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"dard jab haad se gujar jaye" -
19th July 2006, 10:54 AM
dosto ek chotti se gustakhi phir kar rahi hu, umeed hai app esko padeygey aur mujhe reply bhi jaroor kareygey.
yeh mere dil ki sadha hai, ho sakta appke dil ki bhi ho. “Dil ka dard jab haad se gujar jaye to kaya karey, Tumey yaad karey ja us kudha ko yaad karey, Jab yeh nadaan dil tadpey ki uska didaar karey, To ek bar jo uski tasvir dekhi to pahro dekhtey rahey, Na-kaam mohabaat ka jikar karey to kis se karey, Kabhi koi milla nahi jis se appna dard baanta karey, Dua hai kudha se ki na-kaam mohabaat kisi ki hissey na karey, Ja phir naddan dillo mai mohabat ka diya jagaya na karey”  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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19th July 2006, 11:40 AM
Na-kaam mohabaat ka jikar karey to kis se karey,
Kabhi koi milla nahi jis se appna dard baanta karey, Dua hai kudha se ki na-kaam mohabaat kisi ki hissey na karey, Ja phir naddan dillo mai mohabat ka diya jagaya na karey” Sunita Ji....Namaskaar.... bahut dard hai lagta hai seene mai....aapke shabdo me chhipi dard ki gehrai saaf dekhai deti hai...agar main apke kisi kaam aa saku to jarur aawaz dijiyega....aapki dosti ki kasam aapke dard ko jaroor sakoon dene ki koshish karenge... aapke ye uper wale sher dil ko bheeter tak choo gaye... bhagwaan aapko sakoon de.. |
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hello -
19th July 2006, 07:30 PM
sunita ji aap ka prayas kaafi sundar hai,aap ko arz karu ke radeef aur kaafiye par jyaada dhyaan de to aur khubsurat ghazal likha paayenge,koshish jaari rakhiye,
aur sundar si kavita par sundar si daad kabool kare regards aap ka dost manu |
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20th July 2006, 06:32 AM
sunita ji aapko jab jab padha hai bhaut achha laga hai use padhna aapki baatine hamesha hi bhaut gahri hoti hai is baar bhi aapki ye gazal bhaut achhi lagi
Dua hai kudha se ki na-kaam mohabaat kisi ki hissey na karey, Ja phir naddan dillo mai mohabat ka diya jagaya na karey” bhaut khoob 
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20th July 2006, 09:38 AM
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Dear Friend dard to sach mai bahut hai par app sab se share karke kuch sakoon sa mil jatta hai. duao ke liye shukriya aur meri post par aane ke liye meharbaani. again thanks .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Re: hello |
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Re: hello -
20th July 2006, 09:47 AM
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appki housla-afjaei ke liye dil se shukriya adda karti hu. aur appne to suggestion de hai uska bhi dhayaan rakhugi. Thanks .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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20th July 2006, 09:53 AM
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appney mera likha padda aur pasand bhi kiya, tahey dil se appki shukargujar hu. umeed karti hu app yu meri post par aatey raheygey. aur meri himmat bandhatey raheygey. appki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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bhut khub |
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bhut khub -
20th July 2006, 03:34 PM
sunita ji bhut pyari koshish hai jajbato say labrej....janay kiyon yeh share mere dil ka haal laga.....
Dua hai kudha se ki na-kaam mohabaat kisi ki hissey na karey, Ja phir naddan dillo mai mohabat ka diya jagaya na karey” appne mere jajbato ko alfazon ki shakal de appka bhut bhut shukria..............raj........ ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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Re: bhut khub -
20th July 2006, 03:40 PM
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tum meri post par to aaye, batta nahi sakti kitni kush hu. aur yeh haal appke dil ka hai aur hamarey ka bhi hai. bas dard ka ristha aise hi ban jatta hai ek doosrey se. umeed hai agar mai phir aise koi kosish karugi to tum jaroor aaogey meri post par. thanks .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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8th November 2008, 09:02 AM
Dil ka dard jab haad se gujar jaye to kaya karey,
Tumey yaad karey ja us kudha ko yaad karey, Jab yeh nadaan dil tadpey ki uska didaar karey, To ek bar jo uski tasvir dekhi to pahro dekhtey rahey, Na-kaam mohabaat ka jikar karey to kis se karey, Kabhi koi milla nahi jis se appna dard baanta karey, Dua hai kudha se ki na-kaam mohabaat kisi ki hissey na karey, Ja phir naddan dillo mai mohabat ka diya jagaya na karey” Hi dii esa lagta hai aapne mere dil ki baat likh di ho... bahut ajeeb lagta hai jab insaan ko kis kis halaaton se gurazana padhta hai ...aur kuch saamjah mein nahi aata kya kahe ...kya kare ... khuda ese din kisi ko na dekhaye yu hi dil ki gehrayiaan pesh karte rahe.. tc aapki mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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10th November 2008, 01:53 AM
dd achi koshish hai gazal ki...acha laga padke
love u sakhi शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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11th November 2008, 11:52 PM
Bahut khoob likha aapne ! Apne gamo ki yu numaish na kar, Apne nasib ki yu aazmaish na kar, Jo tera hai tere dar pe khud ayega, Roz roz use pane ki khwaish na kar! Hum to Sagar k SAHIL hain, jis paar jayenge bas thokaren hi khayenge. ~Sahil. |
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bahut khub kaha |
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bahut khub kaha -
12th November 2008, 02:29 AM
a khuda aaj ye faisla kar de .
mujhe uska , ya use mera kar de . bahut gam sahe hai jindagi me maine . aab koi khusi to mera kar de . apke os poem ke badle me yahi kahunga or kuch nahi . |
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13th November 2008, 02:15 PM
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bahut accha laga mandeep ki tumne meri es pheli koshish ko pada aur saraha....aur jane kahaN se doond kar le aaye esko.... shukriya dear tumhari dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th November 2008, 02:15 PM
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Thanks sakhi............................... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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13th November 2008, 07:09 PM
Dua hai kudha se ki na-kaam mohabaat kisi ki hissey na karey,
Ja phir naddan dillo mai mohabat ka diya jagaya na karey” sahii kahaa aapne sunitaa jee kaafi pehle kaa likha hua hai ye magar aisa lagtaa hai uss waQt kaafii dard rahaa hoga ! bhagwaan kare aapko kabhi koi ghum naa ho aur aap sada aise hi hasti muskuraati raheiN daad ke saath apnaa khyaal rakhiye ! |
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