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mausam - 8th May 2011, 08:18 AM
jab chaha kuch jaanoo
awaaz yehi aayi hai
hoon akeli raah anjaani hai
pal do pal kay chand bol
kah panchi ud jaata hai
mein takti neel gagan
dil mera bhar aata hai
kya aisa koi darakht hoga
jahan na mann gabraata hai
chaon ghani us kay talay
mera mann soch khush ho jaata hai...
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10th May 2011, 06:22 AM
nadi kay teer par chupchap khada rahta hai
paid kaviyon ki vishraam jagah ban jaata hai

usi paid par panchi sa mera mann thahara hai
aatay jaatay pathik ki raah dekhta rahta hai

ae kavi tumhari nazar ka intezaar karta rahta hai
is asha mein shayad tasveer ban jaata hai

bhoola kavi ginta lehron ko rahta hai
mann ka panchi phir pyasa rah jaata hai...
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25th May 2011, 03:14 AM
yahan sabhi kavi ya kavitri hain. kya kahin koi panchi bhi hai????
   
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Thanks mittal pali ji.
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26th May 2011, 09:02 AM
nadi kay teer par chupchap khada rahta hai
paid kaviyon ki vishraam jagah ban jaata hai

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Cool 26th May 2011, 09:13 AM
jab bhi chalti hai hawa matwali
hil hil jaati hai paid ki koi daali

baithi hoon usi paid kay neechay
nadiya si chanchal koi meenwali (nayan)

utsukta, ascharye say takti ankhonwali
sunti har kavi say kavita de taali (yahan koi word nahin mil raha tha)

sametay hridye mein kitni kahani
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Namaste Nareshji,

aap ko mera likha acha laga jaan kar mujhe khushi hui. encouragement kartay rahiyega.
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