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aashiqi ke wo pal -
5th January 2005, 05:44 PM
Mohhabat ke phsane phir dil me aayenge .
hamari aashiqi me pal suhane bahut aayenge kisi aur ki nazar se na kabhi samjhana rishtey me na kuch rahega baki.......... na hi hum dono kuch bacha payenge. Jab jab hamne kaliyon ko chaha jane kyon kanto ne daaman tham liya ........ humne tumse ki itni mohhabat jo is kadar tumne nigahon se gira diya… tumhe chahte rahe saanso se badkar……….. sajaya sheeshe ke khwaabo me… jane kya nasha tha teri mohhabat ka kudh hi un sheesho par kehar gira liya aaj bhi wo lamhe yaad hain …. Kisse shikayaton ke silsile yaad hain Saanso me basi teri mehak se roobroon hote hain rojmaraan shayad usi pe massavoor ja bachi hain meri jaan. Jab jab kaliyon ko chaha Jane kyon kaanto ne daaman tham liya Humne tumse ki itni mohhabat Tumne nigahon se gira diya. |
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5th January 2005, 07:54 PM
teri shayri mein itna dard ki aankhon se aanssoo chaalak gaye. wanna reply u here
kya kya na japhaie dil pe sahi, par tumse koi shikwa na kiya is jurm ko bhi shamil kar lo,mere massom gunaahon mein dil todne wale dekh ke chal, hum bhi to khade hai rahoon mein ulfaat ki nayi manzil ko chala, yu bhahein daal ke bahoon mein jab chandni raaton mein, khud hum se kiya ikrare wafa phir aaj kyo hai hum begaane, teri behreham nigaho mein tum bhi ho wahi, hum bhi hai wahi,yeh aapni aapni kismaat hai tum khel rahe ho khushiyo mein,hum doob gaye hai aaho mein. well i hope humari yeh ek choti si kosish aapko achi lage. |
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5th January 2005, 11:27 PM
Dost samridh,
aap ne to aap ka Dil samne rakh diya aise lag raha hai.... Sach mano dost aap ne kaafi accha likha hai.... Woh dard bhara hai is shayri mein ki uska mein andaza laga nahi sakta.... Keep writing..... Looking ahead to see more from u...... Best luck my friend..... Bye, Take care.. Have a wonderful time.... : : Dost har lamha saath tumhare hai hum : : Listen to your mind...but follow your heart. "Anyone who believes sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain." ---------------------------------------------- : : Yogesh : : |
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6th January 2005, 12:58 AM
wah samridh!!! wah!!
humne ye ek sher yahaan pe post kiys tha par shaayad appne padhaa na ho isliye phir se ek baar aap hi ke liye.... jaane kyun aaj dil bohot bhaari hai.. shishe sa jaise kuch choobh raha ho mann mein... kal tak to sirf khushiyaan hi khushiyaan thi.... phir aaj kyun rote hain gham mein..... keep writing!! *kru* dil to dhadak ta tha sirf usi ke liye, par meri hi dhadkane thi jo un tak na paunch saki.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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