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4th June 2005, 10:34 AM
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roj jevi ek sawaar hati bus aawva ne haji waar hati, etla ma maro fone ranakyo.. vaat vaat ma ek vichar jabukyo... ....mane mari jaat par ketlo prem che? mane mari patibha par ketlo neh chee? e kshan jane kahi rahi.... k mane maara ma kainj nathi gamtu... mane maru jiwvu pan nahi gamtu.... kem aa duniya mane mari nathi lagi rahi.. mara mate aama mane koi jaga...khali nathi lagi rahi.... ek aansu..vahyu..pachii biju... ne pachee rumaal bharaiii gayo.... man ma...fari koi saagar ubhraii gayo... mane khud par j pyaar nathi... toh jiwva no koi....saar nathi... mare ek ajaan vyakti sathe nathi rehvu... bas mare nathi jivvu...! bas mare nathi jivvu...! -komal  |
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4th June 2005, 11:30 AM
Hi Komal,
Gujrat mein paida hua hoon.... isliye thodi bahut samjh leta hoon  lolMagar pura nahi samjh payaa kuch lines samjh mein aayi hain to achi hi honge.... please translate bhi kar do...  Thanks Rohin |
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4th June 2005, 11:36 AM
are..so sweet of u 2 read it.
but its not worth translating..the feeling it has...is not worth sharing also...thts y i wrote in guj..uc!..smart no! so transaltion nahi hoga...! magar...reply k thx alot..dear! tc komal |
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4th June 2005, 01:16 PM
Komal!
How can u judge that its not worth translating or worth sharing.. Tumne likh diya bass ab fataafat translate kardo.... Zyada bhaav kyun khaati ho yaar  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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wah wah -
4th June 2005, 01:20 PM
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atli udasi kyathi tane gheri vali nani amthi chokri kai gehrai ma dubi gai ant ma atlu j kahish take care. |
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5th June 2005, 01:55 PM
its too good...komal..........
vicharo ni dwidha maan khovai ne..sundar rachna nu sankalan karva khub khub aabhar...... thx for sharing.... take care |
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9th June 2005, 06:59 PM
mari priy komal,
khub jaldi aawu chhu tari aa rachna na jawaab ma..... tari di |
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hi -
9th June 2005, 07:44 PM
Dear Komal
Yaar translate to karna hi padega, hey dont say its not worth translation areey hum to punjabi hai yaar....dont know gujju?? well i still read it...the flow sounds cool something i could understand is this is painful writing.....rumal bhar gaya aansu se? man ka sagar ubhar gaya? hai yaar i am trying hard to understand cuz i want to.....help karo na sweetu??Luv ya Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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tari kavita vanchi mane jooni lakheli mari kavita yaad aawi... aaje marwa do......... mane tame aam roko nahi najiva kaaran maate jakdo nahi khub prem karyo zindgi ne maut ne pan chahi lewa do aaj hawe amne marwa do sada tame chata rahya zindgi ne s-ras banavta rahya maut ne aam n thukraao aene pan soonser banva do aaj hawe amne marwa do haal ame khub behaal karya to pan zindgi hasawti rahi maut ne pan hasawa do nahi to amthu ae radwa do aaj hawe amne marwa do ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ tara maan ni vyatha... tapkti rahi aanshu bani ne ek pachhi ek aanshu sarkyu tari palko thhi... ne aankh mari nam thhai tari di |
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9th June 2005, 09:35 PM
hey komal my friend
finally ihave gotten the translaation...hmm where there is a will there is a way.hey yaar why u feel this way? hamare hote tum aissa feel kar rahi ho?? too sad.. care to share??Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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10th June 2005, 09:49 AM
khud ne prem karish to bija ne prem kari sakish....
Didi, Main bhi sie yahi samjha raha thha... Yeh samjhti hi nahi hai...Aap daant lagao iski.. meri taraf se kaan bhi pakadna... ok? Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th June 2005, 03:59 PM
Oh...I dint turn back 2 have a look at this post again!...
dear priya..i dint wanted 2 translate this so tht more ppl cant read it..i posted it..when i was upset..i knew wat m thinking is wrong still i needed 2 drain away those thoughts..so posted here..n tht 2 in GUj!...wel m soryy for not giving translation...! m givivng it now! Didi...tame to jano chho...k hu aam toh smaju chhokri chhu pan kyak kayaek aawu badha sathe Thay..barabar ne?...aj toh jeewan che!tamari kavita ...vanchi...juo tame pan marawa par lakhyu hatu ne?.... ..roj su life par lakhvaanu..4 a change lakhyu!han hu mari jaat ne prem karwa mangu chu..i know one shd love his self 2 be loved. Pulkit YAr...didi ne meri dant nahi layai...:PPP didi pyari hai!... and i completely agree wid u...i was wrong! chalo jane do poem toh achhi thi na!!..thts also important! tc komal |
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10th June 2005, 04:05 PM
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rozana si subha theheri thi ... bus k ane mein kuch deri thi itne mein mera fone chillaya.. bato bato mein ek khayal aya mujhe apne apse kitna pyar hai? mujhe meri pratibha se kitna lagaav hai? voh pal jaise keh raha.. mujhe mujhme kuch nahi pyara mujhe mera jina bhi nahi gawara.. kyu ye duniya mujhe apni nahi lag rahi.. mere liye yaha koi jaga khali nahi lag rahi.. ek aansu baha...phir duja phir rumaal bhar gaya... dil mein phir koi samndarr ubhar gaya.. mujhe khud se hi pyar nahi.. toh jine mein koi saar nahi mujhe ek anjaane insaan k sath nahi rehna... mujhe nahi jina.. bas mujhe ab nahi jina! -komal |
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10th June 2005, 04:26 PM
Komal ji...! I did not complain...but waited patiently for
the translation and it's a pleasure to read such a nice work...! Kouch pouchoun...?Aap ke avatar hamein bahout pasand hai...Wow!Kya ankh hai...!!! It seems to be that of Jolie (Tomb Raider wali) Pardon me if I am mistaken...! Thanks and take care Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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10th June 2005, 04:32 PM
Amanush ji..it s a pleasure 2 have u on my GUj post! really!...wel thts cute of u waited 4 translation..thx a lot for liking it!
Awtaar...apko pasand aya...jan kar achha laga..! i doono whom u'r talkin about...but its one of Illustrations done by me. tc komal |
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10th June 2005, 04:54 PM
Wow...!You created this illustration...?It's a
masterpiece...really!Believe me...Komal ji! Your eye speaks more than a million poetries! Now I understand why Rohin Bhai addresses you as Lady Javed Akhtar...! Do accept my sincere compliments...! Take care Thanks Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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10th June 2005, 05:44 PM
Amanush ji...accepted ur compliments!
baap re...itni izzat dene ka shukriya..! ..aree ye rohin toh yunhi kuch bhi bolte rehta hai...ap uski bato pe na jayeN! tc komal |
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10th June 2005, 07:54 PM
Dost Komal..
kaash aapse milne se pehle iss kalaam se mulaaqaat hui hoti... dang reh gaya aapke ye jazbaat padhkar.. kuch mintoN ki hairat k baad tay kiya k ek baar phir se iss kalaam ko padhooN ye soch kar jaise aapko jaanta hi nahi aur pehli baar aapko padhne ka ittifaaq ho raha hai... sach kahuN to dobara padhne par hairat zara kam hui... qki aksar badhawaasi ki haalat meiN samajhdaar se samajhdaar insaan bhi khud se kuchh aise sawaal poochh baithta hai jinke jawaab uske zehan meiN hi kahiN kho jaate haiN... yaa shayad jawaab aaNsuoN k saath beh jaate hai.. jo khud usse nazar nahi aate... magar shayad aise hi waqt se insaan ko ubaarne k liye 'dost' mauzood hote haiN... kuchh dostoN ne aapke ye jazbaat padhkar sawaaloN ka apne mutaabiq jawaab zaroor diya hoga aur mere khayaal se shayad aap unse sehmat bhi hoNgi.. Komal dost.. jahaaN tak mai samajhta hooN aapki zindagi meiN iss waqt kuchh aise log haiN jinhe aap apna maan sakti haiN... jinse aapko apnapan milta hai... jo Komal ko apna dost maante haiN.. aur jinse komal ko bhi lagaav hai... agar haaN to yahi wazah honi chahiye jeene ki... aapko dostoN se lagaav hai aur dostoN ko aapse... nateeza ye k aapko khud se bhi pyaar hona chahiye... mera khayaal hai k aap mera matlab samajh gayi hoNgi... mujhe apne apse kitna pyar hai? mujhe meri pratibha se kitna lagaav hai? voh pal jaise keh raha.. mujhe mujhme kuch nahi pyara mujhe mera jina bhi nahi gawara.. aur aapko ab in baatoN se shikayat ho jaayegi... haalaaNK pehli baar aapko padha hai.. par daad nahi de sakta... apna khayaal rakhiye... likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye... |
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13th June 2005, 11:32 AM
akshat ji..ap aaye arse ke baad aur apne mera likha kuch padha bhi toh ye...
((...m so unlucky!...wel apke khyalat se me sehmat hu ..aur baki sabhi doston ki baato se bhi...magar mere khayal se zindagi yahi hai..sikhati hui kuch gungunati hui..rulati hui aur hasati hui!..tc thx for coming...hope u read sumthing gud of my writings!tckomal |
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