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Love Kitna Pyara Hai Tu ~ Rudrah - 21st February 2015, 03:04 AM

Na chaand hai na tara hai tu
Phir bhi kitna pyara hai tu

Duniya chahe kuch bhi kahe
Maa baap ka apna dulara hai tu

Raaste sabhi teri hi or aayen
Kashti ka humari kinara hai tu

Dard ki dawa, marham zakham par
Ankhon ka haseen nazara hai tu

Roshan hai zindagi tumse Rudrah
Ananthpak, pari ka sitara hai tu


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21st February 2015, 03:11 AM

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Na chaand hai na tara hai tu
Phir bhi kitna pyara hai tu

Duniya chahe kuch bhi kahe
Maa baap ka apna dulara hai tu

Raaste sabhi teri hi or aayen
Kashti ka humari kinara hai tu

Dard ki dawa, marham zakham par
Ankhon ka haseen nazara hai tu

Roshan hai zindagi tumse Rudrah
Ananthpak, pari ka sitara hai tu


Waaaaaahhhhhhh!!! Bohat khoob....kya kehne....lajawab...chupke chupke shayri :P





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Jab tak tum hum mile na the

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21st February 2015, 06:15 AM

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Na chaand hai na tara hai tu
Phir bhi kitna pyara hai tu

Duniya chahe kuch bhi kahe
Maa baap ka apna dulara hai tu

Raaste sabhi teri hi or aayen
Kashti ka humari kinara hai tu

Dard ki dawa, marham zakham par
Ankhon ka haseen nazara hai tu

Roshan hai zindagi tumse Rudrah
Ananthpak, pari ka sitara hai tu
Pareeneta ji ...

Ek ma ke sneh , mamta , dular aur pyar ko atisundarta se shabdon meiN piroya hai aapne , ki per ke man gadgad aur mantramugdh ho gaya .

Very simple but beautiful poetry ..We also wish and pray that Rudra remains the apple of eye of Praneeta and Anant.

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21st February 2015, 11:54 AM

Bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai apne bete ke liye...ek maa ke dil ke sachche jazbaat...
blessings for ur son...
Aate rahein..
aur yoon hi mafil sajati rahein..



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27th February 2015, 09:43 AM

Roshan hai zindagi tumse Rudrah
Ananthpak, pari ka sitara hai tu


waaaaaaaaaaah.. waaaaaaaaaaaaah..

kia baat hy.. Pari dear... bohat bohat khoob....
apne piyaare sy bacche ky liye bohat hii piyaara sa kalaam sajaaya hy...

stay blessed...


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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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27th February 2015, 02:22 PM

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Na chaand hai na tara hai tu
Phir bhi kitna pyara hai tu

Duniya chahe kuch bhi kahe
Maa baap ka apna dulara hai tu

Raaste sabhi teri hi or aayen
Kashti ka humari kinara hai tu

Dard ki dawa, marham zakham par
Ankhon ka haseen nazara hai tu

Roshan hai zindagi tumse Rudrah
Ananthpak, pari ka sitara hai tu
kyA jAZBAATH HAIN ananthpak JI,, JI KHUSH HOGYA DEKH K
   
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Love god bless him - 23rd April 2015, 03:49 PM

Dear Pari..........yeh maa ki mamta hai jo aik aik lafz se chalak rhi hai, bahut hi pyare ehsaas hai jo tumne share kiye hai ham sabke saath...bhagwaan chutku ko lambi umr de...ameen

bahut saare pyar ke saath
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28th April 2015, 10:32 PM

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Na chaand hai na tara hai tu
Phir bhi kitna pyara hai tu

Duniya chahe kuch bhi kahe
Maa baap ka apna dulara hai tu

Raaste sabhi teri hi or aayen
Kashti ka humari kinara hai tu

Dard ki dawa, marham zakham par
Ankhon ka haseen nazara hai tu

Roshan hai zindagi tumse Rudrah
Ananthpak, pari ka sitara hai tu
Wah wah praneeta Ji bahut Sundar vivrN kiya hai aapne apni mamtaa ka yahan, god bless you and your family.



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29th April 2015, 08:28 AM

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Na chaand hai na tara hai tu
Phir bhi kitna pyara hai tu

Duniya chahe kuch bhi kahe
Maa baap ka apna dulara hai tu

Raaste sabhi teri hi or aayen
Kashti ka humari kinara hai tu

Dard ki dawa, marham zakham par
Ankhon ka haseen nazara hai tu

Roshan hai zindagi tumse Rudrah
Ananthpak, pari ka sitara hai tu

Bohot achhae ehsaas ko aapne sundar shabdoN se sajaaya hai. Dil se daad qubool farmaayein.
Yunhi likhte rahiyegaa.


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