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23rd May 2015, 08:10 PM
Meri ankhon ko fir se nam kar gayi hai
Ye barish jo aayi sitam kar gayi hai.
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
Mujhe bijliyon ne daraya bahut par..
Tu nazdeek aaya karam kar gayi hai.
Badan bheegne se bacha to liye the..
Dilon par ye barish zulam kar gayi hai..
Na poocho madhu se vajah bekhudi ki.
Ye barsaat kya beraham kar gayi hai. .
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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23rd May 2015, 11:18 PM
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Meri ankhon ko fir se nam kar gayi hai
Ye barish jo aayi sitam kar gayi hai.
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
Mujhe bijliyon ne daraya bahut par..
Tu nazdeek aaya karam kar gayi hai.
Badan bheegne se bacha to liye the..
Dilon par ye barish zulam kar gayi hai..
Na poocho madhu se vajah bekhudi ki.
Ye barsaat kya beraham kar gayi hai. .
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Bahut khoob Madhu....yeh ehsaas dil ke bheter se waah churaa laaye, yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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24th May 2015, 09:03 AM
Waah bas ab to dil kar raha hai yaha bhi barish ho hi jaaye.
Bas mujhe laga ismen dard to hai hi saath saath, ishq bhi hai aur tadap bhi hai.
Loved it.
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24th May 2015, 08:47 PM
Meri ankhon ko fir se nam kar gayi hai
Ye barish jo aayi sitam kar gayi hai.
waaahh kyaa khoobsurat matlaa uthaayaa hai.....
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
waaahh waahhh bas waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Mujhe bijliyon ne daraya bahut par..
Tu nazdeek aaya karam kar gayi hai.
accha sher hai....
Badan bheegne se bacha to liye the..
Dilon par ye barish zulam kar gayi hai..
hmmm................
Na poocho madhu se vajah bekhudi ki.
Ye barsaat kya beraham kar gayi hai.
kyaa baat hai Shaaayraa saahibaa.......... kamaal kar diyaa is baar bhi aapne.... behtereen ghazal huii is baar bhii....... merii taraf se bahot si daad pesh hain..... likhtii rahen, khush rahen......
Shaad......
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7th June 2015, 02:23 PM
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Bahut khoob Madhu....yeh ehsaas dil ke bheter se waah churaa laaye, yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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Shukriya mast jii...aapki waah pakar dil ko sukoon hasil hota hai....
Aate rahein...
khush rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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7th June 2015, 04:50 PM
Madhu jee....aap kitni aasaani se gehri gehri baatein kar jati hain......ye khoobi mujhe bhi sikhayie....its always feel good to read you.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
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7th June 2015, 09:24 PM
Madhu ji ...uff ye kya ker diya aapne..
Baarish mein bheege ehsason se humare dil.pe sitam ker diya..
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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7th June 2015, 09:58 PM
Madhu ji namaste,
Behad umdah gazal hui hai.....lajawab ehsaas...aur aapki gazaloon me ek khaas baat y hoti hai k bohot swift ekdam lay me likhti hain aap
Dheeroon daad
Aapka apna
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7th June 2015, 10:16 PM
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Meri ankhon ko fir se nam kar gayi hai
Ye barish jo aayi sitam kar gayi hai.
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
Mujhe bijliyon ne daraya bahut par..
Tu nazdeek aaya karam kar gayi hai.
Badan bheegne se bacha to liye the..
Dilon par ye barish zulam kar gayi hai..
Na poocho madhu se vajah bekhudi ki.
Ye barsaat kya beraham kar gayi hai. .
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kya baat hai madhu jee bahut khoob likha hai aapne
likhti rahen
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15th June 2015, 05:42 PM
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Waah bas ab to dil kar raha hai yaha bhi barish ho hi jaaye.
Bas mujhe laga ismen dard to hai hi saath saath, ishq bhi hai aur tadap bhi hai.
Loved it.
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Thank u sarika...sahi kaha jahaan ishq vahaan dard to hoga hee....,
dekho barish bhi aa gayi hai...ab aap bhi aa jao...missing u....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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7th July 2015, 12:40 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Meri ankhon ko fir se nam kar gayi hai
Ye barish jo aayi sitam kar gayi hai.
waaahh kyaa khoobsurat matlaa uthaayaa hai.....
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
waaahh waahhh bas waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Mujhe bijliyon ne daraya bahut par..
Tu nazdeek aaya karam kar gayi hai.
accha sher hai....
Badan bheegne se bacha to liye the..
Dilon par ye barish zulam kar gayi hai..
hmmm................
Na poocho madhu se vajah bekhudi ki.
Ye barsaat kya beraham kar gayi hai.
kyaa baat hai Shaaayraa saahibaa.......... kamaal kar diyaa is baar bhi aapne.... behtereen ghazal huii is baar bhii....... merii taraf se bahot si daad pesh hain..... likhtii rahen, khush rahen......
Shaad......
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Shukriyaaa...shukriyaaa.... shukriya...har sher par comments ke tah e dil se shukriya.....aapki inayton ki shukraguzaar hoon...yoon hee sath dete rahiyega bas yahi iltzaa hai...
salamat raheinn
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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9th July 2015, 09:27 AM
nazuk pyaree dil ko chooen walee tahreer
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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12th July 2015, 06:43 AM
Kis Khoobsurti Se Romaani Khayaalaato Ko
Naazuki MoDh Diya Hai ... Dilkash Bayaani Ke Saath
PaDhte Hi Banta Hai ... Madhu Ji
Bahut UmdaaH ... WaaH
Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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12th July 2015, 09:51 AM
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Meri ankhon ko fir se nam kar gayi hai
Ye barish jo aayi sitam kar gayi hai.
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
Mujhe bijliyon ne daraya bahut par..
Tu nazdeek aaya karam kar gayi hai.
Badan bheegne se bacha to liye the..
Dilon par ye barish zulam kar gayi hai..
Na poocho madhu se vajah bekhudi ki.
Ye barsaat kya beraham kar gayi hai. .
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Saadgi se bhari khoobsurat bayaani... Loved every line of it...
Ehsaas khoobsurati se bayaan kiye hain aur aashaar me saadgi hai, yeh saadgi yun hi banaaye rakhiyega... Meri dil se daad kubool kijiye, apna khayal rakhiye
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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9th August 2015, 12:37 AM
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Madhu jee....aap kitni aasaani se gehri gehri baatein kar jati hain......ye khoobi mujhe bhi sikhayie....its always feel good to read you.....
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Mujhe khushi hai aru ji..ki apko ye ehsaas pasand aaye...
Koi khoobi nahi bas dil ki batein hain jinhe likhna yahiin aap sab ko padh kar hee seekha hai maine....
Bas yoon hee sath dete rahein. .........
Khush rahein......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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4th September 2015, 03:53 PM
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Madhu ji ...uff ye kya ker diya aapne..
Baarish mein bheege ehsason se humare dil.pe sitam ker diya..
Sanjay Sehgal
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Shukriya sanjay ji.....
Sher aap sab ko pasand aaye to khud b khud unki keemat badh gayi...
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Yoon hee hausla badhate rahiyega.......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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4th September 2015, 04:12 PM
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Meri ankhon ko fir se nam kar gayi hai
Ye barish jo aayi sitam kar gayi hai.
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
Mujhe bijliyon ne daraya bahut par..
Tu nazdeek aaya karam kar gayi hai.
Badan bheegne se bacha to liye the..
Dilon par ye barish zulam kar gayi hai..
Na poocho madhu se vajah bekhudi ki.
Ye barsaat kya beraham kar gayi hai. .
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Dear Madhu...bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne....sabhi sher pasand aaye. yeh aik sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha.
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
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23rd September 2015, 07:26 PM
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Madhu ji namaste,
Behad umdah gazal hui hai.....lajawab ehsaas...aur aapki gazaloon me ek khaas baat y hoti hai k bohot swift ekdam lay me likhti hain aap
Dheeroon daad
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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Aapke sath aur hausle ka behad shukriya bhushan ji...
Aate rahiyega...
Khush rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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21st October 2015, 12:55 PM
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kya baat hai madhu jee bahut khoob likha hai aapne
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
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bahut bahut shukriya ishq ji........
khush rahiye .....
aate rahiye...............
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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21st October 2015, 12:56 PM
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nazuk pyaree dil ko chooen walee tahreer
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bahut bahut shukriya anil ji.....
aage bhi aapke sath ki ummeed rahegi...
tkcr...
regards....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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16th November 2015, 12:10 PM
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Kis Khoobsurti Se Romaani Khayaalaato Ko
Naazuki MoDh Diya Hai ... Dilkash Bayaani Ke Saath
PaDhte Hi Banta Hai ... Madhu Ji
Bahut UmdaaH ... WaaH
Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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apko bayangi aur ehsaas pasand aaye..
meri khushnaseebi hai naresh ji....
apka sneh aur asheerwaad milta rahe yahi dua hai...
apna khayaal rakhein..
regards
madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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3rd December 2015, 10:31 PM
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Saadgi se bhari khoobsurat bayaani... Loved every line of it...
Ehsaas khoobsurati se bayaan kiye hain aur aashaar me saadgi hai, yeh saadgi yun hi banaaye rakhiyega... Meri dil se daad kubool kijiye, apna khayal rakhiye
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Pulkit ji..aapne itne achche se ghazal ko padha aur pasand kiya bahut achcha laga.....
Dil se shukriya aapka..
Aise hee sath dete rahiyega...
Takecare..
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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24th December 2015, 05:56 PM
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Dear Madhu...bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne....sabhi sher pasand aaye. yeh aik sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha.
Kadam se kadam ham milakar chale the..
Alag kyun ye rahein sanam kar gayi hai.
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Thank u di.....aapko pasand aaya achchs laga mujhe .
Aati rahiyega....
Regards..
Madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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