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13th January 2013, 02:09 PM
Too mere saath hoti hai,
Khwabon kee baat hoti hai,
Din ke ujale mein bhi,
Sitaron kee baaraat hoti hai,
Kya doon tujhe main ye sochta hoon,
Phool ko kya phool doon ye sochta hoon,
Teri khushbu se mahakta hai din mera,
Is khushbu ko kya naam doon ye sochta hoon,
Aankhon mein rakhun tujhe ya dil mein rakhun
Bhar lun tujhe bahon mein ya khawabon mein rakhun,
Jo teri ho marji too mujhko bata dena,
Tujhe main saanson mein rakhun ya dhadkan mein rakhun,
Os kee boondon sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Chaand kee roshni sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Rahega hamesha saya banke saath tere,
Taaron kee chaaon sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Tere se meri subah aur shaam hoti hai,
Khwabon se raat bhi badnaam hoti hai,
Mil jaye tera saath umr bhar varna,
Zindagi meri yun hee tamaam hoti hai,
Teri aankhon mein main kho nahin sakta,
Tere kaandhe pe main so nahin sakta,
Hain to bahut aansu meri aankhon mein,
Par tere saamne main ro nahin sakta,
Naa ho payein ek to bhula nahin dena,
Pyaar ko mere kahin sula nahin dena,
Niklaga lahu ab aankhon se mere,
Kisi baat pe mujhe ab rula nahin dena,
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
Arvind Saxena
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13th January 2013, 04:44 PM
bhai bahot acchey...................
aapke kalama ko padhkar Rafi saab ke gaane, "O mere shaahe khubaan" ki yaad aa gai..
Zaroor suniyega... bahot accha likhaa hai aapne.. likhte raheN...
Shaad...
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13th January 2013, 06:08 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by aru
Too mere saath hoti hai,
Khwabon kee baat hoti hai,
Din ke ujale mein bhi,
Sitaron kee baaraat hoti hai,
Kya doon tujhe main ye sochta hoon,
Phool ko kya phool doon ye sochta hoon,
Teri khushbu se mahakta hai din mera,
Is khushbu ko kya naam doon ye sochta hoon,
Aankhon mein rakhun tujhe ya dil mein rakhun
Bhar lun tujhe bahon mein ya khawabon mein rakhun,
Jo teri ho marji too mujhko bata dena,u
Tujhe main saanson mein rakhun ya dhadkan mein rakhun,
Os kee boondon sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Chaand kee roshni sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Rahega hamesha saya banke saath tere,
Taaron kee chaaon sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Tere se meri subah aur shaam hoti hai,
Khwabon se raat bhi badnaam hoti hai,
Mil jaye tera saath umr bhar varna,
Zindagi meri yun hee tamaam hoti hai,
Teri aankhon mein main kho nahin sakta,
Tere kaandhe pe main so nahin sakta,
Hain to bahut aansu meri aankhon mein,
Par tere saamne main ro nahin sakta,
Naa ho payein ek to bhula nahin dena,
Pyaar ko mere kahin sula nahin dena,
Niklaga lahu ab aankhon se mere,
Kisi baat pe mujhe ab rula nahin dena,
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Aru Bhaee Adaab,
Buhat pasand aayee yay kaavish aapki... Kaee ashaar seedha dil ko choo-tay gayay!! Daad qaboul farmayayn aur yoonhee mahfil roashan kartay rahayn!
Duagoh
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16th January 2013, 12:09 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
bhai bahot acchey...................
aapke kalama ko padhkar Rafi saab ke gaane, "O mere shaahe khubaan" ki yaad aa gai..
Zaroor suniyega... bahot accha likhaa hai aapne.. likhte raheN...
Shaad...
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Thanx sameer jee....maine ye gaana suna, sach mein bahut accha hai, yun hee mera confidence badate rahiye.......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
Arvind Saxena
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20th January 2013, 03:49 PM
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Aru Bhaee Adaab,
Buhat pasand aayee yay kaavish aapki... Kaee ashaar seedha dil ko choo-tay gayay!! Daad qaboul farmayayn aur yoonhee mahfil roashan kartay rahayn!
Duagoh
Ahmad
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Thanx ahmad jee......aapka bahut bahut shukriya...aapne ise pasand kiya...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
Arvind Saxena
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20th February 2014, 07:47 AM
ek purani rachna fir se aapke saamne pesh kar raha hun....gaur farmaiyega......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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23rd February 2014, 06:03 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by aru
Too mere saath hoti hai,
Khwabon kee baat hoti hai,
Din ke ujale mein bhi,
Sitaron kee baaraat hoti hai,
Kya doon tujhe main ye sochta hoon,
Phool ko kya phool doon ye sochta hoon,
Teri khushbu se mahakta hai din mera,
Is khushbu ko kya naam doon ye sochta hoon,
Aankhon mein rakhun tujhe ya dil mein rakhun
Bhar lun tujhe bahon mein ya khawabon mein rakhun,
Jo teri ho marji too mujhko bata dena,
Tujhe main saanson mein rakhun ya dhadkan mein rakhun,
Os kee boondon sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Chaand kee roshni sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Rahega hamesha saya banke saath tere,
Taaron kee chaaon sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Tere se meri subah aur shaam hoti hai,
Khwabon se raat bhi badnaam hoti hai,
Mil jaye tera saath umr bhar varna,
Zindagi meri yun hee tamaam hoti hai,
Teri aankhon mein main kho nahin sakta,
Tere kaandhe pe main so nahin sakta,
Hain to bahut aansu meri aankhon mein,
Par tere saamne main ro nahin sakta,
Naa ho payein ek to bhula nahin dena,
Pyaar ko mere kahin sula nahin dena,
Niklaga lahu ab aankhon se mere,
Kisi baat pe mujhe ab rula nahin dena,
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bahut hi sunder bayaan kiye hai aapne dil ke jazbaat. Mubarak ho aur likhte rahiyen.
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23rd February 2014, 04:41 PM
waaah waaah bahot khub.....................
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24th April 2014, 10:14 AM
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bahut hi sunder bayaan kiye hai aapne dil ke jazbaat. Mubarak ho aur likhte rahiyen.
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thanx hardev jee...............aapne apna keemti waqt diya uske liye shukriya........
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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14th May 2014, 08:57 AM
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waaah waaah bahot khub.....................
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thanx a.lot masoom pyaar jee.......................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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22nd October 2014, 03:35 PM
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Originally Posted by aru
Too mere saath hoti hai,
Khwabon kee baat hoti hai,
Din ke ujale mein bhi,
Sitaron kee baaraat hoti hai,
Kya doon tujhe main ye sochta hoon,
Phool ko kya phool doon ye sochta hoon,
Teri khushbu se mahakta hai din mera,
Is khushbu ko kya naam doon ye sochta hoon,
Aankhon mein rakhun tujhe ya dil mein rakhun
Bhar lun tujhe bahon mein ya khawabon mein rakhun,
Jo teri ho marji too mujhko bata dena,
Tujhe main saanson mein rakhun ya dhadkan mein rakhun,
Os kee boondon sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Chaand kee roshni sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Rahega hamesha saya banke saath tere,
Taaron kee chaaon sa hai ye pyaar mera,
Tere se meri subah aur shaam hoti hai,
Khwabon se raat bhi badnaam hoti hai,
Mil jaye tera saath umr bhar varna,
Zindagi meri yun hee tamaam hoti hai,
Teri aankhon mein main kho nahin sakta,
Tere kaandhe pe main so nahin sakta,
Hain to bahut aansu meri aankhon mein,
Par tere saamne main ro nahin sakta,
Naa ho payein ek to bhula nahin dena,
Pyaar ko mere kahin sula nahin dena,
Niklaga lahu ab aankhon se mere,
Kisi baat pe mujhe ab rula nahin dena,
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Waah waah arvind ji....mohabbat me doobi huyi..ek bahut sundar nazm....kahna padega koi bahut khushnaseeb hai jiske liye ye jazbaat piroye hain aapne...
likhte rahiye ...
khush rahiye...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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22nd October 2014, 10:27 PM
Achaa laga nazm padh ke nazuk ahsas hain
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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