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kuch milte milaate reh gaya - 7th March 2013, 05:45 PM

kuch milte milaate reh gaya
kuch mit'te mitaate reh gaya

Jiski ummiid thi kam
woh hote hawaate reh gaya

jo thaa najdeek mere
woh bolte bulaate reh gaya

chhupaati raaz koi apna
sab chhupte chhupaate reh gaya

milti nahi shakl kisi se
woh dekhte dikhaate reh gaya

aasmaa ke sitaaron saa 'neetu'
naseeb chamkte chamkaate reh gaya

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7th March 2013, 07:11 PM

kuch milte milaate reh gaya
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Neetu ji, bahut khoob......ye sher lajawaaab hai......!! Aise hi likhti rahiyee.....!! Khush rahiye.....!!


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8th March 2013, 10:44 AM

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kuch milte milaate reh gaya
kuch mit'te mitaate reh gaya

Jiski ummiid thi kam
woh hote hawaate reh gaya

jo thaa najdeek mere
woh bolte bulaate reh gaya

chhupaati raaz koi apna
sab chhupte chhupaate reh gaya

milti nahi shakl kisi se
woh dekhte dikhaate reh gaya

aasmaa ke sitaaron saa 'neetu'
naseeb chamkte chamkaate reh gaya
WaaH ! Khoob !!

Good One Neetu JI !!!




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8th March 2013, 11:25 AM

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kuch milte milaate reh gaya
kuch mit'te mitaate reh gaya

Jiski ummiid thi kam
woh hote hawaate reh gaya

jo thaa najdeek mere
woh bolte bulaate reh gaya

chhupaati raaz koi apna
sab chhupte chhupaate reh gaya

milti nahi shakl kisi se
woh dekhte dikhaate reh gaya

aasmaa ke sitaaron saa 'neetu'
naseeb chamkte chamkaate reh gaya
bahot acchi peshkash hai ye aapki Neetu ji..... ye nayaa andaaz aapka hame behad pasand aaya....

wo hote hawaate reh gaye.... accha hai..

likhti rahen..

Shaad...


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23rd March 2013, 02:06 PM

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Neetu ji, bahut khoob......ye sher lajawaaab hai......!! Aise hi likhti rahiyee.....!! Khush rahiye.....!!
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24th March 2013, 12:00 PM

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2nd April 2013, 11:41 PM

chhupaati raaz koi apna
sab chhupte chhupaate reh gaya

Wahhhh!!

boht khoob
Neetu jii....

aise hii mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye ga,

DuaooN k saath ijaazat,



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bahot acchi peshkash hai ye aapki Neetu ji..... ye nayaa andaaz aapka hame behad pasand aaya....

wo hote hawaate reh gaye.... accha hai..

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kuch milte milaate reh gaya
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Jiski ummiid thi kam
woh hote hawaate reh gaya

jo thaa najdeek mere
woh bolte bulaate reh gaya

chhupaati raaz koi apna
sab chhupte chhupaate reh gaya

milti nahi shakl kisi se
woh dekhte dikhaate reh gaya

aasmaa ke sitaaron saa 'neetu'
naseeb chamkte chamkaate reh gaya

bhut khoob daad hazir hai qubool keejiye

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kuch milte milaate reh gaya
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Jiski ummiid thi kam
woh hote hawaate reh gaya

chhupaati raaz koi apna
sab chhupte chhupaate reh gaya

bahot sunder

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