Quote:
Originally Posted by Richa Awasthi
kal ka sab kuch
bhoga anbhoga yaad karti hun
aane wale kal ka
vivran sabhi taiyar karti hun
sara pal beet-ta hai
kal aur aane wale pal ke liye
sara din beet-ta hai
kuch bigde ko sawarne me
jab kabhi yun hi hoti hun
sochti hun aaj ke bare me
jisse main judi hun
jo kabhi mujhse alag nhi hai
kitna adhbud hai ye aaj
jo na kal ke liye na aane wale kal ke liye
kabhi koshish se hi sahi
main,sirf aaj se milna chahti hun......
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to be really Honest I am not sure whether you have taken any inspiration for the above lines of any other poet or otherwise.. But I am colpletely impressed with the last 4 lines..
Kitna Adbhud hai yeh Aaaj,
Jo Naa kal ke liye hai, na Aaane wale Kal ke Liye hai ...( Excellent, Excellent..)
Koshish se hi sahi, mai Sirf Aaaj Se Milna Chahati hoon...( Awesome Thought... Again Excellent...)
Intni Khoobsoorat lines likhi hai jo mai kabhi padh raha tha from the Book "Power of Now" or Power of present..Yeh Bahot badi taqat hai ki koi Aaaj ko Jeeyee.. I am Impressed...!!!!