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Punjabi Muqaabla!!! - 26th December 2010, 05:21 AM

Pyare dostan nu mera pyar, salaam, te dua...

Shaayad tussi saare jaande hi hounge ki hindi di ghazal of the month, kaafi der to chal rahi hai, jis karke mainu vi laggya ki aapan vi punjabi vich idan da hi kuj kariye..

Tuhaade saareya di raaye te manjoori di lod hai.

Eh muqaabla sirf apne saareyan layi ik eho jahi koshish hovegi, jidde ch aapa saare vadiya to vadiya likhan di koshish kar sakiye.

Eh muqaable de kuj niyam vi honge, te tareeke vi. Kuj niyam main neeche likh rahi haan, te je kar tuhaanu vi kise nu kuj vi kehna hai, ya koi sujhaav dena hai, taan jii aaya nu.

Punjabi Muqaable de niyam...
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1. Punjabi ch hona jaroori ae, te je kar tussi punjabi script ch likh rahe ho, taan ode naal simple english script vich vi post karna pauga.

2. Tuhaanu saareyan nu ik title ditta jaaunga, jo ki thodi kavita da base hounga. Ode oopar hi tussi apni rachna likhni ae.

3. Muqaable de vijeta nu poll raahi chunya jaavega.

4. Saareyan ne apni creation sab to pellan mainu pm karni ae. Ae mahine di 15 tareek to pellan ho jaana chaahida ae, kyunki mahine di 15 to baad os mahine di entry band ho jaavegi, te navi entry poll vich nahi aa sakegi.

5. Jo vi tussi likho, oh bilkul nawa, te tuhada apna hona chaahida ae, pehlan to kitte vi publish nahi hona chaahida ae.

6. Ik vaar muqaable di entry pejjan to baad, ode ch koi fer badal nahi ho sakda.

7. Muqaable nu sticky thread bana ke pesh kitta jaavega...

8. Poll te muqaabla sirf moderator hi post kar sakde ne, je kar tussi aap apni tarfo post karna chaahoge taan oh muqaable ch mannya nahi jaavega. Filhaal, sirf main hi eh muqaabla shuru karan di koshish kar rahi hai, je kar hor koi moderator vi ede ch hissa lain ge, tuhaanu dasseya jaavega.

9. Sirf ohi members muqaable ch hissa lai sakde ne, jinna di 100 posts to jyada hun.


Halle taa e hi niyam dyaan ch hun, je agge ja ke kuj hor niyam jaroori lageya to o vi tuhaade saareya nu dassya jaavega.

Filhaal tussi saare apni raaye naal nivazish karo ki eh Punjabi Muqaabla da idea tuhaanu saareyan nu keho jya lagya. Je kar tuhaade saareyan di manjoori hoyi taan Jan 2011, to eh muqaabla shuru kar devaange.

Jiyonde Vasde Raho
~Priya




"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

   
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Pyare dostan nu mera pyar, salaam, te dua...

Shaayad tussi saare jaande hi hounge ki hindi di ghazal of the month, kaafi der to chal rahi hai, jis karke mainu vi laggya ki aapan vi punjabi vich idan da hi kuj kariye..

Tuhaade saareya di raaye te manjoori di lod hai.

Eh muqaabla sirf apne saareyan layi ik eho jahi koshish hovegi, jidde ch aapa saare vadiya to vadiya likhan di koshish kar sakiye.

Eh muqaable de kuj niyam vi honge, te tareeke vi. Kuj niyam main neeche likh rahi haan, te je kar tuhaanu vi kise nu kuj vi kehna hai, ya koi sujhaav dena hai, taan jii aaya nu.

Punjabi Muqaable de niyam...
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1. Punjabi ch hona jaroori ae, te je kar tussi punjabi script ch likh rahe ho, taan ode naal simple english script vich vi post karna pauga.

2. Tuhaanu saareyan nu ik title ditta jaaunga, jo ki thodi kavita da base hounga. Ode oopar hi tussi apni rachna likhni ae.

3. Muqaable de vijeta nu poll raahi chunya jaavega.

4. Saareyan ne apni creation sab to pellan mainu pm karni ae. Ae mahine di 15 tareek to pellan ho jaana chaahida ae, kyunki mahine di 15 to baad os mahine di entry band ho jaavegi, te navi entry poll vich nahi aa sakegi.

5. Jo vi tussi likho, oh bilkul nawa, te tuhada apna hona chaahida ae, pehlan to kitte vi publish nahi hona chaahida ae.

6. Ik vaar muqaable di entry pejjan to baad, ode ch koi fer badal nahi ho sakda.

7. Muqaable nu sticky thread bana ke pesh kitta jaavega...

8. Poll te muqaabla sirf moderator hi post kar sakde ne, je kar tussi aap apni tarfo post karna chaahoge taan oh muqaable ch mannya nahi jaavega. Filhaal, sirf main hi eh muqaabla shuru karan di koshish kar rahi hai, je kar hor koi moderator vi ede ch hissa lain ge, tuhaanu dasseya jaavega.

9. Sirf ohi members muqaable ch hissa lai sakde ne, jinna di 100 posts to jyada hun.


Halle taa e hi niyam dyaan ch hun, je agge ja ke kuj hor niyam jaroori lageya to o vi tuhaade saareya nu dassya jaavega.

Filhaal tussi saare apni raaye naal nivazish karo ki eh Punjabi Muqaabla da idea tuhaanu saareyan nu keho jya lagya. Je kar tuhaade saareyan di manjoori hoyi taan Jan 2011, to eh muqaabla shuru kar devaange.


Jiyonde Vasde Raho
~Priya

amazing no reply.....

plzz go ahead.... and start .............

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22nd January 2011, 12:07 PM

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amazing no reply.....

plzz go ahead.... and start .............

Without everyone's support there's no point starting it. I am still waiting for everyone's reply..



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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18th February 2011, 12:21 PM

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bahut hi badia proposal hai fatafat shuru karo..............

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6th March 2011, 12:11 AM

Pali ji, te Rajinder ji...

eh sirf do chaaran naal shuru nahi keeta ja sakda, es kar ke main poll di date hor vada ditti ae, te umeed kardi haan, ki chetti hi baaki saare ehnu tavajju deinge.

Tuhaada dohaan da ttanvaad.

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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chahat ji ...gud proposal...mein vi tyar haan tusin shuru kro
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9th March 2011, 09:59 PM

Priya ji

Aadaab

Tusi qadam wadaao ussi tuwade naal haan ji

bahuat ee wadia vichaar hai ji

muqablaa shuroooooooooooo karo ji


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Shamaa ka hi kyuN muqaddar hai raat bhar jalnaa.

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Dil jalaa ke poochhte haiN badii masoomiyat se woh.
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16th March 2011, 02:19 PM

Chahat JI

bahut hi slahunjog qadam hai. Main tuhade naal haa.
meri taa eh bahut chir to tammana si ki kuch is tarah da hona chahida hai.

Tusi shuru karan ja rahe ho bahut hi wadhia gall hai g.

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Ik behtar shuraa^t Chahat G....Eh SDC te h shuru ho sakda ve
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