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हाये कुछ दर्द यूं दवाम आए - 8th November 2014, 11:11 PM

हाये कुछ दर्द यूं दवाम आए
जैसे होंठों पर तेरा नाम आए

गर्द-ए-कू-ए-यार कहाँ ए पा ग़लीज़
तुम जहाँ से आए नाकाम आए

दिल में गम-ए-इश्क़-ओ-दर्द-ए-हिजरां
ये शौक-ए-आशिक़ी के अंजाम आए

वफा की जानिब उठे थे ये कदम
राह में और भी मगर मकाम आए

मौत क्यों रुक गयी थी आते आते
हमें भी तो कुछ देर आराम आए

गम हबीब है की मुझसे मिलने को
गर सुबह ना आए तो शाम आए


- dawaam - continually
-- ghaliz- filthy, dirty


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8th November 2014, 11:36 PM

वफा की जानिब उठे थे ये कदम
राह में और भी मगर मकाम आए

vah vaah kya sheyar hai , daad kabool keejeey


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9th November 2014, 02:53 AM

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हाये कुछ दर्द यूं दवाम आए
जैसे होंठों पर तेरा नाम आए

गर्द-ए-कू-ए-यार कहाँ ए पा ग़लीज़
तुम जहाँ से आए नाकाम आए

दिल में गम-ए-इश्क़-ओ-दर्द-ए-हिजरां
ये शौक-ए-आशिक़ी के अंजाम आए

वफा की जानिब उठे थे ये कदम
राह में और भी मगर मकाम आए

मौत क्यों रुक गयी थी आते आते
हमें भी तो कुछ देर आराम आए

गम हबीब है की मुझसे मिलने को
गर सुबह ना आए तो शाम आए


- dawaam - continually
-- ghaliz- filthy, dirty

corrected the last one
गम हबीब है की हमसे मिलने को
गर सुबह ना आए तो शाम आए


ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
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9th November 2014, 02:54 AM

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वफा की जानिब उठे थे ये कदम
राह में और भी मगर मकाम आए

vah vaah kya sheyar hai , daad kabool keejeey
Thanks Parveen, with regards.............


ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
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9th November 2014, 04:32 AM

Had missed one altogether.

हाये कुछ दर्द यूं दवाम आए
जैसे होंठों पर तेरा नाम आए

गर्द-ए-कू-ए-यार कहाँ ए पा ग़लीज़
तुम जहाँ से आए नाकाम आए

दिल में गम-ए-इश्क़-ओ-दर्द-ए-हिजरां
ये शौक-ए-आशिक़ी के अंजाम आए

वफा की जानिब उठे थे ये कदम
राह में और भी मगर मकाम आए

मौत क्यों रुक गयी थी आते आते
हमें भी तो कुछ देर आराम आए

गम हबीब है की मुझसे मिलने को
गर सुबह ना आए तो शाम आए

कर दिया गले से अलग दुनिया वालो
अब हमारे सिर कोई इल्ज़ाम आए


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9th November 2014, 09:25 AM

Wah janaab bhut aalatareen qalaam bhut rawa.n or pur kashish...daad hazir hai...Raj..


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Wah janaab bhut aalatareen qalaam bhut rawa.n or pur kashish...daad hazir hai...Raj..
Thanks Raj, deeply appreciated..........


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wahhhhhhhhhhh Mayoos ji.....aapki har poetry hame pasand aati hai...bahut accha likhte hai aap...bhagwaan aapki poetry ko unche mukaam tak pahunchaaye.


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Thanks Sunita, with regards...............


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हाये कुछ दर्द यूं दवाम आए
जैसे होंठों पर तेरा नाम आए

गर्द-ए-कू-ए-यार कहाँ ए पा ग़लीज़
तुम जहाँ से आए नाकाम आए

दिल में गम-ए-इश्क़-ओ-दर्द-ए-हिजरां
ये शौक-ए-आशिक़ी के अंजाम आए

वफा की जानिब उठे थे ये कदम
राह में और भी मगर मकाम आए

मौत क्यों रुक गयी थी आते आते
हमें भी तो कुछ देर आराम आए

गम हबीब है की मुझसे मिलने को
गर सुबह ना आए तो शाम आए


- dawaam - continually
-- ghaliz- filthy, dirty
Waah waah....kya baat hai...mayoos ji..daad kabool kijiye.



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Waah waah....kya baat hai...mayoos ji..daad kabool kijiye.
Thanks Madhu.............................................


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