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Ae Pari-rukh! Main Tera Parastaar Hua....!! -
6th March 2010, 10:22 AM
Mehfil-e-Dard k sabhi hazireen ko Adaab!
wo meharbaan hai to ikraar kyoon nahin karta
wo badgumaan hai to souu baar aazmaaye mujhe
Qateel Shifai
tum se beech safar mulaqaat huii, pyar hua!
tum ne, aisa dil per jaadu kiya, aitebaar hua!
pari-zaad! teri makhmoor nighaoon ki qasam
main, tere husn k talism meiN giraftaar hua!
pari-zaad = fay, beautiful
talism = magic, mystery
roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!
shab-e-hijr = night of separation
vasal = meeting
talabgaar = seeker
roz tera roop uroosi joorey meiN sochta hooN!
maiN hi nahi, mera shabistaan bhi beqaraar hua!
uroosi joorey = bridal cloths
shabistaan = bedroom
meri rooh tak betaab hai teri chah mein "HSN"!
ae pari-rukh! maiN teraa "parastaar" hua!
pari-rukh = angel faced
parastaar = lover, adorer
Raaye ka muntazir,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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6th March 2010, 11:33 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hassan
Mehfil-e-Dard k sabhi hazireen ko Adaab!
wo meharbaan hai to ikraar kyoon nahin karta
wo badgumaan hai to souu baar aazmaaye mujhe
Qateel Shifai
tum se beech safar mulaqaat huii, pyar hua!
tum ne, aisa dil per jaadu kiya, aitebaar hua!
pari-zaad! teri makhmoor nighaoon ki qasam
main, tere husn k talism meiN giraftaar hua!
pari-zaad = fay, beautiful
talism = magic, mystery
roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!
shab-e-hijr = night of separation
vasal = meeting
talabgaar = seeker
roz tera roop uroosi joorey meiN sochta hooN!
maiN hi nahi, mera shabistaan bhi beqaraar hua!
uroosi joorey = bridal cloths
shabistaan = bedroom
meri rooh tak betaab hai teri chah mein "HSN"!
ae pari-rukh! maiN teraa "parastaar" hua!
pari-rukh = angel faced
parastaar = lover, adorer
Raaye ka muntazir,,
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hasan bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob...badi hi sundar ghazal hai... khaas taur par matla aur makta dono hi khoobsoorat hai...aise hi likhte rahe
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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6th March 2010, 12:06 PM
Bahut Khoob......Hassan Ji.... Aapki Romantic Peshkash bahut umdaa lagi mujhe.....harek ashaar pari-zaad ! bana hai........ek beautiful creation....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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An Incomplite Dream
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6th March 2010, 02:37 PM
Hasan bhai Salam walekum!
Bahut hi achchi gazal pesh ki hai aapne, per yeh to Ishkiya shayari huyi ise dard section mein kyun dal diye bhai......
Waise puri gazal achchi hai aur sabhi sher pasand aaye,
Younhi likhate rahiye... Daad kabool kijiye....
Khuda Hafez
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7th March 2010, 12:36 PM
Bohat khoobsurat peshkash Hassan Saheb.............
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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Thanks a lot.....IshQ Jii... -
7th March 2010, 02:35 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
hasan bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob...badi hi sundar ghazal hai... khaas taur par matla aur makta dono hi khoobsoorat hai...aise hi likhte rahe
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IshQ Jii,,
Daad is pazeeraayi k liye be-had shukriya.....
Saath dete rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
Faqat,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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7th March 2010, 02:53 PM
Iss khubsurat shayri ke liye aapko daad bhi de chuke hum...!
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=67709
Kuch naye khayaal par zaraa kaam kijiyegaa, ok...? Intazaar hai...!
Duaaon ke saath
With blessings
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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7th March 2010, 07:26 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hassan
Mehfil-e-Dard k sabhi hazireen ko Adaab!
wo meharbaan hai to ikraar kyoon nahin karta
wo badgumaan hai to souu baar aazmaaye mujhe
Qateel Shifai
tum se beech safar mulaqaat huii, pyar hua!
tum ne, aisa dil per jaadu kiya, aitebaar hua!
pari-zaad! teri makhmoor nighaoon ki qasam
main, tere husn k talism meiN giraftaar hua!
pari-zaad = fay, beautiful
talism = magic, mystery
roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!
shab-e-hijr = night of separation
vasal = meeting
talabgaar = seeker
roz tera roop uroosi joorey meiN sochta hooN!
maiN hi nahi, mera shabistaan bhi beqaraar hua!
uroosi joorey = bridal cloths
shabistaan = bedroom
meri rooh tak betaab hai teri chah mein "HSN"!
ae pari-rukh! maiN teraa "parastaar" hua!
pari-rukh = angel faced
parastaar = lover, adorer
Raaye ka muntazir,,
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hassan bhai...kamaal kar diya...
khoob likha hai aapne...ek ek sheyr dil ke tar chhedta hua chala gaya, shayad aisa hi kuch padhne ko taras raha tha....
bahut bahut badhiya.....
ba's daad hi daad hai....qubuul karte jaiye....
aapka dost...
masttt...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
vikramjethi@gmail.com
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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Thanks a lot.....Sir! -
8th March 2010, 10:34 AM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Bahut Khoob......Hassan Ji.... Aapki Romantic Peshkash bahut umdaa lagi mujhe.....harek ashaar pari-zaad ! bana hai........ek beautiful creation....dil se daad hazir hai....yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
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Naresh Jii,,
Is qadar pasandeed'gi k liye be-had shukriya...
Hur dafa, hur baar, hur moqa per aap ka saath milta hai,
to boht hi ziyaada khushi hoti hai......
Apna khiyaal rakhiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
Aap ka,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Boht boht shukriyaa... Bhai! -
9th March 2010, 10:40 AM
Sameer Bhai,,
Pehle to ghazal ko pasand karne k liye boht boht shukriya...
Aur dard meiN is liye post kiya k yeh ishq-aur-dard mix
shayri thi.... bas dard hi meiN daal diya....
Saath dete rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
Aap ka Bhai,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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RooH Se RooH Tak
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9th March 2010, 11:16 AM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
pari-zaad! teri makhmoor nighaoon ki qasam
main, tere husn k talism meiN giraftaar hua!
roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!
meri rooh tak betaab hai teri chah mein "HSN"!
ae pari-rukh! maiN teraa "parastaar" hua!
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ji bhaut khubsoorat ehsaas hai.............................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com
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9th March 2010, 01:08 PM
roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!
kya baat h hasan ji, very nice.....
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Boht boht shukriyaa... -
10th March 2010, 02:17 PM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Bohat khoobsurat peshkash Hassan Saheb.............
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Sajid Sahib,,
Khaak lafzooN ki tareef k liye boht boht shukriya....
Saath dete rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,,
Faqat,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Shukriyaa.. Boss! -
11th March 2010, 01:57 PM
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Boss,,
Dobara is liye post kii, jin nazrooN ne yeh composition
nahi phad'hii thi, woh phad lieN.....
Btw.. Thanks a lot for appreciating and reputation points...
Take very good care of urself,,
With lots of luv & prayers,
Yours,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Mashkoor hooN bhai... -
12th March 2010, 09:50 AM
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hassan bhai...kamaal kar diya...
khoob likha hai aapne...ek ek sheyr dil ke tar chhedta hua chala gaya, shayad aisa hi kuch padhne ko taras raha tha....
bahut bahut badhiya.....
ba's daad hi daad hai....qubuul karte jaiye....
aapka dost...
masttt...
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Vikram Bhai,,
Mere likhay ko itni izzat bakh'shne k liye boht boht shukriyaa,
aap ki daad sir aankhooN per.....
Aise hi saath dete rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
Aap ka,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Boht boht shukriyaa... -
13th March 2010, 09:49 AM
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ji bhaut khubsoorat ehsaas hai.............................
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Radhika Jii,,
Likhay ko pasand karne liye boht boht shukriya...
Saath dete rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
Faqat,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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13th March 2010, 10:35 AM
bahot khoob hassan bhai... aashaar dil ko chu gaye aur bahot apne lage..
likhte rahen.
shaad...
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Shukriyaa... -
15th March 2010, 09:58 AM
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Originally Posted by shipra
roz shab-e-hijr meiN jaagta rehta hooN!
vasal k chund lamhooN ka talabgaar hua!
kya baat h hasan ji, very nice.....
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Shipra Jii,,
Likha pasand karne k liye boht boht shukriyaa...
Saath dete rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,,
Faqat,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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Boht shukriya bhai,, -
17th March 2010, 09:08 AM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
bahot khoob hassan bhai... aashaar dil ko chu gaye aur bahot apne lage..
likhte rahen.
shaad...
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Shaad Bhaii,,
Likhay ko pasand karne aur housla afzaai k liye be-hadd
mamnooN hooN.....
Saath dete rahiye ga,,
DuaooN k saath,
Faqat,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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13th August 2014, 02:22 AM
Naaz!
Seems like its been years we know each other!
Keep coming, keep appreciating!
Take care,
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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