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hatoN se mitaya hai - 7th July 2005, 02:10 PM

Jab bhi kuch karna chaha
dunia ne dabaya hai
mauka chahe kaisa bhi ho
har mukaam pe sataya hai


ye ada to shayad dosto ki nahin hai
kabhi kuch paya to galat rasta dikhaya hai
hum the hee nahin kisi kabil,par
apne pyar ki hawa dekar kya kya likhaya hai


zindgi bhar sab kuch baatne ki kausis ki
lekin aapke sath to khudko lutaya hai
ab "Laachar"chahe to bhi kuch nahin kar sakta
apni hasti ko khud apne hee hatoN se mitaya hai


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It is better to lose your pride
with someone you love
rather than lose that someone
you love with your usless pride.

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7th July 2005, 08:27 PM

hey........very touching........... really amazing creation. thanks buddy for sharing.. take care!
   
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8th July 2005, 12:09 AM

Hi Dost,

tumhaare is sher main maine apne aap ko paaya hai...

thanks for saying what I was never able to...


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8th July 2005, 10:02 AM

Lachar Ji,

Very touching one..

Par aapne apna naam LACHAR kyon select kiya??

Keep writing

Best wishes,

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9th July 2005, 04:14 PM

AAP SABKI POST KA BAHUT BAHUT SUKRIYA.
"LAACHAR" NAAM IS LIYE MANINE CHUNA KYUON KI HAR KOI KISI NA KISI CHIZE SE LAACHAR JARUR HOTA HAIN
ISI LIYE MAINE TO BUS LOGO KI AWAZ BANNE KI KAUSIK KI HAIN.


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9th July 2005, 04:18 PM

ye rachana sirf ek insaan ki nahi shayad sabhi ka aawaj hai.. sabko kisi na kisi se aisi shikayat rahati hi hai.. bahoot achha likha hai aapne.. aise hi likhate rahiye.. do tc


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