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Talking Ibnbattuta Ka Joota - bal kavita [image format] - 7th June 2010, 06:50 PM

Ibn Battuta (AD 1304 to 1368) was a Moroccan Muslim scholar and traveler who is known for the account of his travels and excursions. His journeys lasted for a period of nearly thirty years and covered almost the entirety of the known Islamic world and beyond. He came to India when Delhi was ruled by Sultan Muhammad bin Tughluq who appointed Ibn Battuta as a Qazi. Later Tugluq later sent him as ambassador to China. Ibn Battuta left extensive accounts of his travels that make very interesting reading. Decades ago, Sarweshwar Dayal Saxena wrote abal-kavitaon Ibn Battuta. Shoes were prominent in the poem asJootarhymes so well withBattuta. In a recent song written by Gulzar for themovie IshqiyaIbn Battuta and Joota again figured prominently resulting in some controversy about the credit of the song. Here both versions are being presented for the readers.



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Very-2 nice sharing ab kuch-2 samajh aaya is song ka matlab

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Ibn Battuta (AD 1304 to 1368) was a Moroccan Muslim scholar and traveler who is known for the account of his travels and excursions. His journeys lasted for a period of nearly thirty years and covered almost the entirety of the known Islamic world and beyond. He came to India when Delhi was ruled by Sultan Muhammad bin Tughluq who appointed Ibn Battuta as a Qazi. Later Tugluq later sent him as ambassador to China. Ibn Battuta left extensive accounts of his travels that make very interesting reading. Decades ago, Sarweshwar Dayal Saxena wrote abal-kavitaon Ibn Battuta. Shoes were prominent in the poem asJootarhymes so well withBattuta. In a recent song written by Gulzar for themovie IshqiyaIbn Battuta and Joota again figured prominently resulting in some controversy about the credit of the song. Here both versions are being presented for the readers.

Waise agar koi sardaarji ho...

Aur wo totlaa ho...

Aur uski koi mitr ho...

Aur uska naam pari ho..

To wo usko kaise bulayega ??

Punjabi me mitr ka pronunciation mittar hotaa hai

Waise don't mind sirr ji.. Ye sirf aur sirf meri parikalpana hai...




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Very-2 nice sharing ab kuch-2 samajh aaya is song ka matlab

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Waise agar koi sardaarji ho...

Aur wo totlaa ho...

Aur uski koi mitr ho...

Aur uska naam pari ho..

To wo usko kaise bulayega ??

Punjabi me mitr ka pronunciation mittar hotaa hai

Waise don't mind sirr ji.. Ye sirf aur sirf meri parikalpana hai...

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Good one ...........Thanks for sharing...................




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Ibn Battuta (AD 1304 to 1368) was a Moroccan Muslim scholar and traveler who is known for the account of his travels and excursions. His journeys lasted for a period of nearly thirty years and covered almost the entirety of the known Islamic world and beyond. He came to India when Delhi was ruled by Sultan Muhammad bin Tughluq who appointed Ibn Battuta as a Qazi. Later Tugluq later sent him as ambassador to China. Ibn Battuta left extensive accounts of his travels that make very interesting reading. Decades ago, Sarweshwar Dayal Saxena wrote abal-kavitaon Ibn Battuta. Shoes were prominent in the poem asJootarhymes so well withBattuta. In a recent song written by Gulzar for themovie IshqiyaIbn Battuta and Joota again figured prominently resulting in some controversy about the credit of the song. Here both versions are being presented for the readers.

mittalji.maine philhal to gulzaar sahab ka ye gana suna nahi....
magar jitna yaad aa raha hai...
us hisaab se is line me..........
pahne to karta hai jurm

ke badle...aisa lagta hai ki ye hai...

pahne to karta hai churr
......aur qafiya bhi tabhi match hoga....

kyuki gulzaar sahab qafiya zarur sahi match karte hai.....
kajra re kajre me...unhone dekhiye litna haseen qafiya milaya hai

aag hai.....ghaag hai

dekhiye aap zara....

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mittalji.maine philhal to gulzaar sahab ka ye gana suna nahi....
magar jitna yaad aa raha hai...
us hisaab se is line me..........
pahne to karta hai jurm

ke badle...aisa lagta hai ki ye hai...

pahne to karta hai churr
......aur qafiya bhi tabhi match hoga....

kyuki gulzaar sahab qafiya zarur sahi match karte hai.....
kajra re kajre me...unhone dekhiye litna haseen qafiya milaya hai

aag hai.....ghaag hai

dekhiye aap zara....
yeh kavita mere dost ne bheji thi banaras se. Ho sakta hai aap sahi keh rahe hon, kyunki gana toh maine bhi nahin suna kabhi. Par lagta hai ab sun-na padega.
Anyway thanks for repling and be happy.


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ye churr nahi churrr hai zidd bhai, bol ke dekhie churrr.... ye churrrr islie nahi ho sakta kiun ke chu ke aage jyada r lagane se thoda lamba chala jaata hai. churrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
vaise ye jhurrr bhi likha jata to bolne me jyaada maza ata.

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