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30th November 2006, 02:19 PM
Matt kaho,
main hasna bhool gaya hoon,
kyonki main hasna bhoola nahin
bas main hans nahin paata hoon.
Mujhe hamesha yaad rehti hai
Maa ki aas, uske sapney,
woh ghutno ke dard mein
sard subahon ko utthkar
uska kaam karna
main bhool nahin paata.
Chotey ka fataa basta,
jahan se uski kitaabein
muhn ko nikaal
majaak urrati thi mera,
Behan ki woh sooni maang
jiskey rastey bannd hain
kisi anddhi gali ki tarah.
Aur Baba ki pension per
liya gaya woh karz,
jisney utthaaya tha bhaar
meri kaagaz ki degree ka.
Aaj bhi koi daftar mujhe
seerhi charhney nahin deta,
dehleez chooney nahin deta,
paas nahin bulaata
sautella vyavhaar karta hai mujhse.
Aaj Baba pe
ek chadi tak nahin hai
saath chalne ke liye,
Teen maah beet gaye hain
retire huey unko.
Tab se jaane kis tarah
chalta hoga kharch ghar ka,
kaun laata hoga
rotiyaan ghar per.
Mere dost !!!
ab tum hee bataao
main kaise hansu,
kis tarah se hansu ??
Kya mera hasna
sach mein jaroori hai ??
विपिन
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30th November 2006, 03:23 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vipinbox
Matt kaho,
main hasna bhool gaya hoon,
kyonki main hasna bhoola nahin
bas main hans nahin paata hoon.
Mujhe hamesha yaad rehti hai
Maa ki aas, uske sapney,
woh ghutno ke dard mein
sard subahon ko utthkar
uska kaam karna
main bhool nahin paata.
Chotey ka fataa basta,
jahan se uski kitaabein
muhn ko nikaal
majaak urrati thi mera,
Behan ki woh sooni maang
jiskey rastey bannd hain
kisi anddhi gali ki tarah.
Aur Baba ki pension per
liya gaya woh karz,
jisney utthaaya tha bhaar
meri kaagaz ki degree ka.
Aaj bhi koi daftar mujhe
seerhi charhney nahin deta,
dehleez chooney nahin deta,
paas nahin bulaata
sautella vyavhaar karta hai mujhse.
Aaj Baba pe
ek chadi tak nahin hai
saath chalne ke liye,
Teen maah beet gaye hain
retire huey unko.
Tab se jaane kis tarah
chalta hoga kharch ghar ka,
kaun laata hoga
rotiyaan ghar per.
Mere dost !!!
ab tum hee bataao
main kaise hansu,
kis tarah se hansu ??
Kya mera hasna
sach mein jaroori hai ??
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vipin ji
kya kahun kuch samjh nahi aa raha...???????
apka likha jab pada to laga jaise mera dimaag sunn ho chala hai. mere mathe ka khoon jamne laga hai.
bahut khub likhte ho aap..
jaise kisi ke dard ko kagaz par koi utaar raha ho apne shawdoin mein daal ke.
aur woh kagaz bhi utna hi dard liye hai jaisa ki us insaan ke andar ka dard hai.
such dil bhar aata hai apka likha pad kar.
shawb nahi mil rahe hai aur isliye bas yahi khungi bahut asardaar likha hai apne.
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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30th November 2006, 05:42 PM
mere dost vipin ji ko mera namskaar
vipin ji aapki har rachna me jeevan ki vastavikta ke darshan hote hai sach me bahot hi umda likhte ho aap aur ye rachna bhi behtrin se andaz ke sath aapne pesh ki hai bas yehi kahunga k aap ki aage hbi ai rachnaye hume sadapadhne ko mile yehi guzarish karte hai aapse
apna khayal rakhiyenga khus rahiye
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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1st December 2006, 09:21 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vipinbox
Matt kaho,
main hasna bhool gaya hoon,
kyonki main hasna bhoola nahin
bas main hans nahin paata hoon.
Mujhe hamesha yaad rehti hai
Maa ki aas, uske sapney,
woh ghutno ke dard mein
sard subahon ko utthkar
uska kaam karna
main bhool nahin paata.
Chotey ka fataa basta,
jahan se uski kitaabein
muhn ko nikaal
majaak urrati thi mera,
Behan ki woh sooni maang
jiskey rastey bannd hain
kisi anddhi gali ki tarah.
Aur Baba ki pension per
liya gaya woh karz,
jisney utthaaya tha bhaar
meri kaagaz ki degree ka.
Aaj bhi koi daftar mujhe
seerhi charhney nahin deta,
dehleez chooney nahin deta,
paas nahin bulaata
sautella vyavhaar karta hai mujhse.
Aaj Baba pe
ek chadi tak nahin hai
saath chalne ke liye,
Teen maah beet gaye hain
retire huey unko.
Tab se jaane kis tarah
chalta hoga kharch ghar ka,
kaun laata hoga
rotiyaan ghar per.
Mere dost !!!
ab tum hee bataao
main kaise hansu,
kis tarah se hansu ??
Kya mera hasna
sach mein jaroori hai ??
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vipin ji namaskaaR....!
koi shawad nahi hai eski tareef ke liye......!
bas aur bas mubarakbaad hi hai, es dil ko dahla dene wali shayri ke liye......?
aapki dost
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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1st December 2006, 11:26 AM
vipin ji ko raj ka bhut sara pyaar or namaskaar....vipin ji aapko parhkar aisa mehsoos hota hai ki hum kya likhte hain.....jo aap likhte ho.....itni talakh haqkat ko itne seedhe lafzon me byaan karna koi aasaan kaam nahi bhut hunar ki baat hai or us hunar ke hum kayal hain.....aapka har kalaam seedhe dil pe dastak deta hai.....yu hee likhte rahiye....khuda aapko lambi umar or aapki kalam ko rawangi de......take care.....raj.....
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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1st December 2006, 01:16 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vipinbox
Matt kaho,
main hasna bhool gaya hoon,
kyonki main hasna bhoola nahin
bas main hans nahin paata hoon.
Mujhe hamesha yaad rehti hai
Maa ki aas, uske sapney,
woh ghutno ke dard mein
sard subahon ko utthkar
uska kaam karna
main bhool nahin paata.
Chotey ka fataa basta,
jahan se uski kitaabein
muhn ko nikaal
majaak urrati thi mera,
Behan ki woh sooni maang
jiskey rastey bannd hain
kisi anddhi gali ki tarah.
Aur Baba ki pension per
liya gaya woh karz,
jisney utthaaya tha bhaar
meri kaagaz ki degree ka.
Aaj bhi koi daftar mujhe
seerhi charhney nahin deta,
dehleez chooney nahin deta,
paas nahin bulaata
sautella vyavhaar karta hai mujhse.
Aaj Baba pe
ek chadi tak nahin hai
saath chalne ke liye,
Teen maah beet gaye hain
retire huey unko.
Tab se jaane kis tarah
chalta hoga kharch ghar ka,
kaun laata hoga
rotiyaan ghar per.
Mere dost !!!
ab tum hee bataao
main kaise hansu,
kis tarah se hansu ??
Kya mera hasna
sach mein jaroori hai ??
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jhanjhwaat si paida karti hui rachna...
Uncle ji ek lafj apane aaapme ek kahaani duhraati hai... muh chidhaa rahi hai un logo ko jo aaj tarraki ki bakhaan karte hue nahin thakate...
with love
Garv
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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1st December 2006, 06:12 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vipinbox
Matt kaho,
main hasna bhool gaya hoon,
kyonki main hasna bhoola nahin
bas main hans nahin paata hoon.
Mujhe hamesha yaad rehti hai
Maa ki aas, uske sapney,
woh ghutno ke dard mein
sard subahon ko utthkar
uska kaam karna
main bhool nahin paata.
Chotey ka fataa basta,
jahan se uski kitaabein
muhn ko nikaal
majaak urrati thi mera,
Behan ki woh sooni maang
jiskey rastey bannd hain
kisi anddhi gali ki tarah.
Aur Baba ki pension per
liya gaya woh karz,
jisney utthaaya tha bhaar
meri kaagaz ki degree ka.
Aaj bhi koi daftar mujhe
seerhi charhney nahin deta,
dehleez chooney nahin deta,
paas nahin bulaata
sautella vyavhaar karta hai mujhse.
Aaj Baba pe
ek chadi tak nahin hai
saath chalne ke liye,
Teen maah beet gaye hain
retire huey unko.
Tab se jaane kis tarah
chalta hoga kharch ghar ka,
kaun laata hoga
rotiyaan ghar per.
Mere dost !!!
ab tum hee bataao
main kaise hansu,
kis tarah se hansu ??
Kya mera hasna
sach mein jaroori hai ??
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Vipin jee:
namaskaar,
Aap ko paRhna hame hameSha achchha lagta hai.. aap kii har leKh aam insaanoN se aur unki bhavnaaooN se juRi hoti hai aur un ke zindagii par aadhaarit hoti hai.. aur ess baar bhii aap ne jo liKha hai hame pasand aaya.. hasne ke liye khushiyaan bhii honi chaahiye, hasne ki wazah bhii honi chaahiye.. jab zindagii kii yeH pariSthti ho to insaan hase to kaise hase.. zindagii ek jawaab-daari hi ban jaati hai.. voh bas haalat ka Shikaar ho kar rah jaata hai.. aur bhool jaata hai hasna... aur log lahte haiN kii 'usay hasna bhii nahiiN aata'
Apna Khayaal raKhiye,
Mayank
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4th December 2006, 01:08 PM
Vipin ji...sadar namaskaar...
such me great work dil ko jhinjor kar rakh diya...aur u laga ki kuch pal k liye kisi gaav me ek jhopri me ek parivaar ki haalat mere aage rakh di gayi ho...gum ho gai me usi pic.me....aur yahi ek shayer ki uttamta ki pehchaan hai ki padne waala uske likhe me kho jaaye...
aapka ise yaha post karne k liye bahut bahut dhanyewaad...
apna khayaal rakhiyega..
DIL KI TANHAAI KO AASHAAR BANA LETE HAI....
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO KUCHH LIKH LETE HAI....
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4th December 2006, 02:52 PM
Bahut ache sahab!!! kafi murm-sparshi khayal utaara gaya hai!! chhu liye aapne !!!
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