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Betaabee - 17th April 2013, 11:11 PM
Ehle bazm ki nazr ek choti si koshish


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17th April 2013, 11:59 PM
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zara khamosh rehta huN
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samjh mai kuch nahi aata
bada bechain rehta huN
hawa bhi kuch nahi kehti
saba bhi chup hi rehti hai
nida aksar gale ke
aakhree nukkad talak aa kar
bade dheere se kehti hai
mujhay tum yaad aate ho
mujhay tum yaad aate ho!!! (aslam noor, aslam)
AsSalaamAlaykum Aslam bhaee!

Sub'hanAllah! Kya baat haye...... waaaah! Bayhad khoobsoorti say takmeel ki haye aapnay yay rawaan dawaan nazm...... daastaan e dard qalamband huee haye is purkashish wa puasar nazm mayn! Khaaksaar ki jaanib say bayshumaar daad qaboul farmaayayn aur is iltejaa ko bhi apni tawajjay ataa farmaayayn ki is bazm ko apnay noor e kalaam say baar baar purnoor farmaaya karayn!


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18th April 2013, 07:33 AM
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zara khamosh rehta huN
zara sa shor sunta huN
samjh mai kuch nahi aata
bada bechain rehta huN
hawa bhi kuch nahi kehti
saba bhi chup hi rehti hai
nida aksar gale ke
aakhree nukkad talak aa kar
bade dheere se kehti hai
mujhay tum yaad aate ho
mujhay tum yaad aate ho!!! (aslam noor, aslam)
WaaH ! Aslam Bhai !!

Kyaa KaifiyaT Hai ... Kyaa Ehsaas Nazm Hue HaiN

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Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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18th April 2013, 08:32 AM
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zara khamosh rehta huN
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samjh mai kuch nahi aata
bada bechain rehta huN
hawa bhi kuch nahi kehti
saba bhi chup hi rehti hai
nida aksar gale ke
aakhree nukkad talak aa kar
bade dheere se kehti hai
mujhay tum yaad aate ho
mujhay tum yaad aate ho!!! (aslam noor, aslam)

Assalamoalikum miyaaN... sab khairiyat.... arse baad achaanak prakat hue bhaaijaan, aur aaate hi dhamaaka kar diyaaa... waahhhhh

Aur bhaijaan aapke ehsaasoN ka kya kahuN wallaaahhh..... qayaamat angez....

Wese ye ehsaas filhaal mujhse ziyaadah kaun samajh sakegaa... Bivi maayke jo gayee hai 2 mahino se..... bade apne se lage bhi aapke jazbaat.. Allah mujhe sukoon de aameen.....

Likhte raheN bhai.. bahot nayaab kaarnaama kar guzar gaye aap is baar bhi.. mubaarakbaad mubaarakbaad.... ho zore kalam aur bhi ziyaaadah...

Shaad........

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18th April 2013, 10:11 AM
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18th April 2013, 12:17 PM
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samjh mai kuch nahi aata
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nida aksar gale ke
aakhree nukkad talak aa kar
bade dheere se kehti hai
mujhay tum yaad aate ho
mujhay tum yaad aate ho!!! (aslam noor, aslam)
Wah Wah Wah Wah Wahhhhhh Kia Kehnay Janab Aslam Noor Sahab.... Bahot KHubsurat Lab-o-Lehjay Me Kehi Hai Ye Nazm...
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Sub'hanAllah! Kya baat haye...... waaaah! Bayhad khoobsoorti say takmeel ki haye aapnay yay rawaan dawaan nazm...... daastaan e dard qalamband huee haye is purkashish wa puasar nazm mayn! Khaaksaar ki jaanib say bayshumaar daad qaboul farmaayayn aur is iltejaa ko bhi apni tawajjay ataa farmaayayn ki is bazm ko apnay noor e kalaam say baar baar purnoor farmaaya karayn!
Ahmad Hyderabadi sahab walekum assalaam aapne jis kiraaqdili ke sath nazm ki parzeeraii ki hai meiN uska tahe dil se shukrguzaar huN choti si koshish ko aapne kahN se kahN phucha dia bhut nawaazish yuN hi sath daite rahiye


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Assalamoalikum miyaaN... sab khairiyat.... arse baad achaanak prakat hue bhaaijaan, aur aaate hi dhamaaka kar diyaaa... waahhhhh

Aur bhaijaan aapke ehsaasoN ka kya kahuN wallaaahhh..... qayaamat angez....

Wese ye ehsaas filhaal mujhse ziyaadah kaun samajh sakegaa... Bivi maayke jo gayee hai 2 mahino se..... bade apne se lage bhi aapke jazbaat.. Allah mujhe sukoon de aameen.....

Likhte raheN bhai.. bahot nayaab kaarnaama kar guzar gaye aap is baar bhi.. mubaarakbaad mubaarakbaad.... ho zore kalam aur bhi ziyaaadah...

Shaad........
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saadagee se bhari aapki yeh koShiSh dil ko Chhu gayiin... dil se daad aur duaaeN

KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKhen

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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Ahmad Shakil sahab bhai nazm ki pazeeraii ke liyN bhut bhut shukriyaH, kaagh par raqm baat dil tak phuch jaaye bhala isse badi aur kya baat ho sakti hai nawaazish is hoslaafzaii ke liyN yuN hi sath daite rahiye


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tumhari yaad aati hai
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zara khamosh rehta huN
zara sa shor sunta huN
samjh mai kuch nahi aata
bada bechain rehta huN
hawa bhi kuch nahi kehti
saba bhi chup hi rehti hai
nida aksar gale ke
aakhree nukkad talak aa kar
bade dheere se kehti hai
mujhay tum yaad aate ho
mujhay tum yaad aate ho!!! (aslam noor, aslam)



muje tum yaad aate ho...muje tum yaad aate ho...wahhhh....behad khoobsurat ahsaas...dil ke bahut kareeb rhe aur khaas yeh lafz muje tum yaad aate...muje tum yaad aate ho

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