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Question Mera Ateet(Plz read it once) - 29th March 2007, 09:40 AM
Hiiii to all

Shukarguzar hun apka jo apne mere nagmo ko saraha. apke sahmne ek nazrana pesh karna chahta hu jo sach mein hi apke dil ko dehla ke rakh dega. Maine jab ise pada to maano yeh mujhe har lafz mein se kuch na kuch keh raha ho. ab apke nazar kar raha hun. umeed hai ki apko pasand ayega!!!!

"Muddat ho gayi un tanhayion ko guzre, aaj bhi in aankhon mein woh khamoshiyan kyon hai,
Chun chun kar jiski yaadon ko apne jeevan se nikala maine, mere dil par aaj bhi uski hukumat kyon hai,
Tod diya jisne yakeen mohabbat se mera, woh shaks aaj bhi pyaar ke kaabil kyon hai,
Raas na aayi jisko chahat meri, Aaj bhi woh mere din aur raat mein shaamil kyon hai,
Khatam ho gya jo rishta woh aaj bhi saans le raha hai, mere vartmaan mein jeevit woh aaj bhi mera ateet kyon hai"

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Hiiii to all

Shukarguzar hun apka jo apne mere nagmo ko saraha. apke sahmne ek nazrana pesh karna chahta hu jo sach mein hi apke dil ko dehla ke rakh dega. Maine jab ise pada to maano yeh mujhe har lafz mein se kuch na kuch keh raha ho. ab apke nazar kar raha hun. umeed hai ki apko pasand ayega!!!!

"Muddat ho gayi un tanhayion ko guzre, aaj bhi in aankhon mein woh khamoshiyan kyon hai,
Chun chun kar jiski yaadon ko apne jeevan se nikala maine, mere dil par aaj bhi uski hukumat kyon hai,
Tod diya jisne yakeen mohabbat se mera, woh shaks aaj bhi pyaar ke kaabil kyon hai,
Raas na aayi jisko chahat meri, Aaj bhi woh mere din aur raat mein shaamil kyon hai,
Khatam ho gya jo rishta woh aaj bhi saans le raha hai, mere vartmaan mein jeevit woh aaj bhi mera ateet kyon hai"

Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh

Hello Jasdeep Ji ...aaj aapki kaafi puraani post padhi ...aur iaska dard jaise dil ko chhu gaya ....

Jo mitta kar bhi mittaaya na jaaye .....jise tod kar bhi toda na jaaye .....aur bhool kar bhi jise bhulaaya na jaaye ..wohi rishta to sachcha rishta hota hai na ??? ....isi ko to pyaar kahete hai .....chaahe kisi bhi rishte ke liye ho.

par ummid karti hoon ki jo bhi rishta hai wo thik ho jaaye....aur fir se ek baar uan rishton mai pyaar ki khushbu mahek ne lage.....aur rishte har dum aapki zindagi mai pyaar ke rang bikhaire.

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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Thumbs up wah - 27th September 2007, 11:51 AM
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Hiiii to all

Shukarguzar hun apka jo apne mere nagmo ko saraha. apke sahmne ek nazrana pesh karna chahta hu jo sach mein hi apke dil ko dehla ke rakh dega. Maine jab ise pada to maano yeh mujhe har lafz mein se kuch na kuch keh raha ho. ab apke nazar kar raha hun. umeed hai ki apko pasand ayega!!!!

"Muddat ho gayi un tanhayion ko guzre, aaj bhi in aankhon mein woh khamoshiyan kyon hai,
Chun chun kar jiski yaadon ko apne jeevan se nikala maine, mere dil par aaj bhi uski hukumat kyon hai,
Tod diya jisne yakeen mohabbat se mera, woh shaks aaj bhi pyaar ke kaabil kyon hai,
Raas na aayi jisko chahat meri, Aaj bhi woh mere din aur raat mein shaamil kyon hai,
Khatam ho gya jo rishta woh aaj bhi saans le raha hai, mere vartmaan mein jeevit woh aaj bhi mera ateet kyon hai"

Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh
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27th September 2007, 01:50 PM
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Aapne logo ne isse padha aur tareef ki iske liye bahut bahut shukriya....
Lekin main iske saath NOT MINE likhna bhool gaya tha......

Waise maine isse post karne se pehle yeh likha tha ke maine isse kahi se padha hai....

Par aap logo ki daad ke liye shukriya.......


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Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi
Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki
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27th September 2007, 03:27 PM
jasdeep kaise ho.....bahut dino se koi msg nahi...koi pm nahi...kaya jayada busy ho gaye ho ????

aapne bahut acchey ahsaas hamarey saath share kiye haiN.....sach meiN dil ko chu gaye...yu hi likhtey rahe...kush rahiye

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28th September 2007, 02:17 PM
Hello Jasdeep ji,

jisne likha uske liye

is dard ka ek hee jawab nazar aata hei mujhe..ki jo log dil se pyar karte hei unke dil par kisi aur ka raaj ho jata hei..yani koi aakar unke dil ko rent par le leta hei

par jo log aatma ki gehraai se pyar karte hei wo hamaesha tadapte rehte hei..
wo pyar to kisi ko bhi kar sakte hei ..par pyar ki chahat sirf ek se karte hei.

aur ye banda unn logo mei se hei jo..........ruh ki gehraai se pyar karte hei.

words uss dard ko kam nahi kar sakte na hee kuch tarif us dard ko kam kar sakti hei...
but itna zaroor hei ki
dard ka hadh se guzarna to abhi baaki hei..
tune to bewafai karli ...mera bewafa hona abhi baki hei..



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Hiiii to all

Shukarguzar hun apka jo apne mere nagmo ko saraha. apke sahmne ek nazrana pesh karna chahta hu jo sach mein hi apke dil ko dehla ke rakh dega. Maine jab ise pada to maano yeh mujhe har lafz mein se kuch na kuch keh raha ho. ab apke nazar kar raha hun. umeed hai ki apko pasand ayega!!!!

"Muddat ho gayi un tanhayion ko guzre, aaj bhi in aankhon mein woh khamoshiyan kyon hai,
Chun chun kar jiski yaadon ko apne jeevan se nikala maine, mere dil par aaj bhi uski hukumat kyon hai,
Tod diya jisne yakeen mohabbat se mera, woh shaks aaj bhi pyaar ke kaabil kyon hai,
Raas na aayi jisko chahat meri, Aaj bhi woh mere din aur raat mein shaamil kyon hai,
Khatam ho gya jo rishta woh aaj bhi saans le raha hai, mere vartmaan mein jeevit woh aaj bhi mera ateet kyon hai"

Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh
   
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nice - 28th September 2007, 05:39 PM
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Hiiii to all

Shukarguzar hun apka jo apne mere nagmo ko saraha. apke sahmne ek nazrana pesh karna chahta hu jo sach mein hi apke dil ko dehla ke rakh dega. Maine jab ise pada to maano yeh mujhe har lafz mein se kuch na kuch keh raha ho. ab apke nazar kar raha hun. umeed hai ki apko pasand ayega!!!!

"Muddat ho gayi un tanhayion ko guzre, aaj bhi in aankhon mein woh khamoshiyan kyon hai,
Chun chun kar jiski yaadon ko apne jeevan se nikala maine, mere dil par aaj bhi uski hukumat kyon hai,
Tod diya jisne yakeen mohabbat se mera, woh shaks aaj bhi pyaar ke kaabil kyon hai,
Raas na aayi jisko chahat meri, Aaj bhi woh mere din aur raat mein shaamil kyon hai,
Khatam ho gya jo rishta woh aaj bhi saans le raha hai, mere vartmaan mein jeevit woh aaj bhi mera ateet kyon hai"

Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh
jasdeep ji sat sri akaal.....aapki koshish behad achi laggi har khyaal dil ke kareeb raha....bhut dil se likha gyaa ye kalaam dil ko chhu gyaa......yunhi likhte rahiyega......raj.....

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Smile frnd 4 ever - 30th September 2007, 03:32 PM
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Hiiii to all

Shukarguzar hun apka jo apne mere nagmo ko saraha. apke sahmne ek nazrana pesh karna chahta hu jo sach mein hi apke dil ko dehla ke rakh dega. Maine jab ise pada to maano yeh mujhe har lafz mein se kuch na kuch keh raha ho. ab apke nazar kar raha hun. umeed hai ki apko pasand ayega!!!!

"Muddat ho gayi un tanhayion ko guzre, aaj bhi in aankhon mein woh khamoshiyan kyon hai,
Chun chun kar jiski yaadon ko apne jeevan se nikala maine, mere dil par aaj bhi uski hukumat kyon hai,
Tod diya jisne yakeen mohabbat se mera, woh shaks aaj bhi pyaar ke kaabil kyon hai,
Raas na aayi jisko chahat meri, Aaj bhi woh mere din aur raat mein shaamil kyon hai,
Khatam ho gya jo rishta woh aaj bhi saans le raha hai, mere vartmaan mein jeevit woh aaj bhi mera ateet kyon hai"

Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh
Aadab jasdeep ji,
kaise hain aap?

wah wah kya baat hai jasdeep ji,
kya kahe hum aapse?

sach yakin maniye is nazam ne hamare dilko chhu liya,

bohot hi pyarisi koshish aapne post ki hai,
jise padh kar ye mehsus hua,ke nazmo me b jaan hoti hain,

thnx

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30th September 2007, 11:17 PM
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Hiiii to all

Shukarguzar hun apka jo apne mere nagmo ko saraha. apke sahmne ek nazrana pesh karna chahta hu jo sach mein hi apke dil ko dehla ke rakh dega. Maine jab ise pada to maano yeh mujhe har lafz mein se kuch na kuch keh raha ho. ab apke nazar kar raha hun. umeed hai ki apko pasand ayega!!!!

"Muddat ho gayi un tanhayion ko guzre, aaj bhi in aankhon mein woh khamoshiyan kyon hai,
Chun chun kar jiski yaadon ko apne jeevan se nikala maine, mere dil par aaj bhi uski hukumat kyon hai,
Tod diya jisne yakeen mohabbat se mera, woh shaks aaj bhi pyaar ke kaabil kyon hai,
Raas na aayi jisko chahat meri, Aaj bhi woh mere din aur raat mein shaamil kyon hai,
Khatam ho gya jo rishta woh aaj bhi saans le raha hai, mere vartmaan mein jeevit woh aaj bhi mera ateet kyon hai"

Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh
Bahut khoob Jasdeep ji...

Dard se bhare aapke yeh ehsaas dil ko choo gaye..

Dua humesha yehi rahegi, ki aap humesha khush rahein!

Take Care..

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