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har koi be wafa -
12th October 2007, 07:13 PM
tute dil ko pata nahi hota
har koi be wafa nahi hota. tu mera pyar ho nahi sakta pyar itna bura nahi hota bari mushkil se manta hai wo kyun ki jaldi khafa nahi hota jo zami par gurur karte hain sath unke khuda nahi hota. sochta hun ye gam kahan jata gar jo mera pata nahi hota. |
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12th October 2007, 08:26 PM
 Tooo gud rehnuma ji.bahot umda likha hai apne. |
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13th October 2007, 11:44 AM
Rehnuma ji ek umda koshish ke liye daad hazir hai kubool ho
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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nawajish -
2nd December 2007, 08:33 PM
bahut bahut shukriya
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Bhut Kub -
3rd December 2007, 01:01 PM
Ye shayri to bahut achi hai .
muze to ye Pasand Aayi . |
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3rd December 2007, 02:08 PM
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jo zami par gurur karte hain sath unke aasmaan nahi hota. Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain. |
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kasif bhai -
6th December 2007, 07:40 PM
kasif bhai dubara gazal parne ke liye shukriya aur han aapne jo chenj kiya hai wo mujhe bura laga kyun ki sayeri radeef aur kafiya hi to gazal ko gazal ka nam deta hai aur isme radeef hai[pata. wafa. khafa. bura. khuda] ab yahan par aashman radeef se baher hai han agar aashma hota to zarur yaha fit ta lekin yahan n ko hata denge to iska mana hi badal jayega khair meri bat ka bura mat maniyega aisi galtiyon par ham bhi bahut dant sun chuke hain tab kahin sikhe hain ..khuda hafiz .....aapka dost rahnuma
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