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16th June 2010, 04:39 PM
wounded souls
whoosh whoosh
pock a pock a pock
whoosh
the sound of incoming
wounded souls
torn up and twisted
alongside guts
and shattered limbs
his face was white
like a china doll’s
fighting for breath
against the wind
losing blood
inside and out
as the pain drained away
between the shock
and the angels
he said:
Tell Momma I love her?
Pali Mittal
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11th May 2011, 07:56 PM
as the pain drained away
between the shock
touching and sad...
nice lines
sat
Not self but God and others
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