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Maazi Ne Bulaya Hai -
29th May 2004, 01:24 PM
Khwabon ki Aahtein takk aani band ho gayi
Shama Shabb bhar Jalti rahi phir Khaak ho gayi Yaadon ki Sard Purvai se khud ko Bachaye baithe hain Mayusi ki Chaadar iss Kadar Tan se Lagaye baithe hain Dekho Aaj toh Khamoshi bhi Ga rahi hai Dil Toota hai Koi aur Aawaaz Yahan takk Aa rahi hai Ashkon ko Vidayi dekar kal Aankhon ne Saaz uthaya tha Maine bhi apni Tanhai ko kal ik Nagma sunaya tha Ghum ki Maar ne ek Zakhm lagaya hai Dard ka Kasoor nahin humein Maazi ne Bualya hai tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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29th May 2004, 01:40 PM
its nice
i like ur thought aa bhi jaao ki zindagi kam hai tum nahin ho to har Khushi kam hai vaadaa kar ke ye kaun aayaa nahin shahar mein aaj raushani kam hai jaane kyaa ho gayaa hai mausam ko dhuup ziyaada hai chandani kam hai aaina dekh kar Khayaal ayaa aaj kal un ki dosti kam hai tere dam se hi main mukammal huun bin tere tera 'afsaana' kam hai |
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30th May 2004, 11:48 AM
aa bhi jaao ki zindagi kam hai
tum nahin ho to har Khushi kam hai vaadaa kar ke ye kaun aayaa nahin shahar mein aaj raushani kam hai jaane kyaa ho gayaa hai mausam ko dhuup ziyaada hai chandani kam hai aaina dekh kar Khayaal ayaa aaj kal un ki dosti kam hai tere dam se hi main mukammal huun bin tere tera 'afsaana' kam hai khoob kaha Afsaana..tx a lot 4 appreciating my lines. take care tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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thanks for reply -
1st June 2004, 01:32 PM
Thanks for reply i hope u like thisone also
Chandni ratonko sara jahan sota hai lekin kisi ki mohabat me koi badnaseeb rota hai Khuda kisiko mohabat me fida nakare aagr kareto qyamat tak juda na kare |
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1st June 2004, 08:57 PM
Hey roopsss too na ab kyaa kahuu...dekh kuch dikha raha huu fhir bole gii gurujii kaha thai ab tak....
 http://www.urdupoetry.com/ydas01.html aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai aa bhii jaao kii zindagii kam hai tum nahii.n ho to har Khushii kam hai vaadaa kar ke ye kaun aayaa nahii.n shahar me.n aaj raushanii kam hai jaane kyaa ho gayaa hai mausam ko dhuup ziyaadaa hai chaa.Ndanii kam hai aa_iinaa dekh kar Khayaal aayaa aaj kal un kii dostii kam hai tere dam se hii mai.n mukammal huu.N bin tere terii 'Yamini' kam hai Hey afsaana tumne tao sach mai apne naam sa kaam kar diyaaa....yuu na karte hai jiss ka kalaam hai uss insaan ko purii ijjaT denii chahiiye naa.....ummid hai ab ye galtii na karoge kabhii..........plzzzzz na karoo yuu.....Sanju!  PS:Roopalii yaar hume tao aaj tak kisi ne miss nahi kiyaa..tum nahak hii bate banatii hoo.... byeeeee sweet heart take care..sorry yaar tere kalaam ki tarif karna tao bhul hii gaya ...lol....acha hai chalegaa... muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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2nd June 2004, 04:26 PM
Afsana …that is not good…aise nahin karte yaar..very bad..anyways ab try karna ki aisi galti doobara na ho…ok?
tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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2nd June 2004, 04:29 PM
Sanjoo..ji
Hmm…..sabse pehle toh tx telling me bout Yamini’s poem…and secondly aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne mera kalaam pada aur meharbaani aapki ki aapne meri post par apna keemati waqt jaaya kiya…..hum aabhari hain aapke.. Hmm ye baat bhi bikul theek kahi aapne ki koi kissi ko miss nahin karta….and waise bhi jisse miss kiya jata hai wo insaan toh ye kabhi samajh hi nahin paata..kher main samjha doongi uss insaan ko..ok? Aapka hi ek sher hai jo yaad aa raha hai..likh hi deti hoon Har dard humdard ko sunaya nahi karte Ansu hai motii unhe yuu zaaya nahi karte... Dosti kar k yakeen Toda nahi karte Zaleem duniya hai aur dushman banaya nahi karte .... Har pathaR ko Pooja nahi karte ban gaye hai Kuch Bhagwan ab vo suna nahi karte Bilkul sahi farmaaya hai…chalti hoon Byee take care tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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