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Arrow Qisse jafaa ke unnki mash-hoor ho gaye haiN - 17th January 2015, 10:08 PM
Muazizeen dostoN, Aadaab..!

Bohot dinoN se koshish kar raha hooN apne ehsasaat ko beh'r mein band karne ki, lekin nahi ho paaye.
Toh haar kar aapke hawale kar raha hooN, bardasht kar lijiyega.
Mods aur sho'ra hazraat se istidaah hai ke iss aib ko nazar andaaz kar ke sirf ehsasaat ki jaanib jaayeiN. Beh'r bhi seekh jaunga aapka saath raha toh.


Qisse jafaa ke unnki, mash-hoor ho gaye haiN
Sang-e-koo-e-yaar bhi maghroor ho gaye haiN

Yoom-e-azl se ishq meiN haiN zillateiN bhi saath
Dastkashii-o-berukhii ab dastoor ho gaye haiN

Yoom-e-azl= The beginning of the world/aghaaz/ibtidaah
Dastkashi= The break up of a relation/Taa'luq toRna

Insaaf kii tijaarat hogii, rawaaN saal meiN bhi
Mashware siyaasi kuch phir manzoor ho gaye haiN

Takhfeef jo huyii hai mere ghar meiN roshnii kii
Khair khwaah-o-humsafar sab door ho gaye haiN

Takhfeef= Reduction/Kami

Aaqibat ba-khair ho, ahl-e-chaman kii 'Aashna'
Hum toh tark-e-gulshan ko majboor ho gaye haiN

Aaqibat= Consequences/Aakhirat/Anjaam

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17th January 2015, 10:43 PM
Sagar ji namaskar!

Aap itna achchha likhte hain, hum to aapke kayal ho gaye hain!

Bahut shubhkaamnaaein humari or se.

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Smile Shukriya - 17th January 2015, 11:41 PM
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Sagar ji namaskar!

Aap itna achchha likhte hain, hum to aapke kayal ho gaye hain!

Bahut shubhkaamnaaein humari or se.

Mann Saahab, Namaskar !

Aapko meri koshish pasand aayi uskeliye aapka bohot bohot shukriya.
AayiNda bhi saath dete rahiyega.
hausla afzaayi keliye ek baar phir se tah-e-dil se shukriya.

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18th January 2015, 01:53 AM
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Muazizeen dostoN, Aadaab..!

Bohot dinoN se koshish kar raha hooN apne ehsasaat ko beh'r mein band karne ki, lekin nahi ho paaye.
Toh haar kar aapke hawale kar raha hooN, bardasht kar lijiyega.
Mods aur sho'ra hazraat se istidaah hai ke iss aib ko nazar andaaz kar ke sirf ehsasaat ki jaanib jaayeiN. Beh'r bhi seekh jaunga aapka saath raha toh.


Qisse jafaa ke unnki, mash-hoor ho gaye haiN
Sang-e-koo-e-yaar bhi maghroor ho gaye haiN

Yoom-e-azl se ishq meiN haiN zillateiN bhi saath
Dastkashii-o-berukhii ab dastoor ho gaye haiN

Yoom-e-azl= The beginning of the world/aghaaz/ibtidaah
Dastkashi= The break up of a relation/Taa'luq toRna

Insaaf kii tijaarat hogii, rawaaN saal meiN bhi
Mashware siyaasi kuch phir manzoor ho gaye haiN

Takhfeef jo huyii hai mere ghar meiN roshnii kii
Khair khwaah-o-humsafar sab door ho gaye haiN

Takhfeef= Reduction/Kami

Aaqibat ba-khair ho, ahl-e-chaman kii 'Aashna'
Hum toh tark-e-gulshan ko majboor ho gaye haiN

Aaqibat= Consequences/Aakhirat/Anjaam
Adaab sagar bhai bhai kyaa khub ashaar hai.n kasam se mazaa aa gyaa, Janaab matlaa to bass puchiye mat janaab apni to dher saari daad kabool farmaiye. .khuda kare zor e qalam or jiyada. .Raj.

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Shukriya - 18th January 2015, 07:59 AM
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Adaab sagar bhai bhai kyaa khub ashaar hai.n kasam se mazaa aa gyaa, Janaab matlaa to bass puchiye mat janaab apni to dher saari daad kabool farmaiye. .khuda kare zor e qalam or jiyada. .Raj.

Rajveer Ji, Satsriakaal !

Khaaksaar aapka maskoor-o-mamnoon hai ke aapko asha'ar pasand aaye.
aapki daad sir ankhoN par. Yunhi saath baanye rakhein.

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18th January 2015, 10:07 AM
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Muazizeen dostoN, Aadaab..!

Bohot dinoN se koshish kar raha hooN apne ehsasaat ko beh'r mein band karne ki, lekin nahi ho paaye.
Toh haar kar aapke hawale kar raha hooN, bardasht kar lijiyega.
Mods aur sho'ra hazraat se istidaah hai ke iss aib ko nazar andaaz kar ke sirf ehsasaat ki jaanib jaayeiN. Beh'r bhi seekh jaunga aapka saath raha toh.


Qisse jafaa ke unnki, mash-hoor ho gaye haiN
Sang-e-koo-e-yaar bhi maghroor ho gaye haiN

Yoom-e-azl se ishq meiN haiN zillateiN bhi saath
Dastkashii-o-berukhii ab dastoor ho gaye haiN

Yoom-e-azl= The beginning of the world/aghaaz/ibtidaah
Dastkashi= The break up of a relation/Taa'luq toRna

Insaaf kii tijaarat hogii, rawaaN saal meiN bhi
Mashware siyaasi kuch phir manzoor ho gaye haiN

Takhfeef jo huyii hai mere ghar meiN roshnii kii
Khair khwaah-o-humsafar sab door ho gaye haiN

Takhfeef= Reduction/Kami

Aaqibat ba-khair ho, ahl-e-chaman kii 'Aashna'
Hum toh tark-e-gulshan ko majboor ho gaye haiN

Aaqibat= Consequences/Aakhirat/Anjaam
Bohot bohot khoob Sagar ji

Kya baat hai.....ehsaas behad khoobsurat.......behad umda peshkash hai...aap ki sohbat rahi to shayri ke sath urdu bhi sekh jayenge.....kamaal ka likhte hai aap..
Daad kubul farmayeN

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18th January 2015, 03:21 PM
Waah waah sagar ji...
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18th January 2015, 07:29 PM
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Bohot bohot khoob Sagar ji

Kya baat hai.....ehsaas behad khoobsurat.......behad umda peshkash hai...aap ki sohbat rahi to shayri ke sath urdu bhi sekh jayenge.....kamaal ka likhte hai aap..
Daad kubul farmayeN

Aapka apna
Bhushan

Tah-e-dil se shukriya Bhushan ji.. Aapne apna qeemti waqt meri koshish keliye nikala, maiN mamnoon huN uskeliye.


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Shukriya - 18th January 2015, 07:32 PM
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Waah waah sagar ji...
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Tehseen keliye bohot bohot Shukriya Madhu Ji.
Aate rahiyega.

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bahot khoob peshkash hai apki janaab.... har sher apne aap me ek daastaan kahta huaa....
nayaab sa nazraana hai aapke... tahe dil se daad.....

likhte rahiye.... bandish aur rawaani ka bhi thodaa khayaal rakkhen to aur bhi behtar....

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20th January 2015, 07:25 PM
Bohot bohot shukriya Shaad bhai hausla afzayi keliye.

Aur maine pehle he guzarish kii hai ke technically weak hooN, beh'r ka ilm nahi, bandish aur rawaani ka pata nhi.. Bas kuchh ehsaas thae jo nikal gaye.

islaah keliye he mods aur sho'ra hazraat se guzarish kii hai.

Bohot bohot shukriya ek baar phir se.
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4th February 2015, 11:10 PM
Aru ji, Namaskar.
Meri koshish keliye aapne apna qeemti waqt nikaala aur usko saraaha, uskeliye maiN aapka mamnoon-o-mashkoor hooN.
Yunhi hausla baDhate rahiyega.

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Sagar ji..........bahut khoobsurat likhte hai aap....accha lagta hai aapko padna.


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Sagar ji..........bahut khoobsurat likhte hai aap....accha lagta hai aapko padna.

Aap itni tareef kar rahe haiN to lagta hai ke kuchh theek he likha gaya hoga, warna khud pe itna bharosa nahi hai di.

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