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Originally posted by chandni_jain
hi gd ji realy me bhut acha likha hai aapne dard par ase hi likhte rhyega or humari daad kabul kare bye
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Shukrya chandni ji aapne hame daad di ye hamarikushnasibi hai ya fir aapka andaje baya kuch bhi kahe aap jais erkadardan ho to likhavat aur jajbato main aur bhi nikhar aa jata hai..humkoshish karenge aapko hamara likah ach alage...
Jab se juda wo hum se huay,
Is dil ne dhadakna chod diya...
Chaand ka moun kuch utra utra,
Phooloun ne mahekna chod diya...
Hum ne kaha, "Taqdeer badal de ae Maalik.."
Awaaz yeh aayee, "Taqdeer badalna chod diya
Kaghaz kaghaz haraf sajjaya karta hai
Tanhai main sheher basaaya karta hai
Kaisa paagal shaks hai saari saari raat
Deewaroon ko dard sunaya karta hai
Ro daita hai aap hi apni baatoon par
Aur phir khud ko aap hansaaya karta hai
aapki mahfil ka mausam suhana lage,
ek pal chura lu agar bura na lage,
aap hame milkar bhale hi bhool jao,
aapko bhoolne main shayed jamana lage ...
i am waiting for u .....