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Love Shayar - 23rd July 2013, 01:17 AM

aaj phir wo bewafa yaad aaya hai,
jisne mujhe ye din dikhaya hai,
jeene se acha mujhe ab marna lagta hai,
kyunki zindagi ne bahut daraya hai,
bheege panno par likhta hun ab kahani apni,
is zindagi ne bahut rulaya hai,
har ghadi marta hun main til-til,
maut ke intezaar ne mujhe “SHAYAR” banaya hai,


AaJ wo Bhi mEri mayyat mein aaya hai,
jiske dupatte ko maine kafan banaya hai.......
   
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23rd July 2013, 02:38 AM

Wah bhai wah....apne to shayar sabd ka bikul uchit arth bayaan kar diya
   
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23rd July 2013, 05:12 PM

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aaj phir wo bewafa yaad aaya hai,
jisne mujhe ye din dikhaya hai,
jeene se acha mujhe ab marna lagta hai,
kyunki zindagi ne bahut daraya hai,
bheege panno par likhta hun ab kahani apni,
is zindagi ne bahut rulaya hai,
har ghadi marta hun main til-til,
maut ke intezaar ne mujhe “SHAYAR” banaya hai,
Wowwwww ... its so nice.... keep writing and sharing with us....

Shaad....


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24th July 2013, 01:34 AM

Shukriya kumar sagar ji .....hume padhne ka shukriya


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24th July 2013, 01:36 AM

Sameer shaad bhai....aapki shayri jitna acha nahi hai.....bus yunhi kuch lafz likhe hain.....


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26th July 2013, 09:14 AM

its nice......beautifully expressed...



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27th July 2013, 11:38 PM

bheege panno par likhta hun ab kahani apni,
is zindagi ne bahut rulaya hai.

Its too heart touching. thanx for sharing this lovely poem.


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29th July 2013, 10:58 AM

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aaj phir wo bewafa yaad aaya hai,
jisne mujhe ye din dikhaya hai,
jeene se acha mujhe ab marna lagta hai,
kyunki zindagi ne bahut daraya hai,
bheege panno par likhta hun ab kahani apni,
is zindagi ne bahut rulaya hai,
har ghadi marta hun main til-til,
maut ke intezaar ne mujhe “SHAYAR” banaya hai,


wahhh wahhhhh...bahut khoob...hame aapke Signature wala sher bhi bahut khoob lga...!

AaJ wo Bhi mEri mayyat mein aaya hai,
jiske dupatte ko maine kafan banaya hai.......


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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