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~..kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho - 29th January 2011, 11:32 AM
kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho
haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho

kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

maiN to har haal mai tumhaari huN
tum bhali jaano ya buri samjho

zimmedari ka sar pe bojhaa hai
aur khud ko bas ik kuli samjho

sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho

fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

wali... holy person


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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho


kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

maiN to har haal mai tumhaari huN
tum bhali jaano ya buri samjho

zimmedari ka sar pe bojhaa hai
aur khud ko bas ik kuli samjho

sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

wali... holy person

Vikas jee,
Bahut achi lagi aapki gazal.......!!! Starting kamaal ki hai.....!!!
kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Behad khubsurat.............!!! bs iss se aage jaane ka man hi nahi kiyaa.....!!!
kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

Ye sher bhi bahut umdaa laga......!!! Dil se dhero daad hazir hai....!!! aise hi likhte rahiye.....!!! Khush rahiyeee.....!!!

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Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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29th January 2011, 01:10 PM
kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho
haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

waah.. matla kamaal samjho.

sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

hum sab samjhte hain mere bhai.. allah sukoon de tumhe.
fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

kya baat kahi hai.. par peene ke baad wali banne ka masla samjha nahi... behtareen aasharon ke saath ummdah kalaam over all... likhte rahen.

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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho
haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho

Bahut Khoob baat kahi hai aapne ... FikR Ji !

Sabhi ashaar ki adaayegi asardaar rahi ... Very Impressive Creation ... !

humari bhi daad qubuul KareN ... khush rahen ... ! yunhi likhte rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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Vikaas bhaa'ii:

namaste!

maine aapki ab tak jitni bhee Ghazale.n paDhii hay un sab mei.n se aaj ki yeh Ghazal sab se behteri.n lagii.. har Sher dil mei.n Ghar kar gaye.. !

dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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Vikas jee,
Bahut achi lagi aapki gazal.......!!! Starting kamaal ki hai.....!!!
kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Behad khubsurat.............!!! bs iss se aage jaane ka man hi nahi kiyaa.....!!!
kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

Ye sher bhi bahut umdaa laga......!!! Dil se dhero daad hazir hai....!!! aise hi likhte rahiye.....!!! Khush rahiyeee.....!!!
shukriyaa loveleen

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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho
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sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

bohat khoob vikas bhai.........yeh do ashaar khaas lage..

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho


yeh waala sher samajh me nahi aaya.......






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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho
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sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

bohat khoob vikas bhai.........yeh do ashaar khaas lage..

shukriyaa ji

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho


yeh waala sher samajh me nahi aaya.......


dost ka farz hota hai ki woh dost ko sahi raasta dikhayee, sach bole... lekin jab aisa hota hai to .. dost aksar rooth jate hai
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Bahut achi lagi aapki gazal.......!!! Starting kamaal ki hai.....!!!
kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Behad khubsurat.............!!! bs iss se aage jaane ka man hi nahi kiyaa.....!!!
kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

Ye sher bhi bahut umdaa laga......!!! Dil se dhero daad hazir hai....!!! aise hi likhte rahiye.....!!! Khush rahiyeee.....!!!
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namaste!

maine aapki ab tak jitni bhee Ghazale.n paDhii hay un sab mei.n se aaj ki yeh Ghazal sab se behteri.n lagii.. har Sher dil mei.n Ghar kar gaye.. !

dil se daad!

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho
haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho

kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

maiN to har haal mai tumhaari huN
tum bhali jaano ya buri samjho

zimmedari ka sar pe bojhaa hai
aur khud ko bas ik kuli samjho

sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho

fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

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Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
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kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

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fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho
haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho

kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

maiN to har haal mai tumhaari huN
tum bhali jaano ya buri samjho

zimmedari ka sar pe bojhaa hai
aur khud ko bas ik kuli samjho

sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho

fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho

kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

maiN to har haal mai tumhaari huN
tum bhali jaano ya buri samjho

zimmedari ka sar pe bojhaa hai
aur khud ko bas ik kuli samjho

sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho

fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

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Wah Wah Wahhhhhhhhhh Fkr Ji........
Kia Kamaal Ki Ghazal Hui Hai......... Hr Shair Qabil-e-daad Hai....
Boht Umdah....... Karorron Daad Hazir Hai Qabool Farmayen



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19th February 2011, 02:30 PM
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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho

kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

maiN to har haal mai tumhaari huN
tum bhali jaano ya buri samjho

zimmedari ka sar pe bojhaa hai
aur khud ko bas ik kuli samjho

sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho

fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

wali... holy person

Janumanu ji, apki ye gazzal bahut hi acha laga,
"kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho"
Ye bath to sach hai, ke zindagi ek kaanch hai, todisi chhooti to zindagi chali jati hai,
Ha aur ye be sahi hai ki sabki zindagi ek jaisi nahi hoti, kisiko khusi to kishiko dhukh, kishi ko pyar to kisiko nafart milti hai.Apki ye gazzal hame bahut hi acchi lagi,

bus " Jo magar pi le to wali samjho" ye todi utana samjme nahi ayi.bus ap isitar ache gazzal likhte rahiye.
   
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bahot khoob Vikas bhai..hazaaroeN daad.. yeh chand sher to kamaal hai.


god bless u..

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman
Shukriyaa bismil bhayeee :

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bhai maqta to gazab hai.....bhut khub.....

fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

Bahut shukriyaa raaj bhayee...
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5th March 2011, 04:26 PM
very nice lines janumanu...

"kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

.................... very nicee
kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab

khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho
....................................... too gud... keep writing... mishka
   
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28th April 2011, 03:56 PM
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Janumanu ji, apki ye gazzal bahut hi acha laga,
"kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho"
Ye bath to sach hai, ke zindagi ek kaanch hai, todisi chhooti to zindagi chali jati hai,
Ha aur ye be sahi hai ki sabki zindagi ek jaisi nahi hoti, kisiko khusi to kishiko dhukh, kishi ko pyar to kisiko nafart milti hai.Apki ye gazzal hame bahut hi acchi lagi,

bus " Jo magar pi le to wali samjho" ye todi utana samjme nahi ayi.bus ap isitar ache gazzal likhte rahiye.
shukriyaa VMS ji, aapne wahi samjha jo humne mahsoos kiyaa tha ........
last wali line ka matlab bas yahi hai ki, mai aksar pine ke baad bahut nek dil ho jata hun... aisa mai hi nahi bahut kahteN haiN
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27th July 2011, 08:05 AM
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very nice lines janumanu...

"kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho

haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

.................... very nicee
kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab

khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho
....................................... too gud... keep writing... mishka
thank u mishkaa for ur appreciation ...
keep comming ..............
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28th July 2011, 12:23 PM
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kaaNch hai meri ziNdgi samjho
haath se chhooti to gayee samjho

Zindgi ek si nahiN sabko
jyuN samjh aye tum wahii samjho

kya zaroori hai, muNh'zubaani sab
khamoshi bhi kabhi kabhi samjho

maiN to har haal mai tumhaari huN
tum bhali jaano ya buri samjho

zimmedari ka sar pe bojhaa hai
aur khud ko bas ik kuli samjho

sheroN par mere daad dete ho
dukh saho mera bebasi samjho

dosti ka yahi takajaa hai
jo nihayee to kam huee samjho

fikr bas hosh mai lage pagal
jo magar pi le to wali* samjho

wali... holy person


HI guys...it is amazing thought...Bahut hi achi lagi aapki gazal..well done !!!!!!!
   
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