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10th June 2013, 12:27 AM
Adaab,
Bazm main ek arse baad shirkat kar raha hun, wazan maiN ya koi aur bhi kami rahe to mazrat khuwah hu, aapki aara se zaroor nawaziyega .. intzaar rahega...
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AankhoN mai koi chehra nahi hai..
HaaN kahiN koi mera nahi hai..
Kar deti haiN khafa, baateN wo bhi..
Vaasta jinse hota nahiN hai..
Wo tootaa aankhon se khwaab ban kar..
Dhoondne se bhi milta nahi hai...
BaateN karta hai mujhse hazaaroN..
Dil magar tu bhi rakhta nahi hai..
Cheekhte ho khuda hi khuda kyuN..
Wo deewaroN mai rehta nahi hai..
Har kahaani mai kya dhoondhte ho..
Koi kirdaar tumsa nahi hai ..
MaiN bhula bhi duN ek roz tumhe..
Par 'Sifar' mujhko jeena nahi hai..
Aur...
Toot ke jo bikhar jaye yuN hi..
Khyaal se mere, rishta nahi hai...
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Kunaal (Sifar) :- 10-06-2013
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KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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10th June 2013, 10:37 PM
Kunaal ji ,
bahut khoob .sare ashar kabile tareef hain.
sanjay sehgal
Quote:
Originally Posted by KunaaL
Adaab,
Bazm main ek arse baad shirkat kar raha hun, wazan maiN ya koi aur bhi kami rahe to mazrat khuwah hu, aapki aara se zaroor nawaziyega .. intzaar rahega...
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AankhoN mai koi chehra nahi hai..
HaaN kahiN koi mera nahi hai..
Kar deti haiN khafa, baateN wo bhi..
Vaasta jinse hota nahiN hai..
Wo tootaa aankhon se khwaab ban kar..
Dhoondne se bhi milta nahi hai...
BaateN karta hai mujhse hazaaroN..
Dil magar tu bhi rakhta nahi hai..
Cheekhte ho khuda hi khuda kyuN..
Wo deewaroN mai rehta nahi hai..
Har kahaani mai kya dhoondhte ho..
Koi kirdaar tumsa nahi hai ..
MaiN bhula bhi duN ek roz tumhe..
Par 'Sifar' mujhko jeena nahi hai..
Aur...
Toot ke jo bikhar jaye yuN hi..
Khyaal se mere, rishta
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khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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11th June 2013, 06:05 PM
kaafi gehre aur sache ehsaas... binaa kisi banaawat ke.
yahi baat to aapki khoob pasand bhi hai.
Shaad...
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11th June 2013, 08:44 PM
Bahut khubsurat likha hai such me gehraai rakhtey ho aap
ARJUN ("ARMAAN")
Humen to unse mohbbat hai mout se bhi pyar hai,Unper pura yaqeen or mout per pura etbaar hai,
Dekhtey hain pahle koun aata hai,"Armaan" ko dono ka intezaar hai(nm)
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11th June 2013, 10:34 PM
originally posted by Kunal
AankhoN mai koi chehra nahi hai..
HaaN kahiN koi mera nahi hai..
Ek arse baad koi achha shayer padne ko mila.....
daad aur duaoN k saath
rajinderseep
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12th June 2013, 01:22 AM
Cheekhte ho khuda hi khuda kyuN..
Wo deewaroN mai rehta nahi hai..
Dewaroon mein jo rehta khuda
pooch lete khuda say.....
Satyamev Jayate
yeh har insaan kyun kehta nahin hay
Kunaal wonderful poetry as always....kalam ki awaz behtarein hay...keep up the good work
Di
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13th June 2013, 05:30 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by KunaaL
Adaab,
Bazm main ek arse baad shirkat kar raha hun, wazan maiN ya koi aur bhi kami rahe to mazrat khuwah hu, aapki aara se zaroor nawaziyega .. intzaar rahega...
==========================
AankhoN mai koi chehra nahi hai..
HaaN kahiN koi mera nahi hai..
Kar deti haiN khafa, baateN wo bhi..
Vaasta jinse hota nahiN hai..
Wo tootaa aankhon se khwaab ban kar..
Dhoondne se bhi milta nahi hai...
BaateN karta hai mujhse hazaaroN..
Dil magar tu bhi rakhta nahi hai..
Cheekhte ho khuda hi khuda kyuN..
Wo deewaroN mai rehta nahi hai..
Har kahaani mai kya dhoondhte ho..
Koi kirdaar tumsa nahi hai ..
MaiN bhula bhi duN ek roz tumhe..
Par 'Sifar' mujhko jeena nahi hai..
Aur...
Toot ke jo bikhar jaye yuN hi..
Khyaal se mere, rishta nahi hai...
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Kunaal (Sifar) :- 10-06-2013
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behad khoobsurat ahsaas.....................dil se daad hazir hai.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th June 2013, 09:30 PM
ek dard bhari rachna phir se tumhari padhi lagta hai nye dard hamesha saya hai apna kyo?
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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Main shayar to nahin.....
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15th June 2013, 10:54 AM
kunaal bhai bahut khoob likha aapne.....saare aashaar acche lage mujhe.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
Arvind Saxena
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15th June 2013, 04:56 PM
Apki ghazal mein Kunaal ji parhne wale ko koi na koi apne dil ke ehsaas bhi mil jaayega ... bahaut khoob .... Daad !!!
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5th September 2014, 01:49 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hamdam
Kunaal ji ,
bahut khoob .sare ashar kabile tareef hain.
sanjay sehgal
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Teh dil se shukraguzaar huN aapka..
Sifar
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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5th September 2014, 01:52 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
kaafi gehre aur sache ehsaas... binaa kisi banaawat ke.
yahi baat to aapki khoob pasand bhi hai.
Shaad...
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Sameer bhai..
Maine kabhi shayri ko science banaane ki koshish nahi ki .. na hi maths samjha .. jo hai jaisa hai .. bas saaf ho seedha saada .. samajh aa jaye aam zabaan mai .. wahi likhne ki Koshish karta hu
Sifar
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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5th September 2014, 01:53 AM
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Bahut khubsurat likha hai such me gehraai rakhtey ho aap
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Geraai to padhne wale ke khyaal main hai..
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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5th September 2014, 01:55 AM
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originally posted by Kunal
AankhoN mai koi chehra nahi hai..
HaaN kahiN koi mera nahi hai..
Ek arse baad koi achha shayer padne ko mila.....
daad aur duaoN k saath
rajinderseep
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Bohat jyada izzar de di rajinder ji aapne .. shayad iske kaabil nahi hun main..
Maagi chahunga deri se aap tak aane ke liye
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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5th September 2014, 12:10 PM
Har kahaani mai kya dhoondhte ho..
Koi kirdaar tumsa nahi hai ..
Kunaal bhai,
Adaab-o-tasleemaat,
Kaafi arse baad aap ko meHfil meiN dekha,
behad khushi mehsoos hui.......
Tamam ghazal behtareen alfazooN se saji hai
aur aik mukammal kalaam ki tarjumaani kar rahi hai..
DherooN daad-o-mubarakbaad iss besh-qeemati kalaam ke liye ...
Likhte rahiye,
Aate rahiye,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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