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Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo -
30th November 2010, 06:04 PM
Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam .. aankhon me aansoo liye |
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30th November 2010, 09:31 PM
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wahhhhhhhhhhh.... kya khoob kaha hai aapne... itna haseen kalaam be-shaq aap jaise umdaa shayar hi pesh kar sakte hai... MashaAllah kitni maasoomiyat se aapne apni mehbooba ki har achchi aur buri baat ko zaahir kiya hai... aapne apne khayaalon ki malika ko apne dilfareb lafzon se aur bhi zayada haseen bana diya... aapki is adaa ne to hamara dil chhuu liya... tahe dil se dhero daad hazir hai... yuhi is mehfil ko mehekate rahiye....likhte rahiye... khush rahiye...   "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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1st December 2010, 02:32 AM
Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai
Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo Masood Bhai ... Aadaab ! bahut khoob soorat andaaz ke saath aapne yeh ghazal kahi hai ... matlaa bhi meri pehli pasand raha ... upar ankit ashaar dil ke khaas kareeb rahen ... tamaam ghazal ko tahe dil se daad ... yunhi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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1st December 2010, 02:09 PM
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radhe radhe wah wah bahut umda likha hai aapne daad kubul karen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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3rd December 2010, 10:39 PM
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aadaab kaisee hain aap are daad denaa to koi aap se seekhe main to aap ki is adaa pe fareftah ho gayaa ye ada aisee hai ki jise dil taaron ke qareeb mahsoos kiyaa ja saktaa hai ab main us andaaz me aap ko daad to nahee de sakta jis tarah aap detee hain kiun mujhe yaqeen hai ki aap is mahfil ki malika e daad hain apnaa khiyaal rakhiye gaa dher saaree doaaon ke saath aap ka dost masood hassaas |
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4th December 2010, 12:36 AM
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aapki ye ghazal bahut khoob lagi, mujhe yeh dekh kar behad khushi hui ki aap alfaazoN ko sirf istemal hi nahi karte, balki karne se pehle har lafz ki rooh ko pehchaante haiN...aapki is ghazal par dil se daad hai qubuul kijiyega aur is neeche wale sher ke liye khas taur pe...ye khud meiN ek nageena hai, mujhe bahut pasand aaya... Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo aapka dost, vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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4th December 2010, 01:18 AM
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aadaab merey dost merey bhai mainaap ka kis mun se shukriya adaa karun main aap ke lafzon ka aabhaaree to thaa hi magar aap ne is sher ko pasand karke meraa dil jeet liyaa sachh baat yahee hai merey bhaiki isee sher pe hi ghazal ka daro madaar hai aor rahe gaa aor mujhe khushiis baat kihai ki aap ne mereu dil me jhaankliyaa aor main ne aap ko f b jo kahaa hai wo 100% sachh hai ki haashiyah ( border) bana al sotoor ( between line ) ki baarikiyon ko pahlee nigaah me hishikaar kar lete hain mujhe khushi hi nahi balki fakhr hai kiaap merey dost hai joki achhaa insaan hone ke saath saath zaheen bhi hai khush rahiye doaa me aapkaa naam sare fihrist rahe gaa aap ka masood |
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4th December 2010, 08:22 AM
originaly posted by Masoodhassas
Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo - 30th November 2010, 06:04 PM Wo kahtaa hai ki main us ki taareef me mobaalgha se kaam le rahaa hun jab ki wo merey ehsasaat se bhi zeyaadah haseen hai . baqaol us ke meree jhooti taareef use pasand nahi isee liye naye lehje me ek taza ghazal kiun ki uski dharkanon ki aahat ko bhi main apnee palkon ke shaamiyaane me qaid kar letaa hun Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo Waqt se halaat se hai baa khabar Khair o shar ka is liye sangam hai wo Munsalik ho kar bhi hain bikhre huye Main agar dinaar hun dirham hai wo Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo Faisle us ke hamesha hain ghalat Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo Is tarah Hassaas us ki zaat hai merey aansoo dekh ke pur nam hai wo Barham .. naaraaz ,,,, khaaaksaari …. Apne aap ko kam aanknaa ,,,pur kham .. terhaa ,,,,,, khair o shar … achhaayi aor buraayi ,,,,munsalik .. atteche …..shaguftah …. Khilee huyi … parcham .. flag ,,,Hassaas ..sensitive ,,, pur nam Masood ji bahut khoob dil se daad hazir hai qbul kareiN rajinderseep |
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4th December 2010, 08:55 AM
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Jab ki apnee zaat me parcham hai wo kya kahne bhayee sahab ... kya kahne |
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4th December 2010, 09:29 AM
Hai shaguftah guftagu us ki bahot
Har basher ke waaste sargam hai wo Masood Bhai, Wah wah wah janab.... Kia kehne janab, Tamaam ghazal be-had haseen lafzooN se sajayi hai aap nay, lekin quoted shair ne khaas lutf diya..... Aise hi mehfil roshan rakhiye, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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12th December 2010, 05:45 PM
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janaab mehraa saahab isk ek ebaadat janumanu bhbai hassaan bhai mujhe afsos hai ki aaj kal ki mashghooliyaat ne mujhe apne chaahne waalon ke shukriyaa adaa karne se bhi door kar diyaa hai ........ ho yun rahaa hai ki doston ki takhleeqaat aatee rahtee hain aor use parhne me yaa un ke jawaabaat me yaanee daad me theek thaak waqt guzar jaata hai is ke elaawah yahaan pe jo moshaaerey ho rahe hain un ki taiyaaree aor apnee rozee rotee ka intezaam bhi waqt le letaa hai is liye apnee jaanib tawajjoh nahi ho paa rahi hai .. main maantaa hun ki ye meree bhool hai ummeed ki aap hazraat ise dar guzar farmaayen ge main tahe dil se aap tamaam logon ki mohabbaton ka shukriyaa adaa kartaa hun meree doaayaen aap logon ke saath hain mukhlis masood hassaas |
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13th December 2010, 12:56 AM
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13th December 2010, 11:51 AM
hassaaas sahab ...aadaab ,,,,,,,,
kaise hain aap? aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi........... meri tara se daad kabool kijiye........ hassaas hai . regards |
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14th December 2010, 11:43 PM
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aadaab ghhumaavdaar pechdaar khamdaar shaayad yahee meree qismat me aayaa hai aap ke daad ka tareeqah munfarid hai mukhtacar par pur acar daad ka tahe dil se shukr guzaar hun masood hassaas |
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14th December 2010, 11:47 PM
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aadaab zidd bhai janaab jab kisee ghazal pe aap jaise shukhanwar daad de den to yaqeen kar lenaa chaahiye ki wo ghazal achhi hi ho gee ye dekh kar badaa achhaa lagaa ki ghazal ko aap ki tanqeedi nigaah ne khoobssortee ka tamgha de diyaa hai bahot shukriyah aap ka dost masood haasaas |
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15th December 2010, 12:13 PM
Meyre zakhmon ke liye marham hai wo
Haan magar thoraa bahot barham hai wo Khaksaari uski jism o jaan hai Is liye shaayad bahot pur kham hai wo bahut khoob masood ji.... daad kubul keejiye... |
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15th December 2010, 01:05 PM
bahot khoob likha hai masood bhai.. kamaal ke alfaaz lage aur ehsaas to mashallah qayamat hi rahe hain..... wese itna kaise likh pate hain bhai.. itne khyaaal kaise aa pate hain aapke dimaag me.. allha kare ye nemat yonhi badhtee jae... aur aap yoonhi likhte jaaen.. khush rahiye..
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16th December 2010, 11:28 AM
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adaab shipra saahibah aap aayeen achhaa lgaa do dee aor achha lagaa ghazal pasand ki tabiyat khush hogayee bahot shukriyah masood |
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17th December 2010, 11:26 PM
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aadaab sameer bhai main aap ka shukr guzaar hun jis sawaaliya andaaz me aap ne daad di hai wo daad daad nahi balki ek geraan maayah sarmaaya hai jo main apne dil ke nehaan khaano me dunyaa ki nigaahon se chhupa kar rakkhun gaa bahot shukriyaa mere bhai allah aap ko khoob khoob taraqqi de doa go masood hassaas |
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