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Eik Benaam Nazm ....Kuch yaadon ke naam ! -
26th September 2007, 06:15 AM
Adaab arz hei Ehl e bazm,
Apki mehfil mein ye hamaree dosri adnaa kaavish jisko liye Maham hazir hei , Eik nazm angrezi mein chispaan ki hei apki basaraton ke liye .........aur ab urdu ki tukbandi haazir kar rahe hein Gumaan hei ke hum likh paate hein magar ehsaas hei apni kam maiygee ka ...... Lafzon ke beqeemat hone ka ehsas to hei magar in lafzon ke seep mein jo jazbe band kar dete hei Maham vo buahat qemtee hein aur dua hei ke in motiyon ki aap hifazat kar sakain ge Toote phoote lafzon pe mushtamil ye adnaa kaavish jisko koi naam na de sakee maham.......... aap ki nazr kar rahe hon Pasand ajaye to daad de dijiye ga Na ayae to bardasht kar lijiye ga PS: Maikash sahab , agar ye nazm is forum ke laiq na ho to ap isko us forum mein transfer kar dijiye ga jahan iski sahe jagha hei , Lijiye apke hukum ki tameel mein haazir hei ye nazm ........... Suhaag raatain theen gulaab sa'atain theen sahaab baatain theen Qadam qadam khushi chun rahe the palak palak khawb bun rahe the purkaif saree faza thee zeest tab khawbon ka silsila thee un suhaag raaton mein un gulaab saa'aton mein uski sahaab baaton mein jis pal qadam qadam khushi chun rahe the palak palak kahwb bun rahe the Khabar na thee mujhe ke bichar ke vo phir mil na paye ga murjha gaya jo lamha vasl ka dobara vo khil na paye ga mere muqadar ki jitni suhaag raatain theen jis qadar gulaab sa'atain theen tamaam jo saahaab baatain theen kali kali jo vasl ki khili thee taqdeer se jo bhi khushi milli thee Uski meeiyaad ab khatm hoee hur kali vasl ki bhasm hoee Ab mein hon aur azaab raatain hein bekhata saza patee maasoom chahatain hein samataoun men gonjtee teri baatain hein Raakh kartee dilko teree yaadain hein Ab na suhaag raatain hein Na aab gulaab saa'atain hein |
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26th September 2007, 05:27 PM
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Maham jee: aadaab arz hai! sab se pahle mai.n apne aur puure shayri.com kii jaanib se aap ka is mehfil me.n khushamadeedh karta huu.n.. aur mujhe ummeed hai kii aap ke aane se yaqeenan mehfil kii raunak afzaa'ii hogii.. aap ne jis saadagii ke saath apne aap ko yahaa.n pesh kiya hai, paDh kar dil baaGh-baaGh ho gaya...  aap kii yeh nazm kis tarah mere dil ko bhaayii hai mai.n bayaan nahii.n kar paa rahaa huu.n.. lafzo.n kii kamii behad khal rahee hai is waqt! aur aap ke in dard bhare aashaar par waah waah karne kii gustaakhi kar raha hai yeh dil! bohat hii khuub-suurati ke saath apne ehsaas ko lafzo.n me.n baa.ndhaa hai.. aap ko paRh kar mujhe laga kii me.n parveen shaakir ki koii nazm paRh raha huu.n. bohat lutf aaya! dili daad aur mubaaraq baad deta huu.n, qubool farmaaiyegaa! ummeed hai ham aage bhii aap ko paRhte rahe.nge.... mayank |
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26th September 2007, 06:10 PM
namaste..aapka shayri.com par haardik swagat hai mam..saath hi me hamare dil me bhi
 mai bhot choti hu par itna jaanti hu k aapne jo bhi likha h itna accha h k shayd aaj shabd kam pad rahe h taarif me..sachmuch kaabil e taarif h ye post..aapse request h k ese hi mehfil sajaate rahiyega..sada khush rahiye..muskarate rahiye..bhot khoob likhti hain aap..lagta h kaafi lambe arse se likh rahi hain..sach dil khush ho gaya aaj itne dino baad..
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26th September 2007, 08:54 PM
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Adaab arz hei , Apki ye tehreer parh ke hamae nai pata hum kiya kahein Ap kitne bare dilke hein ke ap ne is adna see kaavish ko is tarz se saraha ke vo ach lagne lagee hamae khud hee Bazm mein hamara saugat karne ke liye bauhat shukriya Maynak ji , Maham ka dil yehe chahta hei ke vo jo likh rahee hie usko daad mile na mile magar usko koi samjh sake , koi mehsus kare koi apne ander jazb kare aur jab jab aisa hota hei Maham itaaaaaa sara wala khush ho jatee hei aur abhi aisa hee hoa Hum bauhat din se to nai likh rahe bas kuch hee mudat hoee hei tukbandi karte hoay waise bhi saree umr bahar ke mumaalik mein rahe hein tou is liye urdu bhi buahat achi nai hei aur phir koi islaah karne wala bhi nai hei so bas hum to aise hee likh daalte hein Sirf itna jantee hei Maham ke vo ansu jo palkon pe bojh bane rehte the , vo dharkanain jo dil mein b etarteeb ho jaya kartee theen , dard ke vo toofaan jo ander uth ke ander hee dum tor dete the , unko tamaam ko lafzon ke supurd kar ke kuch ji halka ho jata hei ..........warna hamae likhna nai ata sach yehe hei Aap ne in lafzon ko hamare itna qeemtee bana diya is ke liye hum apke behud mumnun thehre Maynak ji , Thanx hazaroun gulistaan for all ur precious wordz with all my due repsects sir, MahamAzmi |
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26th September 2007, 08:59 PM
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Achi see Anamika ji , Apki umr ka to nahi andaza magar haan ita zaror hei ke aap mehsus karne ki salahiyat rakhtee hein aur yehe sab se eham baat hotee hie sher parhne aur likhne ke liye ,iska jismani umr se koi taluq nai hota Aap ne itee apnaiyat se reply kiya hei ke dil ko acha acha laga buahat :-) Hum kite din se likh rahe hein iska javab abhi uper mayanak ji ke javab mein likh aye hein Hamae likhna nai ata magar aap sab ki daad ne hausla zaroor diya hie Apke is bauhat sweet se reply ke liye shukriya nai kahe gee Maham ke vo apnaiyat ko kahtam kar deta hie itaaaa sara pyar apke liye Maham Azmi:-) |
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27th September 2007, 07:04 AM
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Ab aate hai aapke kalaam par ....to kya kahe aapne itana badhiyaa likha hai ki i just dont have no words to express myself ..... its just too good. Par saath aapka is nazm mai chhupa hua dard bhi mahesoos kiya ....bas rab se yahi duaa hai ki ...aapki zindagi ek baar phoolon si khil jaaye ...aur aur zindagi ka har lamha ....kaliyon ki tarha mahekta rahe ....apana khayaal rakhiyega. Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe, Aapki Dost: Gudia Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe. Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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27th September 2007, 12:38 PM
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Achi see Guriya sahiba adaab arz hei apke piyar bhare suagat ka behud shukriya Nazm apko pasand ayee bhala laga sun kar janab :-) apki dee hoee itni apnaiyat bhari duaain dil mein ghar kar gayeen ....... Thanx hazaroun gulistaan for all ur wordz here , MahamAzmi |
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27th September 2007, 01:33 PM
wow!!!!!!!!!
AApka swagat hain SDC par...waise to yeh apki dusri post mein mera dusra reply hain..dekha jaaye to swagat pehli post pe karna chahiye..par apke woh masterpiece mein khoke hum to bhul hi gaye....swagat karna Is post ki bhi kya tarif karu....sachmein........jaise ki mayankjee ne kaha ..parveenji ka kalam par rahe hain aisa laga raha hain....truly wonderfull..dil se daad kubool kare......aise hi is bazm ki ronak badhate rehna.... aapki agli post ka intezaar rahega.. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th September 2007, 01:35 PM
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Ab aata hoon aap ki nazm par, aap ki nazm padh kar yun lagaa ki hamaare is shayri pariwaar ne ek zavaaheerakam paa liya hai aur saath men aap ka yeh nageena-e-nazm jo padhte hee dil-o-dimag par chhaa jaata hai. mere paas is ki taariff ke liye labz hee nahee aur hote to bhi kam padte. Emk mukammal nazm par meri dil se mubaarakbaad kabool kare.har sher khud hee apnee taariff kartaa hai, ghazab ka hunar hai mahotarma aap ke haatho men. Aur ham sab is ki kadr karte hai. aap ke agle kalaam ka intzaar rahega ham sab ko. phir se ek baar is nazm par mubarakbaad kabool kare. bahut hee sulze hue aur umdaa khayaalt hai is nazm men aap ke. yunhee likhate rahiyega aur khush rahiyega apna khayal rakhiyega,yunhee apne keematee nageene is mehfil men laate rahiyega taaki ham sab aap se kuchh sheekh sake ALLAH-HAAFIS regards manu |
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27th September 2007, 01:43 PM
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I really really sit here all blushed not knowing wat to say and how to say it all ......... hum to kuch bhi nahi koi nahi , hamaree tehreer ki koi heciyat nahi magar ap sab ne mil kar apne qeemtee lafzon se isko itna mautabar bana diya Hamae sachmuch nai samjh araha ke hum kya kahain siwa shukriyae ke Is adnaa see kaavish ki itni pazirayee .............heran se bethe hein hum ke kiya kahain Thanx hazaroun gulistan janab , Aapki zarhanavazi hei aur kiya kahein .......... due respects MahamAzmi |
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27th September 2007, 01:46 PM
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Mohtaram Hazrat , I m lost for wordz here for sure!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aap tamaam ehbaab ki itni pazirayee aisa suagat hum ne socha na tha aap sab ki mohabbatain hein janab apki firaaghdilli hei ke aap ne yun humein parha aur yun hamare adnaa see kaavish ko saraaha .... Lafzon ki qilat mehsus kar rahe hein ke kahain to kiya kahain kaise shukriya ada karen .... I m truely obliged and deeply touched by ur chiverlous comments and ur courtesy THANX HAZAROUN GULISTAN , SIR, due respects MahamAzmi |
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27th September 2007, 03:36 PM
Maham ji a-slaam-walekum aur dil se suwagat hai aapka apne es SDC pariwaar meiN.....aapne to aatey hi kamaal kar diya....aapki phele post hi padi hai maine aur yeh bahut khoob lagi...fursat miltey hi aapko padna chahungi....aatey rahiye aur yu hi likhtey rahiye.
dil se daad kabool kijiye. kush rahiye .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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27th September 2007, 03:46 PM
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Kamaal Maham ka kiya , kamal to aap sab ehbab ki faraaghdilli ka hei sahab , aap sab ne yun pazirayee kee yun suagat kiya hamare adnaa see kaavishon ka ke sachmuch mein hum toheran bethe hein ke kiya kahain kiya na kahain ....... Ji hum ne 2 aur posts kee hein nazmain ...............yunhee bass haqeer see kaavishain , apka dil kare to zaroor nigah daliyae ga janab ye to hamaree khushbakhti ho gee Aapki is apnaiyat bharee pyaree see daad ke liye dher sara pyar Maham Azmi |
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27th September 2007, 05:25 PM
ADAAB MAHAM JI ..........................
APki kavish to bahut khoob lagi dil chahta hai ki padta hi rahoun ehsaas aur andaaz dono hi umda rahe ek acchi koshish par mer dili daad hazir hai kubool ho......... Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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27th September 2007, 05:39 PM
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ye mehaz apka husn ne nazar hie hazur ke apko ye adnaa tehreer is darje bhayee aapke tamaam lafzon ke liye apki mumnun thehree Maham Zarahnavazi ke liye behud shukriya Wid all my due respects ,sir, Thanx hazaorun gulistan MahamAzmi |
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27th September 2007, 05:44 PM
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27th September 2007, 05:49 PM
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Adaab arz hei Ji Maham bhi sharmsaar hei , jaane kiya nazar aya sabhi ko hamaree haazir karda dono hee kaavishon mein ke jo itna saraha Shayed ke is bazm ke afraad buahat he faaraghdil hien buahat bhale hein ke jo yun hauslaafzayee karte hein Aapka ,Raj sahab , behud shukriya yun hamara suagat karne keliye .......... aapke tamaam alfaaz Maham ke liye behud qemtee Thanx hazaroun gulistan , sir , for all ur words u just bestowed on me here Due Respects MahamAzmi |
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8th November 2007, 10:10 AM
Mahamji,
kisi ka dukh poori tarah koi(hum) samajh sake aisa to nahin keh sakte...lekin aapne is dard ko ek tehreer main likh kar apne jahan ko halka kar liya.... take care thanks for sharing this poem. regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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8th November 2007, 06:05 PM
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Maham ji aaj apki ye kavish padhkar bahut rona aa raha hai mujhe... kyunki aaj waise bhi mera mood kharaab hai..or yeh kalaam padhte hi aankhein nam ho gayi hai.... mein zyada tareef kya karun is kalaam ki.... bas itna hi ki aap aise hi likhte rahein sadaa reps added take care jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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8th November 2007, 11:37 PM
Maham ji,
Aadaab, kaisi hain? ummeed hai acche se hi hongi... Aapki yeh bayaani mujhe bahut pasand aayi... Ek alag hi andaaz e bayaan dikh jo ke bahut accha laga... daad kubool kijiyega... likhti rahiyega aage bhi... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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10th November 2007, 08:05 PM
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Ji Maham to achi seeeeeeeeeeee heeeeeeee hei haahaaa ei, dum huns pare hum patan ai kyun apke yun mukhatib karne pe ji janab , apki zarah navazi ke apko ye tehreer achi lagee apka , ap sab ka sath bana rahe ga tou yunhee likhte rahain ge janb Thanx hazaroun gulistan, MahamAzmi |
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10th November 2007, 10:52 PM
apna hi ik sher yad aa gaya ke...
ik roz ko kya teri barat ka ratjaga h0 gaya. hamare liye to har rat ka ratjaga ho gaya. bahut bahut khoobsurat si nazm aap ne kahi hai yun to aapko padhna achcha lagta hai lekin kabhi kabhi bahut achcha lagta hai bahut khoobsurat ahsas bayan kiye hain aapneaur aaj mai aapko ik chiz aur batana chahta hun jisse aapki shayeri me char chand lag jayenge agar ho sake to ik bar ilma uruz padh lijiye kyun ke is kitab me wo sari baten hain jo ik sayer ko nikharne ke liye bahut jaruri hain aapki sayeri me masha allah bahut kuch hai meri bat ko galat mat samajhiyega ye to sirf is nacheez ka maswira hai ke aapko aur bhi apne kalam ko nikharne ka mauka mile aur andar shayer baher aaye hamari taraf se bahut bahut duayen.........khuda hafiz .................rahnuma.............. |
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11th November 2007, 11:45 AM
Mohtaram Hazrat ,
Aapko hamesha apni adnaa kaavishon pe paya bhi aur apne apni nazr e kaaram hamaree tukbandiyon pe sada hee rakhee , magar aaj jo apka reply hie vo hamae sab se acha laga jante hein kyun Is liye ke ap ne us mein hamaree islaah ki jaanib ishara kiya hei aur hamaree ghaltiyon ki bauhat hee pyar se apnaiyat se dhake chupe se ache se iteeeeeeeeeee saree narmi se zikr bhi kiya hai buahat acha laga hamae , Ap se shayer ki nigah hee hamare tehreeron ko chu jaye to vo qeemtee ho jatee hien hamare apne hee liye , na ye ke aaj aap ne hamaraee islaah bhi ki itaaaa sara wala acha laga hamae sachi se Acha hum zaroor parhein ge vo jo ap ne kaha hei , pur vo hamae kahan mile ga batayae ga zaroor , aur jab kabhi apko koi ghalti koi kami kuch bhi dikhayee de na aap khul ke yahan bazm mein hee hamaree islaah kar diya kijiye hamae acha lage ga Jo cheez Maham ko kisi insaan mein sab se zyada pasand hei vo hei uski sachayee , honesty truthfulness , buahat qadr hei hamare nigah mein insan ki is quality kee , aur is sachayee ki adat ki wajhe se hum ne zaati zindagi mein nuqsaan bhi uthaya magar hum kabhi bhi jhoot nahi bolte chahae kuch bhi ho jaye aur na hee jhootee tareef ya daad achi lagtee hie , aap ne is adnaa kaavish ke ander vo qeemtee aur anmol jazbe jo pinhaan the mehsus kar liye bauhat bhala laga hamae , aap sada hee lafzon ki dehleez paar kar ke jazbon ke angan mein utar ke khub gehrayee se jaanchte hien hurf hurf ko , yehe to bhala lagta hei hamae apke ander buahat buahat shukriya hazrat apka , wid all my due respects , MahamAzmi |
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11th November 2007, 02:04 PM
hello MahamAzmi''ji
bhahut khub likha hai aap ne bhai jaan.aap isi tarah se likhte rahen bhai jaan .......... raj... |
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For ur kind information , I m a female , Thanx , Due Respects , MahamAzmi |
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forme - rajeev sharma (Raj) noida raj... |
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No problems ,
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maham ji -
18th November 2007, 09:25 PM
aapki reply hamne der se padhne mili iske liye mafi chahunga aapko ye ilma uruz kisi bare urdu maqtab me hi mil sakti hai kyun ke maine bhi ye kitab alighad se magai thi jab ke mai mumbai me rahta hun waise agar kuch mushkil ho aur mumkin ho to aap pata de den ham insha allah bhijwa bhi denge wahan se mangwakar agar mumkin ho to aur agar aap aasani se hasil kar sakti hain to le lijiye warna hamare leye ye kam jyada aasan hai ke ham aaptak ise pahucha de by post...........waise aapko jo behtar lage.......rahnuma
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