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23rd November 2004, 09:48 AM
hi kunalji bade dino ke baad khani ko aage bhdya hai lekin bhut hi ache roop me badya hai khani to din parti din dilchsp hoti jarhi hai or aage ka haal jane ke liye dil or betab khani me dosti ka roop arjun ki parshani sabko aapne bhut ache dang se pesh kiya hai aage ki khani plz jaldi hi likhna hume intzar rhega
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24th November 2004, 02:02 PM
Hi Pyare Kunal,
Bhai maafi chahunga itna late reply kar raha hu. Par tum to jaante hi ho na kya hua. Hmmmm story ko to bohot hi barhiya twist de diya hai tumne. Aksar 2 parts ke bad mein parhna chhor de ta hu lekin u've got me riveted to my seat. Agey ka ab to besabri se intezaar rahega. Khush raho Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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8th December 2004, 08:38 PM
Kunal Ji,
Bahut Galat Bat hi yeh apki, kaha tha apne ki kal(yesterday) ya aaj mein aap post kar denge yeh story ka next part, but aap ne jhooth bola mujhse  Its really not good kunal Abhi main apse naraz ho jaungi agar apne jaldi se apna vada pura nahi kiya to, pls aap jaldi se next part post kijiye. Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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18th December 2004, 12:40 PM
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sab se pehle clapping kari maine aapki story gajab hai par mujhe sari story ek baar main hi read karni thi par nahin kar payi aapke wazah se arre jaldi post karo aage ki story samjhe yaar tum ek film banao kasam se keh rahi hoon hit ho jayegi aur jaldi agge ki stpry likho warna  bye tumhari pallavi teri asar ki jhalak hun main... aaoun nazar chehre se "palu"... teri seerat ki khanak hun mai... |
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20th December 2004, 07:37 PM
hi all
nidhi, aman bhai , chandni... salim bhai.. aur palavi ... bohat bohat shukriya ... aap sabhi ka .. yaar kya bataoun .. promiss ke bawazood main kahani ko waqt rehte nahi aage badha paya .. beete tyoharon aur bhai ki shadi ne .. mujhe kuch mashroof kar diya .. aur aaj kal kuch kaam bhi jyada hai .,... par main aaj phir ise aage badha raha hun .. nidhi meri dost bohat bohat shukriya ,.. tumne jaisa sath diya .. sach bohat accha laga ... tum besabri se kahani ko padh rahi ho .. khushi hui bohat ,... aur pallavi ... swagat hai tumhara meri is kahani pe .. accha laga ki tum aayi .. aur padhne ki jehmat uthayi meri is koshish ko ... aap sabhi ka shukriya .. jo aapne itna sath diya .. janta hun naraaz bhi hai ,, koshish karounga ki aapko aage naaraz na karun ... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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20th December 2004, 07:42 PM
doston ,
bohat shukirya ... aapke pyar ke liye ... kahani ko kafi samay bad aage badha raha hun .. umeed hai ye bhag padhke aapki shikayaton ko kuch had tak door kar paunga ... aur koshish karounga ki aapko phir se naaraz hone ka mauka na doun ... yahi soch pesh kar raha hun aage ki kahani ... kunal Badalte Rang (Part-6) khair arjun kar bhi kya sakta tha .,,, usne doctor se kaha ki koi umeed hai ya nahi … who bole han jaroor hai ,… ki kisi tarah se unki drinking pe abhi rok laga di jaye … aur medicine se sab kuch kuch dino main normal ho jayega … aur kuch dino ke liye unhe hospital main hi rehna hoga … arjun ne kaha theek hai aap inhe yahin rakhiye … sara kharcha main utha lounga … aniket neb hi arujn ki han main han milayi … raat bohat ho chuki thi … aniket ne arjun se kaha ki ghar jaye .. who ab sambhaal lega … par arjun ne kaha ki nahi use jana chaiye … meghna ko hosh main ane pe uske alawa koi rok nahi payega … ho sakta hai ki wo mujhe dekh ke ruk jaye … aniket ne arjun ki baat man li … aur ghar ke liye rukhati lee… arjun wahin bahar baith gaya … sab kuch shant sa ho gaya .. mahol bhi ek dum naram sat ha .. arjun ne phone ghar pe kar diya tha .. aur keh diya tha ki hospital main hai kisi dost ke pas … par is shant khamosh alam main … ek dil tha jisme itni ravaangi thi ki ek toofan la sake … arjun ke dil-o-dimag pe ek hi khayal chaya hua tha … ki akhir kya hai jo meghna jaisi nazar na uthane wali ladki ko maikhane tak kheech le gaya … bohat socha par uski samajh main kuch na aaya … isi jaddo jehad main subah ho gayi … meghna ko hosh aaya .,.. usne aankhen kholi … aur aise chonki jaise na jane koi aisa samne aa gaya jisse milne ki umeed na thi … aur sach bhi tha .. ki arjun uske samne tha .. jo usne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha … aur pehla word ye hi nikla .. arjun … arjun ne badi narmi se ankhon se jawab diya … han ! … meghna ne poocha tum yahan kaise … arjun ne raat ka poora kissa keh sunaya use .. .. aur poocha ki kyun aise mahol main mili tum mujhe … koi jawab na tha meghna ke pas .. par uski aankhon se aansoo beh nikle the … arjun bhi dil haar gaya .. kuch bhi tha .. uska pehla pyar thi wo… uski aankh ke ansoo arjun ka dil cheer rahe the … itne main doctor aaye … aur arjun se kaha ki .. abhi inka khayal rakhe.. sawalat kuch din bad kar lijiyega … aur inhe ghar le ja sakte hai .. treatment wahin de denge hum … arjun ne document poore kiye .. aur use discharge karwa liya … bahar aaye .. aur poocha ki bolo kahan tehri ho aaj kal … bolo kahan chorun … meghna ne kaha … bas itna keh sakti hun ki main wahan wapas nahi jana chahti .. aur kuch nahi poochna … to arjun ne kaha kahan jaogi … usne kaha kahin bhi .. par us ghar main nahi jana … ur tumhe main waqt aane pe sab bata doungi … arjun bada pareshan ho utha aise kahan chor deta use … apne ghar main akeli ladki ko rakhta to jamane ke dar satane laga use ,… use tab kavita ki yaad aayi … aur foran kavita ke ghar ko chal diya … ghar pahuncha … meghna ko neeche bithaya … aur kavita se milne chala gaya … uncle aunty nahi the ghar main … aniket aur kavita hi the upar … arjun ko yun ek dum dekh ke aniket ne poocha kaise aaya yaar … arjun ne kaha mujhe kavita se kaam hai … kavita boli han bolo… to unse neeche chalne ko kaha arjun ne … teeno neeche aaye … meghna ko dekh aniket chonka … par kavita ne poocha ye koun hai… arjun ne bataya ye wahin hain jinke liye main raat bhar tha hospital main… kavita ne kaha to main kya kar sakti hun isme … arjun ne kaha .. ki ye ab tumhare sath rahengi kuch din ke liye … kyunki apne sath nahi rakh sakta … aur apne ghar nahi jjana chahti ye … kavita ne han bhar di … par poocha … arjun inki tarafdari kyun … arjun ne bataya ki who uski purani dost hai …. Aur sab kuch bad main bata dounga .. kavita ne mana nahi kiya … aur use apne hi kamre main rakhne ko razi ho gayi … par aniket ko ye baat kuch nahi jami … kavita ke jane pe poocha usne .. arjun yaar ye sab kya hai … dekh main janta hun ki meghna koun hai .. par uska teri life main yun aana mujhe accha nahi lag raha .. chahe ye bhi kahe main dar raha hun ki kahin tu badal na jaye to … yahi sahi .. par mera darna sahi hai .. meri behan ki bhi jindgi ka sawal hai … ek bhai ke nazariye se ye sab kaha … par plz ise galat nahi lena … arjun ne kaha .. ki ek jawab hai mere pas .. ki main aisa kuch nahi karounga ki kisi ki jindgi barbad ho jayte … meghna mera kal thi kal hi rahegi .. par han agar upar wale ko manjoor hua to main kuch na kar sakunga .. kaha kuch bhi ho meghna mera pehla pyar hai .. aur meri jindgi ke is faisle ka haq maine use bina mange hi de diya tha .. kyunki ye uske pyar ka haq hai … well main janta hun ki aisa kuch nahi hoga … aur han main kavita se ab kuch nahi chupaunga .. kyunki kal ko main galat sabiit hua to nahi chahta ki kuch galat kar baithe wo .. mere dost tujhse kuch nahi chupaunga … tujhe maloom hai ki maine kavita ko han yun hi nahi kiya … par ha nab main uske liye hi hun … tu chinta mat kar … abhi ye jaroori hai ki meghna theek ho jaye … aniket ko chain na pada tha par who kuch nahi kar sakta tha … aur arjun chala gaya apne ghar … aur meghna kavita ke sath rehne lagi … din beetne lage .. aur meghna theek hone lagi … kabhi kabhi arjun milne bhi aata tha .. kavita bhi khush thi ki … isi bahane arjun se mil pati hai wo.. udhar kavita aur arjun ki shadi main teen hi maheene reh jate hai … aur kavita ke mom dad shadi ki tarayi start kar dete hai … meghna dekhti hai ki ghar main shaadi ki tayari chal rahi hai … aur jake poochti hai kavita se … kya ye tumhari shadi ki tayari hai… kavita ne kaha han … meghna ne kaha tumne bataya nahi kabhi ki tumhari shadi ho rahi hai … kavita ne kaha tumne poocha nahi kabhi …. Khair ab bata do koun hai lucky person … meghna ne kaha … kavita boli hai ek teerandaaz jisne mere dil pe aisa nishana banaya … ki main ghayal hoe bina reh nahi saki… meghna ne kaha accha aisa hai … to naam bhi bata hi do … milana bhi mujhe … personally… kavita boli tum to use janti ho … meghna hanste hue boli accha … koun hai wo … ARJUN… kavita boli… par ye kya .. meghna ke honton pe chuppi cha gayi .. shayad kuch chubh gaya use … boli tumhare teer ne to mujhe maar dala .. kavita hiraan hui .. poocha kya hua … kuch nahi matlab itna bada surprise mila ki main bayan nahi kar sakti kitni khush hun main .. kavita ne kaha … meri dost tum khush nahi hogi to koun hoga .. ek tum hi ho jo use mujhse pehle se janti ho … aur uski bhi dost ho … ye keh gale laga liya meghna ko… meghna ne ek muskan ko honton pe liya … aur wapas chali gayi apne kamre ki taraf… kamre main aayi aur baith gayi … na jane aisa lag raha tha ki bohat serious hai … aur tabhi ek ansoo ki boond chalak gayi uske aankh se … aur kho gayi wo beete samay main … arjun use reh reh kar yaad aa raha tha … aur usne tabhi arjun ko phone kiya … aur kaha ki use arjun se milna hai .. bohat jaldi main … arjun ghabra gaya poocha ki kya bat hai … boli milne pe bataoungi … arjun ne dair na karte hue jake mila usse … aur kavita se poocha ki kahan hai … kavita ne bola ki upar hai .. kyunkya hua … bola bad main bataounga usse kuch kam hai … upar pahuncha … meghna intzaar kar rahi thi uska .. aur bade pyar se boli … ki aao baitho,, arjun bola badi jaldi main balaya tha bolo kya kaam hai … boli arjun aj main tumhe batana chahti hun ki main peechle 3 sal kahan thi … kyun main apne ghar nahi gayi … kyun tumhari baton ka koi jawab nahi tha mere paas … meghna ne aage kehna shuru kiya … shuru karti hun wahi se jahan se tumhe chora maine … tumhe chor ke main delhi se nikli aur kuch ghanton baad main aligarh pahunch gayi… wahan mujhe mere mama ji ka ladka mujhe lene aaya … suresh naam tha uska … main ghar pahunchi .. mom wahin tehri thi … aur mujhe bhi ek kamra wahan rehne ko mil gaya … aur agle uska ek beutition school main uska admission ho gaya … din acche to nahi par kat rahe the .. sab kuch naya tha … har gali .. ghar … log sab kuch …. Aur koi dost bhi nahi … khali time mai main kitabe hi padti thi … mom ne bhi ek job dhound li thi aur din ka kuch hissa mujhe kuch akele hi guajrana hota tha .. khushi ki koi wajah nahi thi .. par main khush rehti aur apne main hi khushiyan dhoundti … mama ji bohat pyar karte the … aur kayi bar sath main baith ke mere sath waqt bhi gujarte … din gujarne lage .. wo hi roz course ke liye jana .. phir bore hona .. par khush rehna .. din ka niyam ho gaya tha … aur isi beech mujhe vishal mila … jo mere hi collage main.. sikhata tha … par shayad meri is khushi pe .. meri muskurahat ko rondne ke liye koi nazre pyasi thi .. jisse main bekhabar thi … aur ek din aisa aaya … ki un nazron ne mere badan pe waar kar hi diya … bat kuch aur se nahi .. ek din akela mujhe dhound liya un nazron ne … who nazre kisi aur ki nahi suresh ki hi thi .. jo mere hi mama ka ladka tha … Saturday tha .. koi ghar main nahi .. roz ki tarah aa gayi main ghar .. par wo pehle se hi mera intzaar kar raha tha … mere kamre main … aur mere jate hi usne darwaja band kar diya .. mere pas aaya main samajh nahi payi .. aur achanak usne mujhe joron se pakd liya … aur mere sath jabardasti karne laga .. main samajh gayi thi .. ghabra gayi thi .. usne mujhe thappad mare .. uske sir pe hawas sawar thi .. mujhe mar mar ke mere muh se khoon nikal diya tha usne … maine kisi tarah se usse khud ko chudaya .. aur darwaje se ja takrayi .. mujhe poori manjil pe daudya usne .. aur bhagte bhaagte main seediyon se gir gayi neeche … par uski hawas kam na hui thi … main uth bhi nahi pa rahi thi .. usse bheek mangne ke alawa koi chara na tha .. par koi asar na tha kisi bat main … main ghisate hue darwaze tak ja pahunchi .. par who na mana … aur mere kareeb badhne laga .. main chillayi … par koi na aaya … aur achanak mere kareeb aake usne mujhe hath jo lagaya main eek bohat dard bhari cheekh lagayi ,…. Meghna kuch dair ko chup si ho gayi … aur arjun bhi sunta hua phir se ek bar wahin suck khada reh gaya …. doston isi ke sath kahani phir ek bar yahin pe rokta hun ….. aage ki kahani jald hi samne laounga . aur han .. agar kuch jagah kuch galti reh gayi ho to .. muafi chahunga aapse ... janta hun ;... ki galti kisi se bhi ho sakti hai .... aapka sath bana rahe umeed karta hun kunal end of part 6 Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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21st December 2004, 02:50 PM
hi kunalji h r u sabse phale to aapka bhut bhut sukriya ki aakhir me aapne khani ko aage badya khani ko itne din late se post karne me laga rhe to hume gussa to bhut aarha tha lekin aapki khani ko padkar saara gussa utar gya realy me bhut hi acha mod diya hai aapne khani ko ab dekho arjun kise jada mhatv deta hai aapne pyar ko ya fir aapne farz ko plz agla bhag jald hi post kare hume intzar rhega
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22nd December 2004, 04:16 PM
Hiya Kunal,
Bhai, humeshaa ki tarha lajawaab kar diya hai tumne aur phir se ek romanchak mor pe laake tum ne end kar diya. Per miya nanne is baar tumhe ziyaada mohallat nahi denge hum. Kahani ko jaldasjald aage barhana ok Aur bhai har anth mein bechara arjun khara ke khara kyu reh jaata hai???  Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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23rd December 2004, 12:05 AM
mere bhai Kunal.....
story ko ek dilchasp mod pe la ke roka hai...... magar shayad ye theek na hua meghna ke saath..... koi aur reason hota to....... jo hai so hai...... vo din vo raaten vo saath chood jaate hain...... kabhi unhe bhi ye vaqt choodega, bhool jaate hain...... bazaar mein pyar ka mol lagate hain..... aur isi tol-mol mein khud nilaam ho jaate hain...... jald hi is mod se aage badenge...... tumhara bhai...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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27th December 2004, 09:44 PM
Well Kunal, kaise ho, anyways this time again I was the first
person to read the story on 21st decmber at 1:30 pm. Again a great twist to the story u have given............ when will you post the next part, i hope this time it would be soon enough Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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27th December 2004, 10:33 PM
nidhi ji....
har baar aap hi padti hain sabse pehle..... ye inayat kabhi hume bhi dijiye..... agla part sabse phle hum padenge....ye vaada hai mere bhai se aur aap se..... khayal rakheyega..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Kunaalji achha kahani hai aur twists bi, jaldi se aage badayiye kahani ko ....
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Mere bhai.....
thoda vakt nikaal ye kahani ko jara aage badaoge..... tumhara bhai..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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26th January 2005, 09:50 PM
kunal jee ,
aaj mmera shyari.com par dusara din hai aur maine pahale din me udaas jee ki kahani padhi jo dil ko jhakjhor gayi aur aaj aapki padhi lekin jara sa nirasha hui ki itni achhi kahani abhi puri nahi hai. aap pls kahani ko aage badhaaye mai kahani aur life ke maamle me bahoot unpatience hoo mujhme dhairya nahi hai is par bhi itani achhi kahani ho to mai jara jyada hi bechain ho jaati hoo. aapse meri request hai ki aap pls apni kahani ko puri karo. garima |
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story age nahi badani to batado hum nahi kahenge........................................... .............................
soch lo ab ag nahi badai to kya hoga Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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Main bhi tang aa gaya hoon..... ab kehna choodo....agar kabhi Kunal ko fursat mili to post kar dega...aur hum sab chup chaap pad ke aage chalenge....ab koi reply nahi....
bye bhai..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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sorry maiN late huN ... aaj dal douNga raat maiN pakka
 maiNe likh liya hai ... bas thoda sa reh gaya hai ... shukriya aap sabka... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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aage badha raha huN ... umeed hai ki aapko kahani acchi lagegui... aur arjun khada kyuN reh jata hai iska jawab bhi kahani ke akhir maiN aapko mil jayega .... shukriya aapka aapka bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th March 2005, 10:37 PM
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shukriya .. well abki dekhte hai koun morcha marta hai ... aapne itna sath diya sach aaj faqra hota hai khud pe ,... ki aise dost mile haiN mujhe ... agla part bhej raha huN padh lijiye ... apka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th March 2005, 10:48 PM
doston ,
bohat shukirya ... aapke apne pan ke liye...aapke pyar ke liye ... kahani ko phir kafi samay bad aage badha raha hun .. umeed hai ye bhag padhke aapki shikayaton ko kuch had tak door kar paunga ... aur koshish karounga ki aapko phir se naaraz hone ka mauka na doun ... pichle kuch din yuN beete ki sans lene ke liye bhi sochna padha ... par ab shayad aapse nata yuN na tootega .. apni maujdgi ke sath aapki is pyari theread ko bhi sajata rahuNga ... yahi soch pesh kar raha hun aage ki kahani aur maiNe abki baar thoda sa jyada bhi likha hai ... ... kunal Badalte Rang (Part-7) Meghna bhi chup si ho gayi thi … par usne aage kehna shuru kiya … tabhi darwaze pe kadkhada hat hui … meghna ne uske hath pe kat khaya aur jhat se darwaza khol diya … bahar aur koi nahi vishal khada tha … jiski samajh main waha ki sari kahani aa gayi … usne suresh ko wahiN rok diya … aur use mara bhi … waqt gujarte hi mama ji bhi ghar a gaye …. Par aur maiNe sari kahani keh sunayi … par suresh ne ulta mujhpe ilzaam laga diya ki maiNe use bhadkaya … aur mere mama ne bade aasani se uski baat man bhi li … maa ko bhi mujhpe yakeen na tha … unka kehna wahi tha … ki teri hi koi kamjori ka nateeja hai ye … khair us din main barbaad hote hote bachi … aur shayad suresh neb hi uske bad meri taraf dekhna band kar diya … bohat ghutan hoti thi wahaN … par majboor thi main bohat … tumhari bhi bohat yaad aati thi .. par main tumhare paas nahi aa sakti thi … maiNe apni padhi ki taraf hi dhayan dena theek samjha … aur dheere dheere… maiNe collage jana bhi shuru kar diya … vishal se meri bohat acchi dosti bhi ho gayi … shayad us poore sehar main mujhe who hi ek aisa banda lagta tha jo mujhe samajhta hai ,… mujhe jaanta hai… din beete gaye … main aur vishal kareeb aate rahe … aur ek din mujhe yakeen ho hi gaya ki main wakai usse pyaar karti huN … uske saath rehna mujhe accha lagta tha … aur usse doori mujhe bechain kar jaati thi … bohat himmat karke main eek din vishal se apne dil ki baat keh hi dali … aur khushi ka thikna tab na raha jab mujhe pata chala … ki wo bhi mujhse pyar karta hai … har din mera khil gaya tha .. aur raat pyar ki khushbu se mehakne lagi thi …. Aksar kehta tha ki shayad koi bohat acche karam kiye honge jot um mili… mere aur vishal ke beech ke fasle ghatte gaye ,… aur ek din hum dono ki seemayeN toot gayi … par mujhe koi dukh na tha is baat ka … pyar mujhe vishal bhi bohat karta tha shayad … aur ek din ye baat suresh ko pata chal gayi … usne meri mom ko sab bata diya … mom ne mujhe bohat maara .. maine kaha ki main usse shadi karma chahati huN … to unhone phir meri pitayi ki … aur mere ghar se nikalne per ok laga di … vishal se na mil saki main kayi din tak .. aur ek din usne mujhe mauka pake phone kiya ,…. Aur milne ke liye bulaya .. aur ye bhi kaha main na gayi to wo apni jaan de dega .. mujhe usse pyara koi na tha … rat ko ek baje main usse milne gayi … aur use sari kahani keh sunayi … aur poocha kya who mujhse shadi karega …. Usne haN kaha .. aur mujhe pyar kiya … par uske pyar ka tareeka badal chukka tha … ek hawas si nazar aati thi uski aaNkhoN main … mujhe roz raat ko usse milne jana hota .. halaNki do teen bar meri pitayio ho gayi par main na mani … us aur vishal bhi mujhe bade alag type ke lagte .. aur ek din maiNe pareshan ho ke keh diy … ki batao kab karoge mujhse shadi … agar aisa hi raha to main ab na aaouNgi … aur tumse sare waste tod douNgi … to usne mujhse saaf keh diya … ki wo mujhse shadi nahi karega … au raise hi rakhna chahata hai mujhe … mere dil ke tukde tukde kar diye usne .. aur chala gaya … main barbaad ho chuki thi ,… jeene ka koi maksad nazar nahi aa raha tha … par main kuch nahi kar sakti thi … maine jeena chor diya tha .. bas roti rehti thi baithe baihe …kya karti ... bas yuN hi rote hue din katte ja rahe the .. par koi kab tak apne aapko yuN rkh sakta hai … waqt jhakam pe ek khal to chada hi deta hai .. mere jhakham bhi bhar gaye the .. par dard kam na hua tha …. Isi beech phir mom & dad ke talaak ke papers khul gaye … aur court main aana jana shuru ho gaya … faisla papa ke haq main gaya .. par mere upar koi faisla nahi ho paya .. mom ko muavza chaiye tha … unhone agli adalat main case dal diya dad ko divorce nahi diya … par mujhse poocha gaya main kahan rehna chahti huN … us sehar main jahan main apna sab kuch gawa chuki thi … wahaN rehna na munkin tha … maine papa ke sath rehna pasand kiya … aur main Mumbai ja pahuNchi papa ke sath rehne.. kyuNki dad ka transfer ho chukka tha kolkata se … ek naye sehar main … naye logon ke beech … phir se apni pehchan ki talaash main … papa se main khush rehti thi … din bhar maiN ghar pe akeli rehti par mujhe sukoon tha wahan ki mujhe yahan koi tention nahi… par mere bhagya main sakoon to kabhi likha hi nahi tha pata chala papa bhi dosri shadi karma chahte hai .. jo ki unke hi office main kaam karti hai … who aksar ghar ati aur mujhse na jane kya kya karati .. mujhe tane dena uski aadat main tha … aur mujhpe aarop lagana uski aadat … khair main phir se udas rehne lagi thi .. koi kaam to tha nahi.. padai karti bhi to kya … par maine baccho ko tution padhana shuru kar diya tha … mera dil behal jata tha un masoom chehroN ko hansta dekh ke … aur apne dil ka sara dard bhool sa jati thi main unke sath … din beette ja rahe the … katte katte do saal beet gaye tumse juda hue … tumhari bohat yaad aati thi par main phir bhi asahay thi tumse mil pane main …par dil pea b bojh kam rehne laga tha … apne upar pachtawa hota tha .. par dil ko samjhana hi mujhe theek lagta .. yuN hi ek din baccho ko khilane ka man hua … society maiN neeche park tha … socha kyuN na sab baccho ko wahaN treet karoo … aur sab baccho ko leke main chal padi neeche … sab ko wahan maine khelne ke liye chor diya aur yun hi tehalne lagi .. baccho ko dekhte dekhte .. aur phir main ek bench pe baith gayi … ek ladki aayi aur baith gayi wahiN .. usne mujhe gaur se dekha aur poocha … nayi rehne aayi ho kya … pehle kabhi dekha nahi tumhe …. Maine jawab diya nahi aaye hue kafi din ho gaye par kabhi bahar nikalne ka time nahi milta … who hansi aur boli kabhi kabhi khud ko bhi waqt dena chaiye ,… maine kaha koi jaan pehchaan nahi na … kiske yahaN jauN . usne hanste hue kaha … arre bas itni si baat to ye lo main huN na pehchaan ke liye .. aur waise bhi meri koi saheli nahi .. collage khatam hone ke baad sabse link toot sa gaya hai … uska naam shikha tha … aur wahiN neeche 2nd floor pe rehti thi wo ...... aur uske baad aana jana shuru ho gaya uska mere yahaaN … mujhse umra main badi thi par meri aur uski acchi jamti thi … kafi time mere sath gujarti … aur apni saari bateN mujhe batati .. aur main bhi … aur meri ek pakki saheli ki tarah lagne lagi mujhe .. mujhe pata chala uska ek aadmi se affair hai jo ki usse 10 ya 12 sal bada hai .. aur uska divorce ho chukka hai uski wife se … ek ladka hai jo hostel main padhta hai … par phir bhi shikha usse pyar karti thi … bohat marta tha shikha ko wo .. halanki shikha ek bohat khoobsoorat ladki thi par tab bhi … won a jane kyuN usse hi pyar karti … main samjhati use par wo yahi kehti jab tujhe ho jayega kisi se tab pata chalega .. ek din yuN hi wo mere ghar aayi hui thi … tabhi door bell baji .. maine darwaza khola to ek bohat khoobsoorat ladka meri nazroN ke samne tha … who bhi mujhe dekh khada reh gaya .. par doosre hi pal poocha usne mujhse … kya shikha ghar par hai ... poocha maine aap kouN to jawab mila ki wo uska bhai hai … maine use andar bulaya to usne bas itna kaha ki use bol dijiye papa bula rahe hai .. pahunch jaye … aur chala gaya … maine shikha ko bata diya aur wo bhi chali gayi kuch dair main .. kayi din beet gaye is baat ko … shikha ka bhai bhi aay din mujhe yahan wahan mil jata .. aur bohat acche se pesh aata .. din bohat acche gujar rahe the … shikha ko soch kar dukh hota tha .. par khushi hoti thi use dekh ki wakai who boaht himmat wali hai … par shayad meri baton ka asar kisi aur par hi ho raha tha … shikha ka bhai mujhme kuch jyada hi intrest rakhta … shikha ke bahane se ghar aata .. bohat hansata .., aur kayi bar kahaniya sunnane lagta … ravi naam tha uska …. Par uski nazar mujh par aa chuki thi is baat se main bekhabar thi … apar kabhi kabhi mehsoos hota tha … aur dheere dheere mujhe bhi wo accha lagne laga tha … uske sath hum ghumne jate .. khoob masti karte … aur ek din usne mujhse apne dil ki baat kahi… maine yuN to use mana kar diya par uski baton ne mujhe ek pal chain se na rehne diya … kayi dino tak maiN talti rahi .. par ek din khud ko na rok saki … aur usko apni kismet main likhne ka faisla kar liya… aur chup chup ke bahar milne lagi usse … din phir ek baar khilne lage the ,… khushiyaN kadnmo main aa gayi thi .. hum dono khoob masti karte .. ravi bohat kharcha karta tha … mere kehne se pehle who cheez mere samne hoti .. samundar kinare hum dono ghanto wade karte .. bate karte … aur kabhi kabhi disco bhi jate …. Ravi boaht hi accha lagta tha mujhe .. uska roz disco jana to tay hota … aur mujhe jab kabhi bhi bula leta wo… ek din socha ki jake usse miluN khud hi surprise douN … main pahuNchi wahaN aur apne sapno ke mehloN ko liye… par mere sapne phir tootne ko tayaar ho chuke the … aur jo wahan dekha to phir se apne ko mitti main mila paya … ravi kisi aur ladki ke sath bahOn main baheN dale naach raha tha … use hath lagata to mujhe chubhan hoti gayi .. aur main ravi ke samne pahuNch gayi .. ravi ke chehre ka rang ud gaya … aur uske samne mujhse keh diya ki wo mujhse pyar nahi karta aur sirf ek dost manta hai .. aur usne ye bat bhi jhutla di ki kabhi usne mujhe propose kiya tha … main reh na saki aur rote hue ghar wapas aa gayi … apni jindgi se nafrat hone lagi thi mujhe … maiNe sari bateN shikha ko keh di .. usne sath mera diya par kya karte hum…. Par dukh sirf yahiN khatam nahi hue… mom aur dad ke beech na jane kya sattlment hua … salon se ladte aa rahe dono main patch up ho gaya … aur moM Mumbai humare sath rehne aa gayi .. mom ne dad ko beeti sari bateN keh daali … au papa ki nazron se bhi gira diya mujhe … bas ek hi sahara thi meri shikha … uske sath hio waqt biitha.. wo drink karne lagi thi .. aur uske gham main apna gham mila main bhi us rah tak ja pahunchi … ek masoom sa chehra sharab main apni hansi dhundne laga … aur kab main uski aadi ho gayi pata nahi chala … jahaN duniya main bewafai ke alawa kuch na mila … ghar main bhi jissmon ka khel dekha … koi apna na tha jahaN main .. bas us nasheeli duniya ke alawa… papa ka transfer delhi ho gaya .. phir yahan aana pada … aur wo lat nahi chor payi …par shayad tumse milane ke liye khuda ne mujhe us jagah tak pahuNchaya .. aur main tumhe us halat main mili … socha na tha yuN miluNgi tumse .. jab pata chala ki tumse yuN mili huN to apnse se naffrat hone lagi … par us din se soch liya tha ki ab ye sab chor dungi … tumhare sath ne jindgi badal di .. main phir se jee uthi … isi liye main apne ghar nahi gayi … aur yahan aake main phir se jee uthi .. jo pyar tumse mila sach phir wo tumare aansoo yaad aa gaye … aur sach jo pyar kahiN dab gaya tha phir se jee utha .. sach arjuN main tumse bohat pyar karti huN … aur jab se pata chala hai tumhari shadi kavita se hone ja rahi hai main phir mar gayi huN ,…. main phir se us rah pe nahi jana chahti.. plz mujhe bacha lo arjun … aur main kuch nahi kehna chahti .. aur meghna jor jor se rone lagi … arjun .. ki bhi aankh se aaNsu beh nikle the … par wo meghna ki bat se hairaan tha .. aur phir rote rote khada reh gaya apni jagah pe … isi ke sath ye part phir yahiN khatam karta huN ... umeed hai aapke views milte raheNge ... jinka intjaar rehta hai... jaroor dijiyega apne comments... aur kuch galtiyan rahi ho kisi bhi roop maiN to muaf kijiyega .. chahe spelling mistake hi kyuN na ho .... (end of part - 7) kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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5th March 2005, 10:14 AM
Kunnu mere bhai....
phir se twist...... main to yahi kahoonga ki Jo ek baar dhoka de sakta hai.....vo phir se de sakta hai..... Arjun ne Kavita ke saath shaadi ka vada kiya hai.....ab vo use daga nahi de sakta..... agar deta hai to ye bhi ek bewafai hogi..... pyar doorion se gar bewafa ho jaaye to vo pyar nahi rehta.....ye to ek rishta hai.....jise kayam rakha padta hai.....aur apne aap pe control...... shayad tum samjh sakoo ki mai kya kehna chahta hoon..... shukriya is kahani ko aage badane ke liye.....ab jaldi jaldi badana.... tumhara bhai........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Pyare Kunal,
Bhai, yakeenan phir ek behtereen kahani ki karhi. Hai, phir ab intezaar karna parhega agey ke hisse ka. Lekin is baar jaldi ha. Arjun ki kashmakash to har hisse mein barh ti hi jaati hai. Is baar bhi aise do raahey par khara hai jaha dono hi rasto mein kisi na kisi ka dil tootne waala hai aur shayad kisi ki jaan bhi jaaye. Hmmm really interestin. Aagey ka besabri se intezaar. Bhai kabhi toh arjun ko bitha bhi diya karo. Humesha anth mein khara rakh ke phir itne din baad continue karte ho  Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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5th March 2005, 07:35 PM
Kya baat hai Bhaiya !
fir se ek naya twist wo bhi kya majedaar hai. aage ki kahani bhi jaldi se likhana wait kar rahi hoo. aapki bahan |
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6th March 2005, 12:37 AM
Hello Kunal,
First of all thanks for takeing the story ahead. Now This time unfortunately i am not the fst onee to read it nor, anyways ki farak painda hai Kunal yar kitne twist hain apki kahani mein????????????????  But bahut hi che hain, matlab unpredictable bilkul hi. Anyways. apne bataya Meghna ko Do bar pyar hua. ek baar vishal se aur phir Ravi se. But that was more of attraction as she was alone and some satisfation from life. I hope i am using the right words and no one takes them in a a wrong sense. Agar usne sacha mein arjun se hi pyar kiya to use Vishhal aur phir Ravi se pyar hi kaise hua. han yeh sach hai ki voh yeh sab hide kar sakti thi ya juth bol sakti thi, but yeh bhi ho sakta hai ki ab bhi woh koi different story bana rahi ho just ffor Arjun, In my view Arjun shud tell her ki She shud concentrate on her studies and he shud marry Kavita, kyonki meghna uska kal thi aur Kavita uska aaj hai. kya pata agar kavita ka bhai Meghna ko sympethise karne lage aur phir meghna ko usi se pyar ho jaye. use to khud hi pyar ki defination nahi mallom Pyar woh nahi jo baar baar kisi aur se hua pyar woh jo baar baar kisi ek se hua Love is not only to fall in love with someone, it means to fall in love with the same person again and again Woh kehte hain pyar tumse tha par phir kisi aur se ho gaya par hum tumse hi pyar karte hain par phir woh kya tha jo tumne us kisi aur se kiya???????????????? If u love someone u can not fall in love with someone else, and if u do either u dont love the fst person or the second Ek gujarish hai apse. pls is bar story ko jaldi se age badhaiyega plsssssssssssssss its a humble request nahi to phir khabar li jayegi. vaise bhi ek to online ho upar se reply bhi nahi kar rahe Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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7th March 2005, 02:09 PM
Hi Kunal,
The stroy is really very good, there are so many twist, when we read it really we feels that its happening. You r really great, but i request u please coming with the next part very soon. |
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my sweet kkunal.............. |
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9th March 2005, 12:39 PM
hi,
my dear kkunal, kaise ho? aapne jo kahani yaha post ki hai, woh wakai kabile tarif hai, sach main yaha is kahani padhte padhte dil bhar bhi aata hai, aapne to 7 parat likhe hai, bataiye baki kab likhoge, are ARJUN ki halat dekhi nahi jati, meghna ke liye bhi dil bhar aata hai, usne jo halat dhai hai, par jab ARJUN ne MEGHNA ko dil ki baat kahi tab MEGHNA ke mann main us ke liye pyaar nahi tha na!! aur jab aaj KAVITA ARJUN se sacche dil se, dil-o-jaan se chahti hai, unki sagai ho chuki hai, aur shaadi bhi honewali hai, aur ye baat jab ki MEGHNA ko pata hai, to MEGHNA ne phir arjun se kaha ki................ @@@@ sach arjuN main tumse bohat pyar karti huN … aur jab se pata chala hai tumhari shadi kavita se hone ja rahi hai main phir mar gayi huN ,…. main phir se us rah pe nahi jana chahti.. plz mujhe bacha lo arjun … aur main kuch nahi kehna chahti .. @@@@ ab lagta hai ki gar ARJUN ne MEGHNA ko bure raste par jane se bachane ke liye KAVITA ko choda to uska kya hoga? ARJUN ke inkaar karne par uski jo halat hui thi, aur ab to sagai bhi hui hai, mere pyaare kkkunal jaldi kahani ka agla part likho yaar, KAVITA ki side isliye nahi le rahi hu, ki mera naam kavita hai, isliye ki wo ARJUN se bahot pyaaar karti hai.................... agli post ka intzzar rahega................ swwet aashi....................................... kkunal u r the BEST................. to ab pata nahi ARJUN kya kahega, ye kahani main itne tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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10th March 2005, 10:11 AM
Kkunalji,
Apne issbaar hume bahot intzaar karvaay asha karti hoo iss baar aisa nahee hoga, Sonakshi |
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16th March 2005, 03:13 PM
hi kunalji bhut dino ke baad aapne khani ko aage bhadya hai lekin chlo der se hi shi aage to likha bhut acha laga padkar lekin plz aage se aap itna let mat karna ok
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24th March 2005, 06:49 PM
Doston.....
pehli dafa to nahi kahoonga....lekin ye vakya kahin dohrana na pade...... ki ek jije ko uske saale sahab ne peeta hoo..... Kunnu..... ab agar jaldi post nahi ki to khair nahi......samjhe ..... tumahra bhai.....ya phir saala..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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24th March 2005, 11:13 PM
Kunal Agar kahani nahi age badhai to.....................
:Jaldi karna varna.................................. Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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26th March 2005, 07:17 PM
hmmm to kahani yaha tak aa pahunchi........
mazaa aaya par ek do parts aur hote to aur mazaa aata aur tumne firse mahine mein ek hi post dali kahani ki....agar apne vachan ki tarah harroz ek dalte to jo main saalon baad yahan aayi to puri kahani padhne ko milti. na..... jaldi likhna...aur aman bhai aap kyun bichare kunal ko yeh jija jija kehke satate hain....agar woh gussa ho gaya to.... kunal jaldi.... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th March 2005, 12:20 PM
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bat yun hai ki ab Roopali meri behan ho gayi hai to vo khud hi mujhe saala bolta hai..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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28th March 2005, 06:29 PM
heeeeeeeeeeeee
agar kunal ne kaha hain to fir theek hain....aaap usse jija hi bulaye................. Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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21st May 2005, 12:14 AM
Hi Kunal,
As usual bahut der lagadi apne story contoinue karne mein..kuanl thik hai bahut busy ho par itni stories padh li par tumhari abhi tak khatam nahi hui story.pls yar waiting for the others parts to come Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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