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Ek safar Anil Ji ke saath (01.07.2016) - 7th January 2016, 10:28 PM

Doston,

Is naye saal ka aaghaaz karne jaa rahe hai ek aisi shaqshiyat ke saath jinhe aapne padha hoga, yeh is parivaar ka hissa 10 saalon se hai aur bahut aala darje ke shayar hai....is baar ke humhare interview ke mehmaan hai Anil ji jinhe aap sab 'masoomshayer' ke naam se jaante hai...

Anil ji aapka is mehfil mein swaagat karta hoon...yun to mujhe ek baar shayad chand lamhon ke liye hi sahi rubaruu hone ka mauka mila hai bahut khushnaseebi hai meri...aapki shayri aur aapki aawaaz ke to hum kayal hai hi sochaa is mehfil ke zariye apne doston se bhi aapke zariye kuch marasim bana liye jaaye...

Sabse pehle to main chahunga ki aapna parichay humhare saathiyon se karwaaye ki aap kaha se hai aur shayri se kaise jude aur yeh bhi bataye SDC par aane ka maukaa kaise mila...

Phir aur sawaal kiye jaayenge



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8th January 2016, 08:19 AM

namaskaar anil ji...guftguu me aapka dil se swagat karti hun.....aap jaise nekdil sakhshiyat aur behatreen shayar ke bare me aur bhi janne ko milega.......is baat ki khushi ho rahi hai.....

Aapke liye bhi ye silsila yaadgar rahe aisi dua karti hun...........

Jald hazir hoti hun kuch sawaalon ke sath...tab tak mast ji ke pooche gaye sawalon ke jawaab ka intzaar rahega.......





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Love Warm Welcome - 8th January 2016, 02:10 PM

Namaskaar Anil ji

Guftagu ke es silsily meiN aapka dil se suwagat hai, bahut accha lag rha hai ki es mahine ham aapko preshaan kareNge nahi..nahi mera matlab aapse jee bhar kar baate kareNge

Masoom Shayar ji aayie aur mehfil meiN apni haziri dijiye...taaki phir ham apne sawaloN ki potli bhi khol sakeN

aik baar phir aapka bahut dil se suwagat hai





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8th January 2016, 05:27 PM

maasoom bhaiya:

pranaam

kaise haiN aap?

bahot KhuShii huii aapka interview ka thread yahaaN deKh kar... maiN Shayri Pariwaar ki aur se aapka tah e dil se swaagat kartaa huuN... kaThGhare meiN aapka swaagat hai...waise to aapke baare meiN sab jaantaa hii huuN.. acchha lagegaa aapke saath ees silsile mein saath reh kar..

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Aadab Anil ji

Iss safar mein aapka swagat hai. Aapko aur qareeb se jaanne ka mauqa milega. Aapke anubhav sunne ko milenge.

Nek Khaahishaat ke saath

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Bohut Khushi hui aapko yahaa dekh kar. Aasha hai aapka ye experience bohut sukhad rahega.

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सब से पहले तो मैं मासूम शायर अनिल आप का पुर दिल से शुक्रिया करता हूँ कि मुझे इस काबिल समझा कि मुझ से कुछ पूछा जा सके अब मुझे सोचना पड़ेगा मुझ में बताने जैसा है क्या?

मैं बहुत साधारण सा इंसान हूँ स्कूल किया हरिद्वार से उस के बाद से दिल्ली मे बसा हूँ मगर वो हरिद्वार मेरी रागों में आज भी है

दिल्ली में हंसराज कौलेज़ मे maths(hons) दाखिला लिया मगर वहाँ के एक प्रोफ़ेसर जो उत्तर प्रदेस के लोगों से खास तौर पे अगर वो अँग्रेज़ी नही बोलते थे बहुत जलते थे के कारण मुझे डी ए वी कौलेज़ में खुद को स्थानांतरित करवाना पड़ा जहाँ मेरा गणित भी चमका और मेरी कविता भी मैने मेरे तीनो वर्षों में सर्वश्रेष्ठ हिन्दी कवि का खिताब जीता जो किसी maths के छात्र ने उस से पहले भी नही जीता था उस के बाद भी नही जीता

मेरी शादी सुनीता जिस का अब नाम शानू है से मा बाप ने तय कर के करवा दी थी उस को शानू नाम मैने दिया था जो अब हर सरकारी-ग़ैरसरकारी जगह चलता है

मैं बिरला की एक सेमेंट के दफ़तर में काम करता हूँ और देल्ही सी. पी. पटेल चौक पे मेरा दफ़्तर है दो बच्चे हैं शिवंशी श्रेयक
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ये है मेरा छोटा सा परिचय बेक परिचय सवालों एक साथ आता रहेगा पूछते रहिये धन्यवाद सहित आप का मासूम

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namaskaar anil ji...guftguu me aapka dil se swagat karti hun.....aap jaise nekdil sakhshiyat aur behatreen shayar ke bare me aur bhi janne ko milega.......is baat ki khushi ho rahi hai.....

Aapke liye bhi ye silsila yaadgar rahe aisi dua karti hun...........

Jald hazir hoti hun kuch sawaalon ke sath...tab tak mast ji ke pooche gaye sawalon ke jawaab ka intzaar rahega.......





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Namaskaar Anil ji

Guftagu ke es silsily meiN aapka dil se suwagat hai, bahut accha lag rha hai ki es mahine ham aapko preshaan kareNge nahi..nahi mera matlab aapse jee bhar kar baate kareNge

Masoom Shayar ji aayie aur mehfil meiN apni haziri dijiye...taaki phir ham apne sawaloN ki potli bhi khol sakeN

aik baar phir aapka bahut dil se suwagat hai





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bahot KhuShii huii aapka interview ka thread yahaaN deKh kar... maiN Shayri Pariwaar ki aur se aapka tah e dil se swaagat kartaa huuN... kaThGhare meiN aapka swaagat hai...waise to aapke baare meiN sab jaantaa hii huuN.. acchha lagegaa aapke saath ees silsile mein saath reh kar..

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Iss safar mein aapka swagat hai. Aapko aur qareeb se jaanne ka mauqa milega. Aapke anubhav sunne ko milenge.

Nek Khaahishaat ke saath

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Phir haazir houngi sawaalo.n ke saath.

sawal bhee tumahree awaaz kee tarah madhur honge y ummeed hai jab bhee poochogee kcuh jawab zaroor mielgaa


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मैं बहुत साधारण सा इंसान हूँ स्कूल किया हरिद्वार से उस के बाद से दिल्ली मे बसा हूँ मगर वो हरिद्वार मेरी रागों में आज भी है

दिल्ली में हंसराज कौलेज़ मे maths(hons) दाखिला लिया मगर वहाँ के एक प्रोफ़ेसर जो उत्तर प्रदेस के लोगों से खास तौर पे अगर वो अँग्रेज़ी नही बोलते थे बहुत जलते थे के कारण मुझे डी ए वी कौलेज़ में खुद को स्थानांतरित करवाना पड़ा जहाँ मेरा गणित भी चमका और मेरी कविता भी मैने मेरे तीनो वर्षों में सर्वश्रेष्ठ हिन्दी कवि का खिताब जीता जो किसी maths के छात्र ने उस से पहले भी नही जीता था उस के बाद भी नही जीता

मेरी शादी सुनीता जिस का अब नाम शानू है से मा बाप ने तय कर के करवा दी थी उस को शानू नाम मैने दिया था जो अब हर सरकारी-ग़ैरसरकारी जगह चलता है

मैं बिरला की एक सेमेंट के दफ़तर में काम करता हूँ और देल्ही सी. पी. पटेल चौक पे मेरा दफ़्तर है दो बच्चे हैं शिवंशी श्रेयक
और ये साइट पहली साईट है जिस ने मेरा और मेरी कविताओं का हाथ थामा था और हमने कभी इस बंधन को टूटने नही दिया मैं यहाँ पर २००५ में आया था उस के बाद यहाँ के लोगों से काई बार मिलना जुलना हुआ

ये है मेरा छोटा सा परिचय बेक परिचय सवालों एक साथ आता रहेगा पूछते रहिये धन्यवाद सहित आप का मासूम

मासूम की बातों को मासूम ही समझेगा
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Namaskaar masoom ji...

Aap haridwar se hain jaankar achcha laga...haridwar se mujhe bhi khasa lagaw hai...

Aapne ye to bataya ki kavita college ke vaqt se ubhar kar aayi..kripya ye bhi bataiye ki aapke prerna shrot kya yhe us vaqt..jiski vajah se aapka jhukav kavita ki taraf badha...

Kya aapki patni ko bhi kavitaon ka shauk hai...aapko to awashya sunti hongi...unka kaisa sahyog milta hai aapko....

Filhaal itna hee...hir hazir hoti hun...

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Shukriyaa madhu jee sab se pahale aane ke liye sawalon ko le kar

kavitaa coldge se bhee pahale se likh rahaa thaa par andaaz nahee thaa kaisaa likhataa hoon. meree prernaa Sahir jee kee shayari thee jine padh ke mujeh ahsaas huaa ki main bhee likh sakataa hoon. aur us waqt dosts apane dukh sukh bahut share karte the un ko likhane kee koshish kartaa tha mujeh agata thaa apane aap ko likhate huye insaan eemandaar nahee rahataa dukh ko sukh ko adhik badhaa detaa hai is liye meree shayari me main kam hotaa thaa meraa aaspaas zyada hota tha

par haan ek baat achee lagatee thee ki meree kavitaayen ladkion ko bahut pasand thee aur mujh se kavitaayen sun ne ke liye mujeh gher letee theen

mere ghar men mere siwa kisee ko kavitaa bahut apsand nahee par haan shanu ko achaa lagataa hai ki meree shayari log pasand arate hain aur jo un par likhataa hoon us shayari ko wo pasand kartee hain .

meree maa meree shayari kee sab se badee fan hai aksar padhatee rahatee hain samajh paayen yaa nahee par bahut ashirwaad detee hain meree kavitaa ko

shanu kaa sahyog milataa hai sadaa us ke waqt men se hee main kavitaa ke liye waqt nikalaa hoon

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Namaskaar masoom ji...

Aap haridwar se hain jaankar achcha laga...haridwar se mujhe bhi khasa lagaw hai...

Aapne ye to bataya ki kavita college ke vaqt se ubhar kar aayi..kripya ye bhi bataiye ki aapke prerna shrot kya yhe us vaqt..jiski vajah se aapka jhukav kavita ki taraf badha...

Kya aapki patni ko bhi kavitaon ka shauk hai...aapko to awashya sunti hongi...unka kaisa sahyog milta hai aapko....

Filhaal itna hee...hir hazir hoti hun...

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Bahut khoob Anil ji aapka introduction ab talak kaafi interesting hai..ek adnaa sa sawaal dil mein kulbulaa raha hai to socha aapke samaksh rakha jaaye...


Aapko itne saal ho gaye shayri likhte likhte aap agar gehraayi se is baat par tavajjo dein ki aapki likhawaat mein kitni improvement aayi to hum shrotaa jaanna chahenge ki aapki yeh journey ab tak kaisi rahi as a shayar aapne apne mein kya improvements dekhi hai aur unki wajah aap kisko maante hai...

maaufi ka talabgaar hoon agar sawaal thoda gehraayi mein utar gaya ho to...



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Sawal bahut achhaa hai par kash-m-kash men dalane walaa bhee hai. shayari men pahale meter nahee tha azaad tahreeren hoteen theen waqt ke sath bahr kaa kuch ilm huyaa kuch aur baaten pata chaleen par sach ye hai behatreen kama wahee hai jo coldge ke dino men kaha maine waqt ke sath ham log tech. men to pukhataa ho jaate hain par wo imotion waise nahee rahate jo 18 se 35 kee age tak hote hain to sab se imotion shayari wahee hai jo coldge ke dino men likhee gayee

mujhe shayari sikhaane men vikas(janumanu), kunal Shardhha ne mehant kee hai aur un sabhee pyare bachhon ne jo mujhe padhate hain sunate hain aur mujhe mere aaj se jode rakhate hain

abhee seekh rahaa hoon aur ye safar door tak jana hai


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Bahut khoob Anil ji aapka introduction ab talak kaafi interesting hai..ek adnaa sa sawaal dil mein kulbulaa raha hai to socha aapke samaksh rakha jaaye...


Aapko itne saal ho gaye shayri likhte likhte aap agar gehraayi se is baat par tavajjo dein ki aapki likhawaat mein kitni improvement aayi to hum shrotaa jaanna chahenge ki aapki yeh journey ab tak kaisi rahi as a shayar aapne apne mein kya improvements dekhi hai aur unki wajah aap kisko maante hai...

maaufi ka talabgaar hoon agar sawaal thoda gehraayi mein utar gaya ho to...


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Anil ji shayri ke katghare me aapka swaagat hai......
main tahe dil se aapka istaqbaal karta hoon...

aapke baare me jaankar bahut khushi huii.. aage bhi aapko jaanne ke mauqe milte rahenge...

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Shukriyaa madhu jee sab se pahale aane ke liye sawalon ko le kar

kavitaa coldge se bhee pahale se likh rahaa thaa par andaaz nahee thaa kaisaa likhataa hoon. meree prernaa Sahir jee kee shayari thee jine padh ke mujeh ahsaas huaa ki main bhee likh sakataa hoon. aur us waqt dosts apane dukh sukh bahut share karte the un ko likhane kee koshish kartaa tha mujeh agata thaa apane aap ko likhate huye insaan eemandaar nahee rahataa dukh ko sukh ko adhik badhaa detaa hai is liye meree shayari me main kam hotaa thaa meraa aaspaas zyada hota tha

par haan ek baat achee lagatee thee ki meree kavitaayen ladkion ko bahut pasand thee aur mujh se kavitaayen sun ne ke liye mujeh gher letee theen

mere ghar men mere siwa kisee ko kavitaa bahut apsand nahee par haan shanu ko achaa lagataa hai ki meree shayari log pasand arate hain aur jo un par likhataa hoon us shayari ko wo pasand kartee hain .

meree maa meree shayari kee sab se badee fan hai aksar padhatee rahatee hain samajh paayen yaa nahee par bahut ashirwaad detee hain meree kavitaa ko

shanu kaa sahyog milataa hai sadaa us ke waqt men se hee main kavitaa ke liye waqt nikalaa hoon
Shukriya anil ji..aapne bahut achche se mere sawalon ke jawab diye...

Sahi aapne.jeevan sathi ka ye sahyog bhi bahut hota hai..ki ham unka vaqt chura kar shayri ko dein..aur unhe koi shikayat bhi na ho.....

Silsile ko aage badhane fir hazir hoti hun...

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aao hazoor aapko, aapke bachpan meiN le chalu,
aap machal machal jaaye, aisi yaadoN meiN le chalu


Anil ji...sabse pehle aap yeh bataye ki aap bachpan meiN kis tarah ke bacche thy? bade bholey se, jaise aap ab lagte hai ya phir shararti bacche
apne bachpan ki koi aisi sharat hame batayeN jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate

apne bachpan meiN ki hue koi aisi galati jis se aapko accha sabak mila ho ?

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Anil ji...sabse pehle aap yeh bataye ki aap bachpan meiN kis tarah ke bacche thy? bade bholey se, jaise aap ab lagte hai ya phir shararti bacche
apne bachpan ki koi aisi sharat hame batayeN jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate

apne bachpan meiN ki hue koi aisi galati jis se aapko accha sabak mila ho ?

apne bachpan ke dosto ke bare meiN batayeN, kya aap apne kisi aise dost ke link meiN haiN ?



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anil ji namaskaar..

lijiye hazir hun ek cchote se sawaal ke sath....

aapke jeevan me kabhi koi aisa daur aaya hai..jab aapne khud ko asahaay mahsoos kiya ho..us vaqt aisa kya tha jisne aapko taqat di aur dubara uth kar khade hone ki himmat bhi....

agar aap hamse share karna chahe to zaroor batayein....

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main bachapna se bahut mazakaiya ladakaa thaa par sharatee kabhee nahee thaa bachapan kee ek sharata yaad hai jo meree sab se badee seekh bhee thee

ham tab ranchi men rahate the aur maine abhee padhanaa shuroo nahee kiyaa thaa ghar pe main aur mummy akele the mummy rumaal men sawa rupayaa rakh ke soye the jo us waqt bahut hotaa thaa baat 1966 kee hai

maine 25 paise nikaale aur us kee chooran ke pkts khareed liye jis men filmen nikalatee theen pics ke negatives hote the


us ke baad 1 rupyaa bhee nikala le gaya par wo dukaandaar ko itanee badee rakam lagee ki us ne kaha ghar walon se likhawa ke laao maine dobaraa paise waheen rakh diye

mummy ko utahate hee pata chal gayaa ki char aane gayab mujh se poochaa paise kahan gaye maien kaha mummy jab aap gaye the ek chor ayaa thaa wo nikal ke le gayaa

mummy ne kaha achhaa 25 paise le gaya aur 1 rupaya chhod gayaa mujhe peetanaa shuroo kiyaa ki bata kyaa laya aur kahan rakkhaa main chooran khaa chukaa tha fimen chupaa dee theen maar ke karan main bhool gayaa kahan chipaayeen hain meree pitayee hotee rahee aur main mummy ko kahen kaheen dikhata rahaa ki yahan rakkhee hain aur pitaayee lagatar hotee rahee finally ek jagah wo flmen mil gayeen aur ghar se us dukaan tak pitaayee khata huyaa gayaa aur rote rote dukaan wale ke paas gayaa ki ye le lo paise apis kar do mujeh foot foot ke rotaa dekh ke use ko samjh aa gayaa mere sath kcuh buraa huyaa hai us ne ek baar bhee nahee kaha ki chooran ke pkts to hain nahee aur mujhe pais wapis kar diye zindgee main aisee maar na khud kabhee khayee na kisee ko khaate dekhaa hai
us maar ke karan zindgee men su ke baad ksiee tarah kee bhee be-eemanee dobaraa nahee kee aaj aap ne dobaraa wahee maar yaad dilaa dee

waise meree maan bahut hee dayaloo hain aur mujhe sab s zyada prem kartee hain par choree un ke liye bahut abdaa gunaah thaa us ke liye mafee nahee thee

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aao hazoor aapko, aapke bachpan meiN le chalu,
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Anil ji...sabse pehle aap yeh bataye ki aap bachpan meiN kis tarah ke bacche thy? bade bholey se, jaise aap ab lagte hai ya phir shararti bacche
apne bachpan ki koi aisi sharat hame batayeN jisko yaad karke aap aaj bhi muskuraye bina nahi reh paate

apne bachpan meiN ki hue koi aisi galati jis se aapko accha sabak mila ho ?

apne bachpan ke dosto ke bare meiN batayeN, kya aap apne kisi aise dost ke link meiN haiN ?



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maine bahut baar asahaay mahsoos kiyaa hai khud ko maine 1990-93 tak ek bussiness kee koshish kee thee meraa partner ne mere vishwas ko chala mujhe pata hee nahee chalaa kab main 50-50 se partnership chalatee huyee 40-60 par pahucn gayee aur us ke baad main zero par hee aa gayaa

us waqt eeshwar ne mera sath diyaa aur main nirshaa se bahar ayaa aur dobara jeewan aur kavitaa men man lagayaa mujhe bahut thes is baat se lagee ki jise bhayee kee tarah mana jahan dastakhat mange ankh band kar ke maine kiye us ne hee itnaa bada chal kiyaa un dino mujhe laga tha kavitaa kavi sab chale jaate hain in kaa koyee mooly nahee aur maine likhaa thaa

yoon nahee kavitaa ki tujh se pyar nahee rahaa
yoon bhee nahee ki pahale sa khumaar nahee rahaa
toone duniyaa ko badalane kee kasam khaayee thee
bas teree kasam pe ab aitbaar nahee rahaa


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main bachapna se bahut mazakaiya ladakaa thaa par sharatee kabhee nahee thaa bachapan kee ek sharata yaad hai jo meree sab se badee seekh bhee thee

ham tab ranchi men rahate the aur maine abhee padhanaa shuroo nahee kiyaa thaa ghar pe main aur mummy akele the mummy rumaal men sawa rupayaa rakh ke soye the jo us waqt bahut hotaa thaa baat 1966 kee hai

maine 25 paise nikaale aur us kee chooran ke pkts khareed liye jis men filmen nikalatee theen pics ke negatives hote the


us ke baad 1 rupyaa bhee nikala le gaya par wo dukaandaar ko itanee badee rakam lagee ki us ne kaha ghar walon se likhawa ke laao maine dobaraa paise waheen rakh diye

mummy ko utahate hee pata chal gayaa ki char aane gayab mujh se poochaa paise kahan gaye maien kaha mummy jab aap gaye the ek chor ayaa thaa wo nikal ke le gayaa

mummy ne kaha achhaa 25 paise le gaya aur 1 rupaya chhod gayaa mujhe peetanaa shuroo kiyaa ki bata kyaa laya aur kahan rakkhaa main chooran khaa chukaa tha fimen chupaa dee theen maar ke karan main bhool gayaa kahan chipaayeen hain meree pitayee hotee rahee aur main mummy ko kahen kaheen dikhata rahaa ki yahan rakkhee hain aur pitaayee lagatar hotee rahee finally ek jagah wo flmen mil gayeen aur ghar se us dukaan tak pitaayee khata huyaa gayaa aur rote rote dukaan wale ke paas gayaa ki ye le lo paise apis kar do mujeh foot foot ke rotaa dekh ke use ko samjh aa gayaa mere sath kcuh buraa huyaa hai us ne ek baar bhee nahee kaha ki chooran ke pkts to hain nahee aur mujhe pais wapis kar diye zindgee main aisee maar na khud kabhee khayee na kisee ko khaate dekhaa hai
us maar ke karan zindgee men su ke baad ksiee tarah kee bhee be-eemanee dobaraa nahee kee aaj aap ne dobaraa wahee maar yaad dilaa dee

waise meree maan bahut hee dayaloo hain aur mujhe sab s zyada prem kartee hain par choree un ke liye bahut abdaa gunaah thaa us ke liye mafee nahee thee
Wakai maa ki daant aur maar me bhi hamari bhalai hoti hai...aur ye ghatna yakeenan seekh de jane wali hai...shukriya hamse share karne ke liye........

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ham tab ranchi men rahate the aur maine abhee padhanaa shuroo nahee kiyaa thaa ghar pe main aur mummy akele the mummy rumaal men sawa rupayaa rakh ke soye the jo us waqt bahut hotaa thaa baat 1966 kee hai

maine 25 paise nikaale aur us kee chooran ke pkts khareed liye jis men filmen nikalatee theen pics ke negatives hote the


us ke baad 1 rupyaa bhee nikala le gaya par wo dukaandaar ko itanee badee rakam lagee ki us ne kaha ghar walon se likhawa ke laao maine dobaraa paise waheen rakh diye

mummy ko utahate hee pata chal gayaa ki char aane gayab mujh se poochaa paise kahan gaye maien kaha mummy jab aap gaye the ek chor ayaa thaa wo nikal ke le gayaa

mummy ne kaha achhaa 25 paise le gaya aur 1 rupaya chhod gayaa mujhe peetanaa shuroo kiyaa ki bata kyaa laya aur kahan rakkhaa main chooran khaa chukaa tha fimen chupaa dee theen maar ke karan main bhool gayaa kahan chipaayeen hain meree pitayee hotee rahee aur main mummy ko kahen kaheen dikhata rahaa ki yahan rakkhee hain aur pitaayee lagatar hotee rahee finally ek jagah wo flmen mil gayeen aur ghar se us dukaan tak pitaayee khata huyaa gayaa aur rote rote dukaan wale ke paas gayaa ki ye le lo paise apis kar do mujeh foot foot ke rotaa dekh ke use ko samjh aa gayaa mere sath kcuh buraa huyaa hai us ne ek baar bhee nahee kaha ki chooran ke pkts to hain nahee aur mujhe pais wapis kar diye zindgee main aisee maar na khud kabhee khayee na kisee ko khaate dekhaa hai
us maar ke karan zindgee men su ke baad ksiee tarah kee bhee be-eemanee dobaraa nahee kee aaj aap ne dobaraa wahee maar yaad dilaa dee

waise meree maan bahut hee dayaloo hain aur mujhe sab s zyada prem kartee hain par choree un ke liye bahut abdaa gunaah thaa us ke liye mafee nahee thee

tabhi to kehte hain ki maa ke gusse meiN bhi pyar hota...aapki es baat se zahir ho hi rha hai ki maa nahi chahti thi ki uska baccha galat raaste par chale...usne aapki pitai ki gusse se par gusse ke peeche reason pyar tha..."maa hundi hai maa ve dunia waliyo"


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14th January 2016, 11:26 AM

Anil ji, apne bhai behno ke bare meiN bhi kuch bataye aur unse judi bachpan ki agar ekka-dukka yaadeN bhi hamse share karen to accha lagega


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ji...apne pichle sawaal ka intzaar hai mujhe..aur ek taza sawaal pesh hai aapke liye...

aap sdc se kafi samay se jude hain...

to kya tabdeeliyaan payii hain aapne is dauran...

us purane vaqt ki koi khaas yadein..kuch log jo aapke dil se jude hon..ya aaj bhi unse rabta kayam ho..

abhi ke liye itna hee...

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Anil ji kehte hai kuch seekh aisi milti hai jo yaadgaar ban jaati hai aapne bhi aisa hi qissa hum doston ke saath baanta hai...bahut aacha laga jaankar....aapke intezaar mein jald hi aaiyee



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anil ji.. aapka Intzaar hai guftaguu me....jald aaiye.....



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Anil ji, apne bhai behno ke bare meiN bhi kuch bataye aur unse judi bachpan ki agar ekka-dukka yaadeN bhi hamse share karen to accha lagega
ham log char bhayee bahan hain

bachpan se aaj tak gahare prem men bandhe huye hain ham sal men 1 2 baar sabhee kaa milana aho jataa hai varnaa 2 sis aksar milatee rahatee hain sharatee bahut the ham aur yaas aisaa kaisaa yug thaa ham log raat ko 8 ya 8 30 tak khel ke aate har din late ane ke karan dand khaate T V ka bas naam suna thaa pahale baar T V aur fridge meree 12 th class men ayaa aur pahalee baar cooler jab main Graduate hon wala tha tab ayaa

ek din meree aur deedee kee ladayee ho gayee us ne mujhe baingan se maraa sabzee kaat rahee thee maine rone lagaa mummy ke paas bhagaa mummy kaa bahut sar dard ho rahaa thaa sare bhayee bahano kee dande se samuhik pitaaye huyee chotaa bhayee mummy mummy kahate huye neeche se ghar ayaa use darwaje par hee ek dandaa pada wo to waisa ka waisa hee neeche bhaag gayaa bahut mazedar thaa bachapan jo haridwar men beetaa


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ji...apne pichle sawaal ka intzaar hai mujhe..aur ek taza sawaal pesh hai aapke liye...

aap sdc se kafi samay se jude hain...

to kya tabdeeliyaan payii hain aapne is dauran...

us purane vaqt ki koi khaas yadein..kuch log jo aapke dil se jude hon..ya aaj bhi unse rabta kayam ho..

abhi ke liye itna hee...

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haan yahan par main 10 sal se hoon aur logon se rishtaa abhee tak bana huyaa hai site men normal tabdeeliyaan hain jo is ko aaj bhee zindaa rakkhe huye hain varna akitnee hee sites banee band ho gayeen


mere ko yaheen par sab se pahale net ke real dost mile un men jis se abhee tak rabtaa hai wo hain pulkit kunal manoj kueel sakhi sharddha paras jee shalini and very spacial meena jee umron tak ye site chalatee rahe yahee duyaa hai meree


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maine bahut baar asahaay mahsoos kiyaa hai khud ko maine 1990-93 tak ek bussiness kee koshish kee thee meraa partner ne mere vishwas ko chala mujhe pata hee nahee chalaa kab main 50-50 se partnership chalatee huyee 40-60 par pahucn gayee aur us ke baad main zero par hee aa gayaa

us waqt eeshwar ne mera sath diyaa aur main nirshaa se bahar ayaa aur dobara jeewan aur kavitaa men man lagayaa mujhe bahut thes is baat se lagee ki jise bhayee kee tarah mana jahan dastakhat mange ankh band kar ke maine kiye us ne hee itnaa bada chal kiyaa un dino mujhe laga tha kavitaa kavi sab chale jaate hain in kaa koyee mooly nahee aur maine likhaa thaa

yoon nahee kavitaa ki tujh se pyar nahee rahaa
yoon bhee nahee ki pahale sa khumaar nahee rahaa
toone duniyaa ko badalane kee kasam khaayee thee
bas teree kasam pe ab aitbaar nahee rahaa
Sach kaha anil ji..aisi kisi stithi me har baat nirarthak lagti hai...aksar vahi chhalte hain hame jin par ankh band karke bharosa karte hain ham...lekin ye bhi sach hai ki ek shakti hai jo har mushkil me hamara sath deti hai......hamara aatm bal aur ishwar ki kripa har musibat se nikal lete hain hame...

Aapne hamare sath ye ghatna share ki dhanywaad...main dua karti hun...dhokha aur fareb ab nahi payein aap jeevan me...

Fir aati hun...

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20th January 2016, 05:39 PM

Namaskar Anil ji....

Aapki tasweer aur awaaz sun kar laga tha Ki aap ek raubdaar insaan honge. Nagar as se Milne ke baad pata chala Ki aap apne naam Ki Tarah hi masoom hain.

Mera aapse pehla sawaal

Shayri aur Hindi kavita Mein aapki nazar Mein kya antar hai.

Aapki apni likhi rachnaon Mein agar aapko 3 sarvshresth chunne ko kaha jaayr to wo kounsi hongi?

Aajkal internet Ki wajah se choro ka khatra bad Gaya hai Jo apki rachnaon ko apne naam se copy paste karte hain...iska kya ilaaz kiya Jana chahiye.

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20th January 2016, 08:29 PM

sarikaa swagat hai tumharaa

shayari aur kavitaa men ya ye kahene urdu aur hindi kavitaa men pahalaa antar to ye hai ki shayari jise bolee jaatee hai us tarah likhee jaatee hai aur hindi kavitaa jaise likhee jatee hai waise padhee ya bolee jatee hai

par atmaa dono kee ek hee hai par ye sach hai shayari prem kee taraf zyadaa rahatee hai aur kavita ke vishay vividh hote hain par dono vidhaaye itna ghul mil gayeen hain ki ek saa hee roop ho chala hai dono kaa meree pasand kee 3 rachnayen main bataoongaa zaldee hee kuch badee nazmen hain to post kar ke bataoongaa

rachanao kee choree kaa ilaaz nahee maine bhee bahut baar sahaa hai ye sab is ke liye koyee sakht kanoon bananaa chahiye bahut asaanee se pataa kiyaa jaa sakataa hai kavitaa sab se pahale kis ne post kee aur kahan bakee koyee badaa ilaaz is kaa hai nahee

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20th January 2016, 09:31 PM

anil ji...bahut saralta se aap aabhi sawalon ke jawaab de rahe hain...aap se mil ke bhi aisa hee laga ki aap kafi saral swabhav ke dhani hain...

Par main poochna chahoongi..kya koi aisi baat hai jis par aapko gussa aata ...
Kabhi aisa hua hai ki gusse me kahi huyi baat ya faisle par aapko afsos karna pada ho...



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bhaiyaa:

Pranaam

aik sawaal aapse

aapne apnaa user name masoomshayer kyuuN raKhaa.?

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