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Zakhm Khaana To Apni Aadat Hai -
9th August 2008, 01:54 PM
Zakhm Khaana To Apni Aadat Hai Muskurana To Apni Aadat Hai Roshni Ho Ke Ghup Andeihra Ho Dil Jalaana To Apni Aadat Hai Aap Kab Tak Sanbhaliye Ga Humein Larrkharrana To Apni Aadat Hai Hain Sitamgar Khafa To Hone Do Sar Uthaana To Apni Aadat Hai Raah Chalti Hui Museebat Ko Ghar Bulaana To Apni Aadat Hai Uss Ki Aankhon Se Kya Gila Raahi!! Doob Jaana To Apni Aadat Hai. Woh "Dil" kahan se laaoN jo teri yaad bhula de...
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9th August 2008, 01:56 PM
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 Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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9th August 2008, 01:57 PM
Good one ser jii///
Koi nhi sath deta yhan umsr bhar ansu bhi **** jate hein aankhon ko **** kar Jassi |
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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9th August 2008, 02:08 PM
ahchi kosish hai, par agar har sher se "to" shabd ko hata diya jaaye, to ghazal meN aur behtar floe ho jayega...!! umeed aage v aap aur ahcha likhte raheNge...!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Bahot Shukriya... Aap Dono Ka. -
9th August 2008, 02:10 PM
Aage Bhi Hum Yahi Koshish Kareinge Ki Aapko Humari Taraf Se Acche Nagme Padhne Ko Mile.... Woh "Dil" kahan se laaoN jo teri yaad bhula de...
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Bahot Shukriya -
9th August 2008, 02:14 PM
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Aapka Bahot Shukriya...  Ki Aap Ne Humari Post Ko Padha... Ghalti Batane Se Hume isme Kuch Sudharne Kaa Mauka Milega... Aise Hi Humari Post Ko Padhte Rahiye... Aur Koi Bhi Ghalti Ho Jaaye To Bataye Zarur.Woh "Dil" kahan se laaoN jo teri yaad bhula de...
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26th September 2008, 02:00 AM
Zakhmi Sahib....
Wah Kya Khoob likha AapNe Bahut Hiii Accha Lega!! ... Haalaki ye Ghazal Hum Pehle Pad Chuke Hai! Aur Is par Jaise Hi Nazar Gayi To Purani Yaad Taza Ho Gayi..... Behad Khoobsurat Ghazal hai Ye! .. Ab BaaT Mein karta hooN Ghayal Shayar SahiB Kii JanaB Ghayal Shayar Aap ne Jo "To" Lazf Ke Liye Kaha! Wakai mein Mujhe Bahut Hi Ajeeb sa LeGa!.. Ya To Aap Ne is Ghazal Ko Theek Se nahin pada ya PhiR samjha NahiN... Sahi MaayaNe Se Is SaraPa Ghazal Ko PadeN auR Is ko Samjhe Ki LikhNe wala Kya Kahna ChahaTa hai!! Tab Shayad Aap is kii Qadra Kar SakeeGe!..... Ye Ghazal Dr.Syed Bilal Sahib Kii Hai Bahut Hi KhoobSuraT GhazaloN Mein se Ek Ghazal hai! Kuch Arz karuuGa! Syed Bilal Jee Ka Likha Huaa! Hai Zara TabazooN De... Main Khuda Ka Kabhi Bhi Na Shukar Adaa Kar Paoon Gaa Par Ussey Kitna Chaahta Hoon Ye Dunya Ko Dikhaoon Gaa Log To Pyar Ke Naam Ko Aisey Badnaam Kar Detey Hain Mein Pyar Ke Iss Paak Naam Ko Ikk Naya Naam Dey Jaoon Gaa ! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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