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gujarta hua saal khooni pehchan de gaya!!!!!!! -
31st December 2004, 12:28 PM
hello!!
sabhi ko meri sneh bhari namastey....chahti to thi ki new year per jaker sabko wish karoon per ussy pehley dil dehla dene wala hadsa jo hua us per hi kuch likha to rok nahi payo khud ko..bus apni un hi tukbandiyon ke sath....pesh hai ek nazm.. gujarta hua saal khooni nishan de gaya atey naye saal ki her muskan le gaya dehal gayi jamin sari kudrat ke kehar se uphanta hua sagar ugri pehchaan de gaya kal tak sabab bani thi lehrey jin musafiron ki unko bekhauf pani maut ka pharmaan de gaya mer gaye kinare aur so gayi sari bastiyan soone gharon me siskiyon ka paigam de gaya ro-ro ke dua mangti hain tarasti lasheyin pehchanne ko ek adad bhagwan de gaya rahton ke shor kuch din uthey rahengey yun hi jakhmi dilon pe umr bhar ka ehsaan de gaya ghar ujarne ka derd dil se mehoos kijiye paoge ,apna ansoon kisi ka derd-e -bayan de gaya musibat ki ghari me banna nahi kafir "sona" waqt bemurravat! makbaro me hi shamshan de gaya |
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31st December 2004, 08:51 PM
well swatiji....its nice to see you back.....sahi keh rahi hai aap ki nazm...reality....keep writing...salmubarak ho aapko...
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Re: gujarta hua saal khooni pehchan de gaya!!!!!!! -
1st January 2005, 01:54 PM
gujarta hua saal khooni nishan de gaya
atey naye saal ki her muskan le gaya kal tak sabab bani thi lehrey jin musafiron ki unko bekhauf pani maut ka pharmaan de gaya mer gaye kinare aur so gayi sari bastiyan soone gharon me siskiyon ka paigam de gaya rahton ke shor kuch din uthey rahengey yun hi jakhmi dilon pe umr bhar ka ehsaan de gaya bahooot khoob swati....!!! "dard" par "wah" kehne ka gunaah kar raha hoon....bahoot sahi likha hai tumne...Tsunami lehrein ek aisa jakham de gayi hai jate hue saal mein jo kai saal guzar jane par bhi nahin bharega....us dard ko bahoot khubi se piroya hai tumne apni gazal mein....tumhara likhne ka andaaz hamesha hi anootha aur mukkkamal raha hai....mein yahan us gazal ka jikr karne se khud ko nahin rok paaunga jo tumne Shankracharya ke uper likhi thi....behad sachai thi us gazal mein...ho sake to wo gazal bhi ham sab ke saath phir ek baar share karna. meri daad kubool karo..naya saal tumhe mubaarak ho,,dheron khushiyan mile tumhae..aur hamein mile tumhari kalam se nikle beshkimti gazlon ke gauhar....likhte rahiye...take care -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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2nd January 2005, 09:17 AM
Dear Sona aaj bhaut dino ke baad tumhe yaha dekh kar khusi hui. .
tumne apne gujre hue kal ki dard bhari dasta pesh ki wo bahut hi sunder hai.. tumne apne andaz me dard bare shabdo ke ek ek moti ko jis tarah nazm ki mala me piro ker pesh kiya hai.. sach ......kudrat ke kahar ka manjar aakho ke samne ghoom raha hai... Navarsh tumhre liye magalmay ho aur tumhe her khuisya mile aur tum hamesha ...hastai raho ,khush raho .. yahi dua hai... HAPPY NEW YEAR.... |
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2nd January 2005, 05:56 PM
Hi Swati Ji,
Kaafi acchha laga aapko yaha waapis paa kar. Ha, ye haadsa itna dard naak tha ke pure naye saal ki dhoom to bhool hi gaye the. Apne kalaam mein bakhoobi utara hai un dard naak lamho ko. Muafi chahta hu lekin wah bhi nahi keh sakta. Bas dil se mehsoos kar sakta hu. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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3rd January 2005, 07:04 AM
Bahut hi behtreen swati....aapne jis tareh se shabdoN ke maadhyam se dard ko nazroN ke saamne laa diya....wo halka hi sahi per nigaahoN ko hi nahi dil ko bhi nam kar gaya...
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3rd January 2005, 04:10 PM
ghar ujarne ka derd dil se mehoos kijiye
paoge ,apna ansoon kisi ka derd-e -bayan de gaya musibat ki ghari me banna nahi kafir "sona" waqt bemurravat! makbaro me hi shamshan de gaya Swatiii! Soo good to see u back... Itne khobssorta alfaazon me apne jazbaaton ko pesh karne ke liye meri daad kubool karna.... Aage bhi aise hi likhti rehna....Do TC  Happy New Year!!Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th January 2005, 03:49 PM
pappu ji
..apk is hauslaafzai ke liye dil se shukriya.....han kabhi kabhi kuch manzar dil ko tor detey hain to bus shabdon se rachnaye ban hi jati hain...thx a lot! |
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17th January 2005, 03:50 PM
manoj ji
..thx for ur appriciation.....han koshish karoongi ki jamini halaton ko kagaj per utar sakoon..apne jis gazal ki pharmaish ki hai wo kabhi jaroor post karoongi...thx |
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17th January 2005, 03:52 PM
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....apne bhi kuch jaroorat se jyada hi tareef ker di... naya saal apko bhi mubarak ho.... |
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17th January 2005, 03:53 PM
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...apne meri is dil ko chhooney wali rachna ko pasnad kiya iske liye apka bahut bahut shukriya... |
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17th January 2005, 03:54 PM
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how r u?apki is tarref ke liye bahut shukriya aur apko yahn per mere wapis dekhker khushi hui iske liye bhi shukriya... |
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17th January 2005, 03:55 PM
hi pulkit
kaise ho?bus yun hi tukbandiyonki tareef kertey raho...aur hum yun hi tumhe bor kertey rahey.....thx,,a lot |
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Re: gujarta hua saal khooni pehchan de gaya!!!!!!! -
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Uff! Tumhara is asahniye haadse ko bayan karna...phir se dard badha gaya tsumaani se pidhit bebason ke liye...na jaane kitne saalon tak unko yeh shabd bhi khauf de jaayeiga...wakayi aate naye saal kee muskaan tau le hee gaya na... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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