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Jooo Na Mil Saka Woh Bewafa - 11th August 2005, 01:22 PM

Jo Na Mil Saka Wo Baywafa
Yeh Bare Ajeeb Si Baat Hai
Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor Kar
Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai...
Wo Roshni Kay Khayal Main
Wo Na Asaka Raah Mian Muntazir
Yeh Khalish Kahan Thi Visaal Main
Mere Justojoo Ko Khabar Nahi
Na Wo Din Rahay Na Wo Raat Rahay
Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor Kar
Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai..
Kary Pyar Lab Pay Koi Gila Na Hoo
Yeh Kissi Kissi Ka Naseeb Hai
Yeh Karam Hai Uski Jafa Nahi
Wo Juda Bhi Rehkay Qareeb Hai
Wo Aankh Hai Mere Ru Baru
Ussi Haath Mein Mera Haath Hai
Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor Kar
Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai
Mera Nam Tak Jo Na Lay Saka
Jo Mujhay Qarar Na Day Saka
Jissay Ikhtiyaar Tau Tha Magar
Mujhay Apna Pyar Na Day Saka
Wohi Shakhs Mere Talassh Hai
Wohi Dard Mere Hayaat Hai
Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor Kar
Wohi Aaj Tak Meray Saath Hai


MAIN WOH LARKI HOON
JIS KO PEHLI RAAT
KOI GHONGHAT UTTHA KE YEH KAH DAY
MERA SAB KUCH TERA HAI'DIL KEH SIWA


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Re: Jooo Na Mil Saka Woh Bewafa - 12th August 2005, 09:44 AM

Jo Na Mil Saka Wo Baywafa
Yeh Bare Ajeeb Si Baat Hai

Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor Kar
Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai...

Wo Roshni Kay Khayal Main
Wo Na Asaka Raah Mian Muntazir
Yeh Khalish Kahan Thi Visaal Main
Mere Justojoo Ko Khabar Nahi
Na Wo Din Rahay Na Wo Raat Rahay
Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor Kar
Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai..

Kary Pyar Lab Pay Koi Gila Na Hoo
Yeh Kissi Kissi Ka Naseeb Hai
Yeh Karam Hai Uski Jafa Nahi
Wo Juda Bhi Rehkay Qareeb Hai
Wo Aankh Hai Mere Ru Baru
Ussi Haath Mein Mera Haath Hai
Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor Kar
Wohi Aaj Tak Mere Saath Hai

Mera Nam Tak Jo Na Lay Saka
Jo Mujhay Qarar Na Day Saka
Jissay Ikhtiyaar Tau Tha Magar
Mujhay Apna Pyar Na Day Saka
Wohi Shakhs Mere Talassh Hai
Wohi Dard Mere Hayaat Hai
Jo Chala Gaya Mujhay Chor Kar
Wohi Aaj Tak Meray Saath Hai

sUHANI SAHIBA.
AAP WAQAI BAHOOT BAHOOOT SHAANDAAR LIKHTI HAI.... DIL KO SIRF CHOO HI NAHIN LIYA ,balki dil mein sama gayi hai aapki gazal...har sher mano kalam se nahin shamsheer se likha gaya ho...dil cheer kar rakh diya aapki gazal ne...khaas kar aakhri sher mein jin jazbaaton ko aapne jubaan di hai wo kaabil e gaur hai,,aise naazuk pehluon ko aapne jis khoobi aur safai se gazal mein utara hai wo laajawab hai...mere paas to wo alfaaz hi nahin hai jinhe mein aapki tareef mein saja sakun..
aise hi likhte rahiye...meri daad kubool kijiye...sada khush rahiye
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Hello :) - 12th August 2005, 02:04 PM

Welcome To This Beautiful Shayri Pareevar~Hope You Will Enjoy Being Here~Good Luck **There Are SOme Rules In Here When You Submit Poetry-Ghazals(Anything)And This One Can't Be Written By You**If You Didn't Knew It Before Please Let Me Tell You This Was Sung By Noor Jahan Jee~Writer Name I Can't Remember At This Moment But I Am Very Much Sure That It Was Written By A Very Famous Writer**If You Don't Know The Writer Name Then Only Please Do Write: Not Mine Or Writer Unknown**And When It's A Ghazal Then There Are Ghazal Section Where You Can Submit Ghazals**I Hope You Can Understand**Khush Rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**God bless You.

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12th August 2005, 06:57 PM

thank u manoj kah app ko mari gazal aitni pasand aye


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