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Cool adhuray din - 12th June 2011, 03:12 PM
kya tumnay socha hai kabhi
aaj kal din kyon adhuray lagtay
mein cup par nigaah jamaaye sochti
dhuan mein kya tum taktay
shawl utha kar udhtay kabhi
aaj kal mausam kyon khali lagtay
kaali raaton mein socha hai kabhi
aaj kal din kyon adhuray lagtay
jawaab na do shayad tum
par prashn meray tumko sahi lagtay...
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12th June 2011, 04:16 PM
Sach kahuN Ankita to mujhe aapki post padhna isliye accha lagta hai kyonki kaagaz pe aap alfaaz nahi apne jazbaat apni dhadkane utaar deti hain.. ye koshsih bhi aapki behad masoom hai, jise padhkar apna hi mazaa hai.. bas yoonhi koshish pe koshish karti rahiye, inshallah ek din aap isse bhi zyaada accha likhne lag jaaeNgi.. best wishes.

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14th June 2011, 11:25 AM
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Cool 22nd June 2011, 03:29 PM
Hello Sameer ji,

Thank you f or liking the post. Aap nay samay nikal kar padha. mujhe acha laga.

jeevan ki saralta mann ko bhaati hai
sur, ras, raag ka madhur rang bhar jaati hai...
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Hello Mittal Paliji,

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Cool 16th July 2011, 02:48 AM
adhurapan ka ehsaas kyon hota hai
jab bhi socha dil jaisay khota hai

na tum paas aaye na meinay kadam badhaye
yeh dooriyon ka adhura ehsaas kyon hota hai
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