To LAAZMI hai ye ki use bhi khud pe GUROOR hai...!!

[Taish]

Dobara se likhna shuru karne me ek faayeda to jarur hua ki kam se kam ab khayaal aane lage, do din me doosri peshkash le kar haazir hun saamne, aur shayad ab tak ki ye meri sabse lambi peshkash bhi hai, to jyada torcher ke liye maafi maanguNga...


teri bewafaai kal parson ki baat lagti hai,, jo dekhta hun tasveer teri, to barson ki baat lagti hai,, ishq ke bostaa.N(upwan) me aaj sirf kaanton ka chaman hai,, dil laga ke usko todna hi shayad zamaane ka chalan hai,, zindagi me laga jo mushkilon ka mela hai,, na jane kyun har raahi akelaa hai,, ishq kyun dil ki zanjeer ho gayi,, shayad yun "ghayal" hona hi meri taqdeer ho gayi,, tujhse is kadar jo main door ho gaya,, lahoo me kalam dubaa kar chalane ko majboor ho gaya................


haan sach majboor ho gaya..............



Hum pe ab tak jo uski ek mulakaat ka shuroor hai,
To laazmi hai ye ki use bhi khud pe ghuroor hai.

Meri shakhsiyat me kuch to tera bhi zaroor hai,
Jo dekh sabhi kaheN tera mehboob magroor hai.

Adaayen bhi unki, hain unhi ki tarah ajeeb si,
Dil tod ke pooche jo vo, ki kya haal huzoor hai.

KhataayeN tujhse huiN, par likha to us khuda ne,
Yahi sochun begunaah kaun, kiska kasoor hai.

Tu bhi sang nukha chipi khelti hai saaye ki tarah,
Idhar to kabhi udhar, pass to kabhi kitni door hai.

Yaad ne aapki fir jo dil-o-dimaag pe dastak di hai,
Pakki baat hai ki kisi nek khabar ka zahoor* hai.

*Advent

Vo sawaal pooch ke hume bhi to aazmaye kabhi,
Kahunga manjoor hai,manjoor hai, manjoor hai.

Ye maah-o-mehtaab to saare faqeer haiN, yahaaN,
Inko bhi hui tujhse hi haasil ye tapish ye noor hai.

Andhera kaise ho un raahoN me, unki khaatir to,
Ab har sitaara bhi jugnu ban.ne ko majboor hai.

KyuN mil nahi paate do dil kabhi "taish" unme,
Kissa mohabbat ka yahaan jo bhi mashoor hai.

[naren.786.rajput]

Originally Posted by Taish

Dobara se likhna shuru karne me ek faayeda to jarur hua ki kam se kam ab khayaal aane lage, do din me doosri peshkash le kar haazir hun saamne, aur shayad ab tak ki ye meri sabse lambi peshkash bhi hai, to jyada torcher ke liye maafi maanguNga...


teri bewafaai kal parson ki baat lagti hai,, jo dekhta hun tasveer teri, to barson ki baat lagti hai,, ishq ke bostaa.N(upwan) me aaj sirf kaanton ka chaman hai,, dil laga ke usko todna hi shayad zamaane ka chalan hai,, zindagi me laga jo mushkilon ka mela hai,, na jane kyun har raahi akelaa hai,, ishq kyun dil ki zanjeer ho gayi,, shayad yun "ghayal" hona hi meri taqdeer ho gayi,, tujhse is kadar jo main door ho gaya,, lahoo me kalam dubaa kar chalane ko majboor ho gaya................


haan sach majboor ho gaya..............

bahut hi umda ....



Hum pe ab tak jo uski ek mulakaat ka shuroor hai,
To laazmi hai ye ki use bhi khud pe ghuroor hai.

kyaa khayaal hai .... wah ...

Meri shakhsiyat me kuch to tera bhi zaroor hai,
Jo dekh sabhi kaheN tera mehboob magroor hai.

bahut khoob .... bahut khoob ....

Adaayen bhi unki, hain unhi ki tarah ajeeb si,
Dil tod ke pooche jo vo, ki kya haal huzoor hai.

dil se daad ..... ghayal kar diya ...

KhataayeN tujhse huiN, par likha to us khuda ne,
Yahi sochun begunaah kaun, kiska kasoor hai.

Tu bhi sang nukha chipi khelti hai saaye ki tarah,
Idhar to kabhi udhar, pass to kabhi kitni door hai.

Yaad ne aapki fir jo dil-o-dimaag pe dastak di hai,
Pakki baat hai ki kisi nek khabar ka zahoor* hai.

*Advent

Vo sawaal pooch ke hume bhi to aazmaye kabhi,
Kahunga manjoor hai,manjoor hai, manjoor hai.

Ye maah-o-mehtaab to saare faqeer haiN, yahaaN,
Inko bhi hui tujhse hi haasil ye tapish ye noor hai.

Andhera kaise ho un raahoN me, unki khaatir to,
Ab har sitaara bhi jugnu ban.ne ko majboor hai.

KyuN mil nahi paate do dil kabhi "taish" unme,
Kissa mohabbat ka yahaan jo bhi mashoor hai.

sabhi sher lajawaab hai ..... maza aa gyaa padh ke .... daad qubool kare ....
yu hi likhte rahiye ,,,, sada khush rahiye ....
Naren.

[zainy]

Wah,!!!......bohat khoob lucky ji.....................

[benuro_jiya]

Lucky ji ,
aapki ghazal ne dil loot liya
kai yaadein taza ho gayi isse padh kar

kya tareef kare sare aashar dil ki gahrai ko chu gayi

KhataayeN tujhse huiN, par likha to us khuda ne,
Yahi sochun begunaah kaun, kiska kasoor hai.

Tu bhi sang nukha chipi khelti hai saaye ki tarah,
Idhar to kabhi udhar, pass to kabhi kitni door hai.

mashaallah yeh sher to ghazab hai

Vo sawaal pooch ke hume bhi to aazmaye kabhi,
Kahunga manjoor hai,manjoor hai, manjoor hai.

daad dilse kabool kijiye

take care

[kuhulika]

kya baat hai
ustaad toh tum humeshahi ho....as always tumhari rachnayein mast hoti hai


likhte raho aise hi or ghayal dil ka marham dhundo...or yaar kuch pyar ishq mohabbat per bhi likho


taecaer

[Taish]

Originally Posted by naren.786.rajput

sabhi sher lajawaab hai ..... maza aa gyaa padh ke .... daad qubool kare ....
yu hi likhte rahiye ,,,, sada khush rahiye ....
Naren.

Naren ji shukriya, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko alfaaz pasand aaye, umeed rahegi ki aap aage bhi yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiyega...

[Taish]

Originally Posted by zainy

Wah,!!!......bohat khoob lucky ji.....................

Shukriya zainy ji, aapne mujhe padha aur tareef ki to aapki tareef humare sar pe....

[Taish]

Originally Posted by benuro_jiya

Lucky ji ,
aapki ghazal ne dil loot liya
kai yaadein taza ho gayi isse padh kar

kya tareef kare sare aashar dil ki gahrai ko chu gayi

KhataayeN tujhse huiN, par likha to us khuda ne,
Yahi sochun begunaah kaun, kiska kasoor hai.

Tu bhi sang nukha chipi khelti hai saaye ki tarah,
Idhar to kabhi udhar, pass to kabhi kitni door hai.

mashaallah yeh sher to ghazab hai

Vo sawaal pooch ke hume bhi to aazmaye kabhi,
Kahunga manjoor hai,manjoor hai, manjoor hai.

daad dilse kabool kijiye

take care

aapki daad sar aankhoN pe muhtarmaa, waise jaan kar behad khushi hui ki meri panktiyaaN aapki yaadoN ko taazaa kar paayiN, bas yuNHi aage v saath nibhaate rahiyega....

[Taish]

Originally Posted by kuhulika

kya baat hai
ustaad toh tum humeshahi ho....as always tumhari rachnayein mast hoti hai


likhte raho aise hi or ghayal dil ka marham dhundo...or yaar kuch pyar ishq mohabbat per bhi likho


taecaer

D jhaad pe mat chadhaao, ustaad to chodo aap, abhi tak dhang se shaagird v nahiN ban paaya huN maiN, waise jaan kar mujhe bahut khushi hui ki itne waqt ke baad v aapko mere ehsaash aur alfaaz pasand aaye, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhaati rahiyega...