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Tadapna baaki hai -
10th May 2003, 07:11 PM
Tuje apni tarah to me samaj raha hoo lekin
ab tuje teri tarah samaj na baaki hai meri tarah se to tu hamesha se meri hi thi,ab teri tarah dekha to pata chala, dilko sajna-sawarana baaki hai kaise kaise guman me main jee raha tha, ab ehsaas ho raha hai , hakikat ko baya karna baaki hai tumne to isare bahut kiye magar me hi na samaj paya, ab uun naye mauke ko lapakna baaki hai Ye zindgi jaise taise jee lee " Lachar" ne ab kabar me pada hoo, phir bhi tadapna baaki hai It is better to lose your pride with someone you love rather than lose that someone you love with your usless pride. :o |
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11th May 2003, 01:47 AM
bahot hi behtareeN lafzoN ke zariye aapne yeh rachna likhii hai!
"meri tarah se to tu hamesha se meri hi thi,ab teri tarah dekha to pata chala, dilko sajna-sawarana baaki hai" «-- mujhe is kalaam ka sabse haseen sher yeh laggaa.. aage bhi aapse yehii ummeed hai ki isi taraH aap likhte raheN ge! apna khayaal rakhiye, amn "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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Thank you very much |
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Thank you very much -
11th May 2003, 01:35 PM
Bahot bahut sukriya
App jaise logo ke wajah se likhne ki tamnna aur bhi jag uthi hai nahin to me sahi mein andhere me tha aur jo kuch bhi likhata tha kisi ko nahin bolta tha is liye ke koi na samaje to haus deta tha aur muje badahi dard hota tha. any way thanks you very very much agar aise hi sab log likhene wale ki kadar kare to mei manta hoo shayar aur bhi accha likh sakta hai akhir to is me saath aur samj ne wala hi chhahiye na It is better to lose your pride with someone you love rather than lose that someone you love with your usless pride. :o |
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4th November 2007, 07:32 PM
meri tarah se to tu hamesha se meri hi thi,ab teri tarah
dekha to pata chala, dilko sajna-sawarana baaki hai Ye zindgi jaise taise jee lee " Lachar" ne ab kabar me pada hoo, phir bhi tadapna baaki hai MUJE YEH DO SHARE AAPKI GAZAL KE BAHOT PASAND AAYE AAP NE BHI KYA KHOOB SADGI SE SAB KI ZINDAGI KI HAKIQT BAYAN KARDI YAAR AAP KO PADH KAR BAHOT HI AACHA LAGA KEEP SENDING YOUR FRIEDN NIHAR Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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4th November 2007, 09:29 PM
thanks for praised
It is better to lose your pride with someone you love rather than lose that someone you love with your usless pride. :o |
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namaste.. |
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5th November 2007, 11:57 PM
thanks a ton nanhi pari
It is better to lose your pride with someone you love rather than lose that someone you love with your usless pride. :o |
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6th November 2007, 10:56 PM
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Bohat acha laga aapka likha mujhe bohat pasand aya likhte rahiye takecare apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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