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Khamoshiya tut si gai jab unhone apni palko.n ko uthaya -
11th February 2008, 10:33 AM
Aap logo ke samne lambe waqt ke bad kuchh pesh kar rhi hun,
isme mene ek esi aashiqi ko bya karne ki koshish ki hai jisme dono shaksh is bat se wakif hai ki wo dono ek dusre se mohbbat karte hai magar dono baya.n nahi kar pate or ye mohbbat khud-b-khud baya.n hoti hai jab ek apne jindagi ke aakhiri pal gujar rha hota hai....... ummid karti hun ki aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayegi.................. Khamoshiya tut si gai jab unhone apni palko.n ko uthaya, Mai hairan tha ki kese unhone ab talak mujhse ye raj chhipaya Roya karte the wo aksar chehare par nakab dale, Or me samjha ki unhone sharm se apna chehara chhipaya Jahan me swal tha ki wo roya kyo kiye? Lab khule to unake hatho.n ko maine mere chehare pe paya Kai javabo.n ko talash kar rhi thi unaki najre, Unake is andaz se mene khud ko unljhano.n ke beech paya Unhe khabar lag chuki thi humare ishaq ki Meri khamoshi ne unako ye raz be-waqt bataya Khush tha ki unhe khabar to lagi humare ishaq ki Magar unhe kese batata ki “khuda ne mujh bande ko yad farmaya” medha jain magar ye raj un tez hawao.n ko kya pta" |
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11th February 2008, 10:59 AM
Dear meDha..!
kaisii ho??? bazm meiN jab bhee aapkii teHreer deKhtaa huuN to baRii KhuShii hotii hay.. aapko paRhnaa Shuruaat sey hi achchhaa lagtaa hai kyuuNki aapki soch baRii geHrii hai.. ees baar bhee umdaah aNdaaz-e-bayaaN paRhne ko milaa aapkaa.. mere dil sey niklii hu'ii DheroN saarii daad-o-tahseen qabUl keejiYeNgaa.. aur YuuNhi liKhate rahiYe aage bhee...! KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN buDhaau..  aapka ~ Dhaval |
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11th February 2008, 11:14 AM
Dear Medha jee
bahut acha likha hai apne wakai tareef ke kabil ........................kaisa-dil |
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khaamoshiya bhi baate karti hai... |
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khaamoshiya bhi baate karti hai... -
26th May 2008, 11:36 PM
khaamoshiya bhi baate karti hai...
jab khayaalo mai woh aate hai... Tanhaaiyaa mahfil ho jaati hai jab khayaalo mai woh aate hai... Kabhi unko raaz e dil bataate hai.. Kabhi unse raaz e dil chupaate hai... kabhi khud hi mai sharmaa ke apna chehra chupaate hai.... E dil...unke isq mai diwaane hue jaate hai... sab se chupaa ke...sirf unko hi yaad kar ke halke se muskuraate hai..  Kyaa har pyaar karne waale ki aise diwaano se halat hoti hai... raato ko jaagte hai ye din mai sote hai... sapno mai jeete hai ye..hakeekat mai rote hai..... |
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27th May 2008, 06:06 AM
bahut khoob, khushi g, bahut changa laggeya tuhadi poetry parh k
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27th May 2008, 04:08 PM
Dhanyawad Chahal ji..
twaanu meri poetry pasand aayi..twada..shukriya.. Khushi~~~~~~~ |
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