa meiN donoN hathoN ko uthaa kar dekh lena tum
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Kisi Chashme ki kya Bisaat jo Is Daag ko Dhool de,
Yeh Daag Nahi Rang hai Junoon ka,
Is Junoon ke Rang se Daagdaar Hokar dekh lo Tum...!!
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20th January 2012, 10:03 PM
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Kisi Chashme ki kya Bisaat jo Is Daag ko Dhool de,
Yeh Daag Nahi Rang hai Junoon ka,
Is Junoon ke Rang se Daagdaar Hokar dekh lo Tum...!!
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Bahut bahut shukriya Zindagi ji
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21st January 2012, 05:17 PM
kya khoob kahi he anjaan ji .....
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
dil me utar gaya ye sher to bhai ....bahot umda aur tezdar likhte he aap .... aap ke 2 hi nagme padh kar fan ho gaye he aap ki kalam ke ... aise hi nagme aur sunate rahiyega janaab ...
tah-e-dil se humari daad qubool kare .....
sada khush rahiye .....
Narendra ...
Maine har gum khushi me daala he ..
Mera har ek chalan nirala he ..
Log jin hadso se marte he ' Aaftab '..
Mujhe un hadso ne paala he ..!!
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22nd January 2012, 01:43 PM
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Originally Posted by naren.786.rajput
kya khoob kahi he anjaan ji .....
Wo paisoN ke nahiN bhookhe unheiN roti ki chahat hai
gareeboN ko kabhi roTi khila kar dekh lena tum
dil me utar gaya ye sher to bhai ....bahot umda aur tezdar likhte he aap .... aap ke 2 hi nagme padh kar fan ho gaye he aap ki kalam ke ... aise hi nagme aur sunate rahiyega janaab ...
tah-e-dil se humari daad qubool kare .....
sada khush rahiye .....
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Ye meri khushnaseebee hai Naren ji. Aapko mere qalaam o qalam pasand aa sake iske liye khuda ka shukruzaar hoon. Aap aise hi sath banaye rakhiye. Inshaallaah qalaam aage bhi aate rahe'nge
Apna khyaal rakhiye
Filhaal izaazat deejiye
Nmaste
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