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"Bas Yahi Hai Dosti" (Belated Friendship Day's) |
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"Bas Yahi Hai Dosti" (Belated Friendship Day's) -
10th August 2007, 11:15 AM
Pyaare dosto aaj phir se haazir hoon aap sab ke sahmne.
“Friendship day” ke mauke par maine kuch likhne ki koshish ki thi par kuch lines likh kar ruk gaya tha aur wohi lines maine isi parivaar ki sabki pyaari member Gudia G ko sunayi thi aur jaise ke aap sab waakif hai unke ehsaason se, unke shabdon se, bas unhone in lines ke aage bahut achhi lines likhi hai aur isse mukammal kiya hai. Main isse aap sab ke sahmne rakhna chahunga…. Sapano mein jo dekhi thi kabhi, Wo haqeeqat hai dosti. Ki hogi kuch achchhaaiyaan maine, Jiski keemat hai yeh dosti. Hui uski inaayat ki, Humaari zindagi mai shaamil hai dosti. Khushiyaan hi khushiyaan faili hai har lamha, Jiski niyaamat hai dosti. Jiski badaulat dagte nahi kabhi kadam hamare, Wo saathi hai dosti. Jahaa andheron mein bhi ujiyaala dikh jaaye, Woh roshani ki kiran hai dosti. Aankhon se behte aansuon mein bhi khushiyaan banke Chaand Taare Tim-Timaaye, Wo saugaat hai dosti. Har rishtey ki jo buniyaad banaaye, Wo shabd hai yeh dosti. Har mushkil mein jo saath nibhaaye, Wo ek rishta hai dosti. Jiski sachchaai se kaayam hai jahaan mai roshani sachchaai ki, Wo naam hai dosti. Jahaa hota hai imtehaan Bhagt aur Bhagwaan ke rishton ka, ”Gudia” aur "Jasdeep" Us jahaan mein har imtehaan se guzar leti hai yeh dosti. Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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10th August 2007, 03:00 PM
bahot khoob likha hei jasdeep ji.
sirf dosti ek aisa rishta hei jo sabse jyada khoobsurat hei. dosti wo lamha hei...jisme ham apne saarei gam bhul jate hei dosti wo jasba hei jo hamei ek taqat deta hei ham apne dil ki baat kisi se keh sake ya na kahei...par saccha dost..bina kahei sun leta hei.. Regards, Tarun |
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nice -
10th August 2007, 03:21 PM
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Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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10th August 2007, 04:48 PM
VERY NICE JASDEEP AND GUDIAJE.....aap dono ne dosti ke ehsaas ko bahut acche se pesh kiya hain................
mausam  Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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10th August 2007, 05:07 PM
bahut khub jasdeep ji and gudia ji. bahut aarse k baad hai humne aapko, jasdeep ji, par kya khub likha hai. aishe ehsaason ko lafzom mein likhna baht muskil hai, aur apne to en shabdon ko, bahut hi khoobsurti mein paroya hai. aapke yeh ehsaas dil k bahut kareeb hain. aur Gudia ji ne b bahut acha saat diya hai aapka. yuhin likte rahein aur khush rahein.
aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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27th September 2007, 07:36 AM
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Hello Jasdeep ji, Dair se aane ke liye aapse maafi chaahate hai. Aapne jo likha hai wo kaabile tareef hai ..humne to bas sirf chand lafzon ko add kiya hai ..par Buniyaad to aap hi ki rakhi hui hai ...... Aur gar aapke ehsaas na hote to hum to ek lafz bhi likh nahi paate iasme. Aur iasi ke saath hum yeh duaa bhi karte hai ki aap jaise dost is duniya mai har kisi ko mile ..... aur bhagwaan ji humaari dosti par apani rahem nazar banaaye rakhe. Yunhi likhate rahiyega .... Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe, Aapki Dost: Gudia Jay Ambe. Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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4th August 2008, 10:20 AM
Happy Friendship Day!!!!!!!!
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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4th August 2008, 02:09 PM
wow....kitna accha topic liya aapne...DOSTI...sach mein jasdeep bahut pyara ahsaas hai yeh, accha laga aapke aur gudia ke ahsaao.n ko padna....yeh dosti hamseha kayaam rahe....ameen
yoon hi likhtey raho kush raho god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th August 2008, 04:13 PM
Aap ne suna hai? nahi suna? Waqai nahi suna?
CNN pe? BBC pe? Ptv? Geo? Nahi? Fm 100 pe? Fm 103, 89, 101? in pe nahi suna? Ok. Listen. " I Miss U". |
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5th August 2008, 09:51 AM
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Waise to yeh last year hi daala tha abhi to phir se wohi din aya to maine isse repeat kar diya. Lekin aapko acchha laga aur aapne tareef ki uske liye bahut bahut shukriya. Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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