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Aawaarghi..............................ek ghazal - 16th May 2005, 12:06 PM
Ek baar phir sabhi dostoN ko Safiya ka aadaab, umeed karti hoon ke aap is dafa bhi hume apni keemti raay se zaroor nawazenge, aapki aaraa ka intezaar rahega....


Raas aayii thi hume aawaarghi pehle kabhii
jaagna shab-bhar-O-karna dostoN se atkhali

ghar humara ab kafas maaloom hota haiy hume
chaayii haiy viraaniyaaN hoti jahaaN thi roshni

ek chehre pe kaii chehre sajaa lete haiN loG
dostoN humko magar pyaari humaari saadghi

raabtaa tootaa jo unke dil se to ye haal haiy
uR gayi ankhoN se neendeN so rahi haiy zindaghi

dil se hum behaal haiN aur jism se beemaar hain
dost deteN hain dawa pyaale me bhar ke tishnaghi

kehteN hain ke dard baRkar khud shifa ban jayega
dekhenge nazdeek aakar tere bhi ey ajnabi

apne armaano ki duniya tujh pe kyun na vaar deN
kyun na tere saath jee leN hum bhi do pal ey khushi

yuN Shama raatoN ko roti haiy sisak kar baar baar
vo sitamgar dekh na paayaa wafaa ki roshnii

meanings:
Kafas = qaid, cage
Tishnagi = pyaas, thirst
Shifa = cure


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17th May 2005, 06:02 PM
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ajj dekhiye aapki mehfil main hum phir aa gye chaliye ab aapki tarif main kya kahe a nice ghazal.........................keeep writing............. main aapke ghazlo ka intezar kerta hu..........thanks for writing such nice ghazals
   
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17th May 2005, 06:13 PM
Safya ji,

Wah!!!

Bahot hi khoobsurat Ghazal!! her ek line dadh key kaabil hai!
Umeed hai key aap isi tarah likhti rahengi!!

Rajan

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18th May 2005, 10:05 AM
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ajj dekhiye aapki mehfil main hum phir aa gye chaliye ab aapki tarif main kya kahe a nice ghazal.........................keeep writing............. main aapke ghazlo ka intezar kerta hu..........thanks for writing such nice ghazals
Janaab kush Sahab,

Ye aap kya keh raheN hain shukriya aap jeyse dostoN ka , ki jo humaari na-cheez ghazaloN ka intezaar karteN hain. aapki taareef se dil to khush hota hi haiy saath hi saath himmat bhi baRti haiy. bas khuda kare ye silsila jaari rahe, aur hum sab ki dosti bani rahe.

bohot bohot shukriya

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18th May 2005, 10:11 AM
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Safya ji,

Wah!!!

Bahot hi khoobsurat Ghazal!! her ek line dadh key kaabil hai!
Umeed hai key aap isi tarah likhti rahengi!!

Rajan
Rajan sahab,

shukriya , bohot bohot shukriya, taareef ke liye aur himmat afzaaii ke liye, Allah hume itni salahiyet baqshe ki hum aapki umeed pe poore utar saken.

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21st May 2005, 04:33 PM
Safiya sahiba,
aadaab,
bohat khoobsurat...wah wah....
aapne kya kaha hai.....aaj ki dosti ke pasmanzar main...

dil se hum behaal haiN aur jism se beemaar hain
dost deteN hain dawa pyaale me bhar ke tishnaghi

kya baat hai...

apne armaano ki duniya tujh pe kyun na vaar deN
kyun na tere saath jee leN hum bhi do pal ey khushi

bohat khoob....safiya ji...bohat khoob

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23rd May 2005, 02:41 AM
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Safiya sahiba,
aadaab,
bohat khoobsurat...wah wah....
aapne kya kaha hai.....aaj ki dosti ke pasmanzar main...

dil se hum behaal haiN aur jism se beemaar hain
dost deteN hain dawa pyaale me bhar ke tishnaghi

kya baat hai...

apne armaano ki duniya tujh pe kyun na vaar deN
kyun na tere saath jee leN hum bhi do pal ey khushi

bohat khoob....safiya ji...bohat khoob

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Adil sahab

Ji haan Adil sahab kuch dost eyse hoteN hain ki jinhe dekh kar vakaii dil ki pyaas bujhne ki baajaaye aur baR jaati haiy. Ghazal ki pazeerayi ke liye hum aapke tah-e-dil se mamnoon haiN.
aapne itni himmat badhaaii, iske liye bohot bohot shukriya

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30th September 2005, 05:57 PM
ahcha likha hai safiya ji,khaash taur pe aapka khayal hume bahut pasand aaya,aawaargi.........,kya baat hai.kaafi ahcha laga aapko padh kar bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.


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13th October 2005, 11:13 AM
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ahcha likha hai safiya ji,khaash taur pe aapka khayal hume bahut pasand aaya,aawaargi.........,kya baat hai.kaafi ahcha laga aapko padh kar bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.


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Janaab Ghayal sahab,

Deri se jawaab dene ke liye maazrat khwaaN hoon, aapko ghazal pasand aayee, shayra ke dil ko taskeen huvi. taareef ke liye shukriya.

aapki mamnoon
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