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Ritu Roy
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Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye -
12th November 2011, 12:27 AM
Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye
Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye
Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye
Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye
Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye
Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye
Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye
Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye
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Written By Ritu Roy – Copyright Reserved
Written On 11th Nov 2011 – 11:00 PM Thursday
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Tanhaa Raahi
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12th November 2011, 03:35 AM
Really fantastic...! Kya ghazal bani aapse...!
HazaaroN daad qabuul kareiN, Ritu Ji...!
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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12th November 2011, 07:27 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ritu
Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye
Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye
Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye
Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye
Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye
Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye
Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye
Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye
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Written By Ritu Roy – Copyright Reserved
Written On 11th Nov 2011 – 11:00 PM Thursday
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Bohat khoob Ritu ji!!.............
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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Ritu Roy
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12th November 2011, 10:28 AM
Thanks Amanush Ji & Zainy ji... Glad u liked it!
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12th November 2011, 11:43 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ritu
Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye
Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye
Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye
Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye
Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye
Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye
Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye
Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye
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Written By Ritu Roy – Copyright Reserved
Written On 11th Nov 2011 – 11:00 PM Thursday
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acha likhaa hai ritu ji...
nice to see u here
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Ritu Roy
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12th November 2011, 10:11 PM
Thanks Vikas ji, Glad to read ur comments... and happy to see you too!
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23rd November 2011, 09:07 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ritu
Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye
Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye
Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye
Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye
Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye
Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye
Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye
Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye
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Written By Ritu Roy – Copyright Reserved
Written On 11th Nov 2011 – 11:00 PM Thursday
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WaaH ! Ritu Ji !! Bahut Hii Umdaa ... !
AchChhe Fikr O KhayaaL ... BehtreeN Andaaze BayaaN ... !
Laajawaab Takhleeq ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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24th December 2011, 10:30 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Ritu
Kahiye-kahiye, suniye-suniye, kuch apni kehte jaayiye
Mehfil-e-Dil se guzarte huve, kuch meri sunte jaayiye
Aankh kahe ashq se tum meri palkon mein na aana..
Khwab kahe naye sokh se, kuch mujhe bunte jaayiye
Gupchup gupchup, hasin kali phool se muskura ke kahe
Aap sa mehakna Eei Yaar, kuch humei sikhate jaayiye
Madhur madhur chaandni kahe nazer pher le chakor..
Chaand par hakk mera hei aap, kuch aur dekhte jaayiye
Sargam ke suur sang khal khal behti vakt ki nadiyaan..
Yaad kahe dil-e-tamanna se, kuch humsa behte jaayiye
Badli saawan se kahe, teri barkha se nache saara jag
Bhige shehar ki inayat ye, kuch humpe barasate jaayiye
Taraste naino ko jaane kis jhalak ka hei intezaar abh
Aas kahe aayeene se, Hum sa kuch saath lete jaayiye
Tanhaai ki kaali dhoop baahein felaaye bulati hei aksar
Sabdo ki reit kahe Eei Ritu, kuch humse ulajhte jaayiye
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Written By Ritu Roy – Copyright Reserved
Written On 11th Nov 2011 – 11:00 PM Thursday
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vry well written ...........................
Manshaa Thaakur
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