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Originally Posted by rahnuma
tere bare me mujhko pata to nahi
aadmi mai bhi itna bura to nahi
kab talak mai tujhe maf karta rahun
aadmi hun koi dewta to nahi
kyun nigahen milane se darta hai tu
sach bata tu kahin bewafa to nahi
likhna daqdeer ka mere bas me nahi
nasle adam se hun mai khuda to nahi
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Adab arz hei ,
Jis shayer ko aaj tak Maham parhtee aarahee thee vo kabhi buahat khudsupurdagi liye nazar ata tha , kabhi buahat bekhudi , kabhi talkhee hotee uske ashaar mein kabhi shidat buahat jazbon mein kabhi buahat hidat ehsas mein
magar aaj jis shayer ko parha vo na jazbaat ki rau mein baha nazar aya , na kisi ki yaad mein duba , na hee pyar mein madhsoh ,
ye shayer bara sright fwd nazar aya
bauhat to the point ' matter of fact ' wala insan
jo saaf saaf baat kar raha hai
bina kisi narmi ke kisi chashni ke bina hee vo apni baat keh gaya hei
aur is shayer ka ye andaz se se zyada dil moh le gaya
kyun ke is seedhe saadhe stright fwd sache khare lehje mein baaree mohabat nazar ayee ,
'aar ya paar' walee kaifiyat aur kisi bhi romantic conversation se barh ke ye andaz e bayaan bauhat dil mein utar jata hei ke is mei shidat sachayee hotee hie ,
khub raha apka ye kalaam
aur tamaam kalamon ki maanind
daad haazir hei
qabul kjiye
Maham Azmi