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Exclamation aaj bhi rote hai unki yaad mein... - 27th February 2006, 10:18 AM

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27th February 2006, 10:51 AM

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2nd March 2006, 11:05 AM

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hi saya..

ur sher was as sweet as you..
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2nd March 2006, 06:44 PM

nice one... and good to see you mentioning not mine... keep sharing these gems with us...


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7th March 2006, 10:51 AM

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hi saya..

ur sher was as sweet as you..
welcome to shayri.com...
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hi Farhana
thanks a lott
here is one more for you.. which I posted today..

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nice one... and good to see you mentioning not mine... keep sharing these gems with us...


hello Pulkit
thanx for reading it
sorry.. for that next time mein thik se dhyaan rakhoongi

thanx a lott


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