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wafa shukriya - 26th April 2006, 08:41 PM
tum ne jis tarah se mujhe parha hai ya parhtee ho shayer kee khushnaseebee hotee hai bahut achha lagata hai likhne ke baad tumhara likha parhana ummeed karata hoon aur achha likh sakoonga kabhee naummeed nahee karoon ye meree khwahish hai
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Re: ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 7th June 2006, 05:06 PM
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kabhee kabhee main aur meree kavita ghanton baithe baten karte hain. main is pagli ko bahut kuch samjhata rahata hoon batata rahata hoon nahee suntee kuch. jo kahana hai wahee kahana hai jaise kahana hai waise hee kahana hai tab kabhee kabhee main meree kavita par kavita likhta hoon aisee hee ek rachana hai ye.main janata hoon mere sare shayer dost kabhee na kabhee is dard se guzrate hain samjh jayenge dil kee baat
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dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
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isee per se gire the ik din
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ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane
kya baat hai aapne kavita se bhi bahut khub kavita banaai hai anil ji.
yuhi likhte rahiye kuch alag sa.
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shukriya sakhi - 7th June 2006, 09:05 PM
bahut bahut shukriya sakhi bahut achha laga tum is rachna par ayeen har jagah tumhara ana achha lagata hai
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shukriya - 7th June 2006, 09:07 PM
rubeena shuriya dobara se is rachana par ane ke liye achha laga mujhe
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28th September 2008, 11:03 PM
ye muzre kee bastee hai
aur teree peera meera ke geet
kyon too dekh rahee hai preet
kahan milega tujh ko meet
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
yadon ke phir par gaye jhoole
isee per se gire the ik din
isee shakh par phir tum jhoole
asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane



anil ji jawaab nahi aapki nazam ka.........bahut khoob kaha aapne....!
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane


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