kucch sher

[majnu78]

doston aaj aap sab ki khidmat mein wo chand sher likh raha hoon jinhein poori ghazal ki soorat na de paaya........


"MUNSAFI CHAHTE HAIN AB KAATILON SE HUM,
RANG-E-HUNAR SEEKHTE HAIN AB JAHILON SE HUM.
KABHI SHAAN-E-TOOFAAN HUA KARTE THEY,
MAUJON KO DEKHTE HAIN AB SAAHILON SE HUM"


"UDAAS AANCHALMEIN SISKIYAAN SAMETE,
HAAM AAYI HAI MERI CHAUKHAT PE KHAMOSHIYAN LAPETE."



"MERE DINON NE SHAAM, RAATON NE SUBAH KE UJAALE NAHIN DEKHE,
MANZIL PE POOCHTE HO SAFAR HAAL, TUMNE MERE PAON KE CHHALE NAHIN DEKHE?"

[gumnam]

Majnu Bhai,


"MUNSAFI CHAHTE HAIN AB KAATILON SE HUM,
RANG-E-HUNAR SEEKHTE HAIN AB JAHILON SE HUM.
KABHI SHAAN-E-TOOFAAN HUA KARTE THEY,
MAUJON KO DEKHTE HAIN AB SAAHILON SE HUM"


Agar Izaazat ho to aapke is khoobsoorat sher mein kuch lines Jorne ki himakat karna chahunga.....

Ummid hai aap ko bura nahi lagega........

"MUNSAFI CHAHTE HAIN AB KAATILON SE HUM,
RANG-E-HUNAR SEEKHTE HAIN AB JAHILON SE HUM.
KABHI SHAAN-E-TOOFAAN HUA KARTE THEY,
MAUJON KO DEKHTE HAIN AB SAAHILON SE HUM


Muddat hui ki khelte the hum bhi ghamo se,
Ab khelte hain dekho Dard-e-Dilon se hum.
Guzra wo daur jisme the hum 'Unke' Humsafar
'Jana kahan hain?' poochte hain Manzilon se hum"



Zaroor batayiyega ki kaisi lagi??


Thanks.......

[majnu78]

bohot khoob janaab gumnam sahab.
mere adhoore lafzon ko kuch aur behtar bana diya aap ne.

Muddat hui ki khelte the hum bhi ghamo se,
Ab khelte hain dekho Dard-e-Dilon se hum.
Guzra wo daur jisme the hum 'Unke' Humsafar
'Jana kahan hain?' poochte hain Manzilon se hum"

wwwwaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! bohot khoob

[sakhi1909]

majnu78 ji

"MUNSAFI CHAHTE HAIN AB KAATILON SE HUM,
RANG-E-HUNAR SEEKHTE HAIN AB JAHILON SE HUM.
KABHI SHAAN-E-TOOFAAN HUA KARTE THEY,
MAUJON KO DEKHTE HAIN AB SAAHILON SE HUM"

kya baat hai hota hai yaisa bhi life mein jab kinare khade hoke ham woh manjar dekhte hai jinke kabhi ham bhi saath hote they.


"UDAAS AANCHALMEIN SISKIYAAN SAMETE,
HAAM AAYI HAI MERI CHAUKHAT PE KHAMOSHIYAN LAPETE."

wah yaisi shaam ki baat hi alag hai kyun ki kai baar khamohiyaa bahut khuch kah deti hai.



"MERE DINON NE SHAAM, RAATON NE SUBAH KE UJAALE NAHIN DEKHE,
MANZIL PE POOCHTE HO SAFAR HAAL, TUMNE MERE PAON KE CHHALE NAHIN DEKHE?" [/B][/QUOTE]

bahut khub aksar log apne chale hi dekhte hai bas.....
acha likha apne har sher
daad kubul karein
sakhi

[majnu78]

daad ke liye shukriya sakhi ji.

"koi bachne ka nahi, sabka pata jaanti hai.
kis taraf aag lagana hai, hawaa jaanti hai."