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sham se pehle charagon ki baat mut kerna -
29th March 2006, 12:41 PM
sham se pehle charagon ki baat mut kerna
dil me uthti muradon ki baat mut kerna shama ko dekhker jo bhehak jaye aise madhosh iradon ki baat mut kerna chahat ke gul se mehakti hai bagiya dil ki khar wale gulabon ki baat mut kerna ek muqammal jahan talashey bhi! tute bikhre kwabon ki baat mut kerna jindgi ke safar me kaun mila kaun gaya atey jatey nazaron ki baat mut kerna qatl kerke jo gawah ban baithe aise dilchasp gunahon ki baat mut kerna sari umr jinka jabab mil na saka "sona" un sawalon ki baat mut kerna |
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29th March 2006, 08:45 PM
Swati ji..
Aap ki yah ghazal bhi pasand aayi.. Khas kar yah sher sham se pehle charagon ki baat mut kerna dil me uthti muradon ki baat mut kerna chahat ke gul se mehakti hai bagiya dil ki khar wale gulabon ki baat mut kerna qatl kerke jo gawah ban baithe aise dilchasp gunahon ki baat mut kerna Aisi hi likhte rahiye, Aur aate rahiye yahaaN.. Taki hame aap ka likha huya kuchh padhne ko mile.. Daad haazir hai... Aise hi likhte rahiye.. Mayank |
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30th March 2006, 09:34 AM
dear swati ji,
aaj ek arse ke baad aapko parhne ka mauka mila n i must say my day is made. its awesome as usual n complete in itself. there r very few out here n one of among them is u too whom i always love reading becoz the way u flow ur thoughts n penn down, its amazingly well expressed. keep going n keep sharing ur beautiful creations among us, n a humble request ki yahan ke liye kuch waqt nikaliye n share ur creations oftenly. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love roshani  |
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30th March 2006, 11:06 AM
wah wah kya baat hai bas ek khayal dil main aya itnee khoobsrrat ghazal se batcheet ka rek
aksar unkee angiyon ke naksh mile khanzar pe is shahar main chahne walon kee baat na karana anil masoomshayer bahut achha laga dobara khana par raha hai kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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30th March 2006, 11:15 AM
sham se pehle charagon ki baat mut kerna
dil me uthti muradon ki baat mut kerna shama ko dekhker jo bhehak jaye aise madhosh iradon ki baat mut kerna Waaaaaaahhh... bahut khoob... chahat ke gul se mehakti hai bagiya dil ki khar wale gulabon ki baat mut kerna ek muqammal jahan talashey bhi! tute bikhre kwabon ki baat mut kerna Beautifulll..... jindgi ke safar me kaun mila kaun gaya atey jatey nazaron ki baat mut kerna qatl kerke jo gawah ban baithe aise dilchasp gunahon ki baat mut kerna Waaaaaaahhh... very well said... sari umr jinka jabab mil na saka "sona" un sawalon ki baat mut kerna Waaaah.... Hi Swati, Kaisi hain... Seeing u after such a long time... hope things have been going good... ghazal ka kya kahoon... humesha ki tarah ghazab ka asardaar likha hai aapne.. ur poetries are always so expressive... Juts loved this one too... meri daad kubool kijiyega... likhti rahiye... apna khayal rakhiyega Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st March 2006, 08:20 PM
jindgi ke safar me kaun mila kaun gaya
atey jatey nazaron ki baat mut kerna Namaskar Swati ji Ek arse baad aapko padha... bahut acha laga.......you have an impressive style of writing......I really admire the way ur words flow.......mere daad kabul kijeyega.......aur yuun aati raha kijeye..... Take care |
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Re: sham se pehle charagon ki baat mut kerna -
22nd April 2006, 04:52 PM
nashe ka hai aalam khumaar taari hai dil par...
labon ke muqaabil sharaabon ki baat mat karna swati ji namashkar ek arse baad aapko padha aur dil baag baag ho gaya...aapka kalaam dil ko choo gaya..aapka andaaz-e-bayaan hamesha se hi bejode paaya hai..meri daad kubool kijiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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