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Tumhaare Khat meiN naya ik salaam kis ka thha - 21st August 2008, 03:21 PM

Bahot Dino Baad Bazm Me Lauta Hoon... Aap Sab Ki Jaanib Ek Ghazal Pesh Kar Raha Hoon... Jo "Daag Dehlvi" Sahab Ki Likhi Hui Hai... Zara Nazar Farmaiyega...

Tumhaare Khat meiN naya ik salaam kis ka thha
na thha raqiib to aaKhir vo naam kis ka thha

vo qatl kar ke har kisii se puuchhate haiN
ye kaam kis ne kiya hai ye kaam kis ka thha

vafaa kareiNge nibhaayeiNge baat maaneiNge
tumhe bhi yaad hai kuchh ye kalaam kis ka thha

raha na dil meiN vo be-dard aur dard raha
muqiim kaun hua hai maqaam kis ka thha

na puuchh-paachh thhi kisi ki na aav-bhagat
tumhaari bazm meiN kal ehatamaam kis ka thha

hamaare Khat ke to purze kiye paRha bhi nahiN
suna jo tum ne baa-dil vo payaam kis ka thha

iNhi sifat se hota hai aadami mashahuur
jo lutf aap hi karate to naam kis ka thha

guzar gayaa vo zamaanaa kaheiN to kis se kaheiN
khayaal mere dil ko subah-o-shaam kis ka thha

har ek se kahate haiN ki "Daag" bevafaa niklaa
ye puuchhe in se ko_ii vo gulaam kis ka thha.



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23rd August 2008, 11:54 PM

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Bahot Dino Baad Bazm Me Lauta Hoon... Aap Sab Ki Jaanib Ek Ghazal Pesh Kar Raha Hoon... Jo "Daag Dehlvi" Sahab Ki Likhi Hui Hai... Zara Nazar Farmaiyega...



Tumhaare Khat meiN naya ik salaam kis ka thha

na thha raqiib to aaKhir vo naam kis ka thha

vo qatl kar ke har kisii se puuchhate haiN
ye kaam kis ne kiya hai ye kaam kis ka thha

vafaa kareiNge nibhaayeiNge baat maaneiNge
tumhe bhi yaad hai kuchh ye kalaam kis ka thha

raha na dil meiN vo be-dard aur dard raha
muqiim kaun hua hai maqaam kis ka thha

na puuchh-paachh thhi kisi ki na aav-bhagat
tumhaari bazm meiN kal ehatamaam kis ka thha

hamaare Khat ke to purze kiye paRha bhi nahiN
suna jo tum ne baa-dil vo payaam kis ka thha

iNhi sifat se hota hai aadami mashahuur
jo lutf aap hi karate to naam kis ka thha

guzar gayaa vo zamaanaa kaheiN to kis se kaheiN
khayaal mere dil ko subah-o-shaam kis ka thha

har ek se kahate haiN ki "Daag" bevafaa niklaa
ye puuchhe in se ko_ii vo gulaam kis ka thha.
kya khoob likha hai bhai
lagta hai.. gazal ka har ek seyar mein aapne bahut mehnat ki hai...
aapki ghazal mein ye DAAG naam kiska hai.. ya to ye aapka naam hai ya us shayar ka jisne ye kalaam likhe kain....reply must
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Smile Bahot Shukriya - 24th August 2008, 03:59 PM

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kya khoob likha hai bhai
lagta hai.. gazal ka har ek seyar mein aapne bahut mehnat ki hai...
aapki ghazal mein ye DAAG naam kiska hai.. ya to ye aapka naam hai ya us shayar ka jisne ye kalaam likhe kain....reply must
allah hafiz


Aapne Ghazal Ko Nazar Farmaaya... Aapka Shukriya... Ye Ghazal Daag Dehlvi Sahab Ki Likhi Hui Hai... Jo Meine Upar Bata Rakha Hai...


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Bahut Acchi Ghazal Hai ....thanks For Sharing............




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