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Love Ham majnoo ban jayein tum laila ban jao - 28th December 2014, 11:14 AM

Dosto Adaab
In this busy world and race to get ahead, we often forget the need to keep relationships with our partner romantic and lively. So please gungnaao (hum) this ghazal to your love when he/she gets too absorbed in other things. And do let me know, if it works.
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HAM MAJNOO BAN JAYEIN TUM LAILAA BAN JAAO

KyoN raat hai deewani, jaanam hamieN samjhaao
Ham bhool gaye jeena, haemiN jeena sikhlaao

Sehraa ki chuNd booNdeiN, kayaa pyaas bhujaeiNgi
Gar pyaas bhujanee hai, to saawan barsaao

Chalo ishk.o.mohabbat ki, umar ko dohraaeiN
Ham majnoo ban jayeiN, tum lailaa ban jaao

Saaki se kah deiNge, ham ab nahiN aayeiNge

tum mast nigaahoN se ,jaam to CHalkaao

Gam aur khushi yaksaaN, hain khar.o.gul ki trhaa
Sang saath chaleiN dono , dono ko apnaao

Har shakhs gunaahoN ka, putla hai rey ‘Ashk’
doojaa na buraa samjho khud pe na itraao


Jaanam- My love, sehraa-desert, yaksaaN-together, khar.o.gul- thorn and flower, itraao-conceit

PS I put this ghazal as above on Nov 4,2010 in shayri.com and happened to google it and found a number of copiers. I am very happy that they like it so much to claim as their own and I thought I should share it again with my Shyri.com friends as my new year 2015 good wish to you all.
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28th December 2014, 06:57 PM

Chalo ishk.o.mohabbat ki, umar ko dohraaeiN
Ham majnoo ban jayeiN, tum lailaa ban jaao

Saaki se kah deiNge, ham ab nahiN aayeiNge
tum mast nigaahoN se ,jaam to CHalkaao


Hardev ji , Namaskar .

2010 mein jab aapne ye kalam sdc mein post kiya tha , tab maiN jura nahiN tha yahan . Ab aap ko perne ka mauka mila , Yaqeen janiye , tabiyat khush ho gayee apka kalam per ke ,,kya rumani andaaz ,,uupar wale 2 ashar bahut pasand aye .

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Wah.....Bilkul rumaniyat se bharpur kalaam hai Hamdam Sb.
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Ham majnoo ban jayein tum laila ban jao - 1st January 2015, 06:46 AM

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Chalo ishk.o.mohabbat ki, umar ko dohraaeiN
Ham majnoo ban jayeiN, tum lailaa ban jaao

Saaki se kah deiNge, ham ab nahiN aayeiNge
tum mast nigaahoN se ,jaam to CHalkaao

Hardev ji , Namaskar .

2010 mein jab aapne ye kalam sdc mein post kiya tha , tab maiN jura nahiN tha yahan . Ab aap ko perne ka mauka mila , Yaqeen janiye , tabiyat khush ho gayee apka kalam per ke ,,kya rumani andaaz ,,uupar wale 2 ashar bahut pasand aye .

Sanjay Sehgak

Hamdam Ji:

Meri is reposting se aapko ye klaam paRhne ne ka avsar mila, meri khushkismati. aapne is sraahaa, to meri mehnat safal hui.
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