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29th June 2010, 01:04 PM
Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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29th June 2010, 01:09 PM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaati Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
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Hmmm...! Behad khubsurat khayaal aur ehsaas heiN ji...!
Maqtaa khaas lagaa...!
Likhti rahein aur apna khayaal bhi rakhein, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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29th June 2010, 01:11 PM
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
wah bahot khubsurat ehsaas Radhika ji
thnx 4 sharing
Regards
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Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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29th June 2010, 04:00 PM
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Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
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bahut khub
itana acha laga
ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
daad hajir he
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29th June 2010, 04:05 PM
Bahut acha likha hai Radhika ji,,,
Daad hazir hai....
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29th June 2010, 05:47 PM
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
these two are just awesum...........
keep writing...
take care..
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30th June 2010, 08:10 AM
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
Ek Acchi Koshish ...............Radhika Ji ! Nice Creation... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
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1st July 2010, 03:29 AM
Radhika Jee AadaaB!
Achcho koshish ki hia aapne..... ahsaas kafi achche rahe ......
Mashq jari rakhiye...... thoda kafiye ko samjhiye waise yeh kafiye bhi right hai....... per exactly right nahi hai......
Likhati rahiye......
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez......
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1st July 2010, 03:38 PM
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Hmmm...! Behad khubsurat khayaal aur ehsaas heiN ji...!
Maqtaa khaas lagaa...!
Likhti rahein aur apna khayaal bhi rakhein, ok...?
Duaaon ke saath
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya...................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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1st July 2010, 04:15 PM
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Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
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radhika jee
radhe radhe
bahut khoob ahsaas achhe hai bayangi bhi achhi lagi aise hi likhti raho
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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2nd July 2010, 12:32 AM
Maf karna Radhika jee par aapki is peshkah ne bhi nirash kiya. Shero me rabt bilkool nahi hai meaningless sher hai. Aapko naraz karna mera maqsad nahi main to bas chahta hu aap aur achcha likhe aur woh tabhi ho sakta hai jab aap apni kamiyo ko kabool karegi. Kisi achche shayer jaise Kunaal saheb Zidd saheb Praydhyuman saheb jaise bohat kabil shayer hai unki madad le sakti hai. Plz meri bato ka bura mat manna.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
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5th July 2010, 04:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
wah bahot khubsurat ehsaas Radhika ji
thnx 4 sharing
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya...................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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Maf karna Radhika jee par aapki is peshkah ne bhi nirash kiya. Shero me rabt bilkool nahi hai meaningless sher hai. Aapko naraz karna mera maqsad nahi main to bas chahta hu aap aur achcha likhe aur woh tabhi ho sakta hai jab aap apni kamiyo ko kabool karegi. Kisi achche shayer jaise Kunaal saheb Zidd saheb Praydhyuman saheb jaise bohat kabil shayer hai unki madad le sakti hai. Plz meri bato ka bura mat manna.
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Mujhe to lagta hai aapka wajood hii meaningless hai, jo apni baat per kaaym nahi rehta,
kuch shabd aap ke kheh hue hai jo yaad deela rahi hu.......................
"mujhe maaf kare galti meri hi hai jo maine aapki thread par haziri di, yaqeen maniye aainda aisi galti mujhse nahi hogi."
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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7th July 2010, 09:29 PM
hai radhika kafi khubsurat ehsas hai par byangi abki bar kuch khas nahi lagi kuch sher kafi umda rahe par maf karna isse ache padhe hai aapke isliye bol raha hu
to ek sher aapke liye pesh-e-khidmat hai
bewfa pukarenge tujhe duniya wale
aankhein na chura mera dil churane wale
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9th July 2010, 08:39 AM
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Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
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Radhika
jazbatoan sae bhapoor ae ghazal to maerae dil per kafi asar kergayee
razia
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11th July 2010, 04:00 PM
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Mujhe to lagta hai aapka wajood hii meaningless hai, jo apni baat per kaaym nahi rehta,
kuch shabd aap ke kheh hue hai jo yaad deela rahi hu.......................
"mujhe maaf kare galti meri hi hai jo maine aapki thread par haziri di, yaqeen maniye aainda aisi galti mujhse nahi hogi."
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Radhika madam ji,
Do din se soch rahi thi ke aapko kya kahu,aapki is post ne tou shock hi kar diya hum sabko,aapse kuch kehna chahti huuN, dekhiye mehfil ke kuch aadaab hote hain," RULES", jo sikhaye nahi jaate,mehfiloN me jaane waloN ko pata hona chahiye..
Mehfil me jab aapne kuch post kiya hai tou uska matlab yahi samjha jayega ke aapko hamare comments chahiye, aapki writing acchi hai ya nahi ye hum decide karenge, aur agar aapko negetive comments pasand nahi they tou saath me likh dete, only positive comments allowed,
Aapki isi harkat ki wajah se yeh thread shuru huyi hai, isa zara ghaur se padhiye...
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=70255
sajid sahab is site ke ek reputed member hain,unko is tarah beizzat karne ka aapko koi haq nahi...infact kisi ko is tarah ka comment likhna ka koi haq nahi, aapko unka comment theek nahi laga tha tou directly unse pm per keh deti, ke woh aapke threads per comment na kiya kare, phir bhi na maane tou mods ko inform kar deti, per is tarah publicly kisi ko itni badi baat kehna, meri samajh ke baahar hai...
Aur phir agar koi ghalti nikaale tou isme buraai kya hai, apni ghalti maan lene se koi chota nahi hojaata,hum sab ghaltiyan karte hain, aur apni ghaltiyan sar jhuka ker maan bhi lete hain,infact hume tou in members ka shukrguzaar hona chahiye ,jo waqt nikaal kar hame sudharne ki koshish kar rahe hain, ulta aap unko hi jee bhar ke galiyan de rahi hain, aapka attitude meri samajh me nahi aaya, aysa aapne pehle bhi kiya tha, per tab main chup hogayi, per is baar aapko maafi nahi milegi
Meri aapse guzarish hai ke, aap isi thread per sajid sahab se maafi maang lijiye aur is maamle ko yahi per khatm kar dijiye....., ya nahi tou aagey se jab bhi aap kuch post karengi, wahaan is thread ka link ke saath main hi likh dungi, "Beware of Radhika ji, ..comment on this thread at your own risk"
Main nahi chahti dubara is site ka koi aur member anjaane me aap ki ghaltiyan nikaale aur aap phir usay bhi beizzat karo..
so the choice is yours..
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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11th July 2010, 05:43 PM
Radhika ji aadab
likha acha hai aapne lekin thodi talmel ki kami hai
Khuda se duwa hai aap aur acha likhe
maana ki aap ki nazaro mein kuch nahi hai hum
par unse jakar puchiye jinhe hasil nahi hai hum
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12th July 2010, 05:22 PM
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Radhika madam ji,
Do din se soch rahi thi ke aapko kya kahu,aapki is post ne tou shock hi kar diya hum sabko,aapse kuch kehna chahti huuN, dekhiye mehfil ke kuch aadaab hote hain," RULES", jo sikhaye nahi jaate,mehfiloN me jaane waloN ko pata hona chahiye..
Mehfil me jab aapne kuch post kiya hai tou uska matlab yahi samjha jayega ke aapko hamare comments chahiye, aapki writing acchi hai ya nahi ye hum decide karenge, aur agar aapko negetive comments pasand nahi they tou saath me likh dete, only positive comments allowed,
Aapki isi harkat ki wajah se yeh thread shuru huyi hai, isa zara ghaur se padhiye...
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=70255
sajid sahab is site ke ek reputed member hain,unko is tarah beizzat karne ka aapko koi haq nahi...infact kisi ko is tarah ka comment likhna ka koi haq nahi, aapko unka comment theek nahi laga tha tou directly unse pm per keh deti, ke woh aapke threads per comment na kiya kare, phir bhi na maane tou mods ko inform kar deti, per is tarah publicly kisi ko itni badi baat kehna, meri samajh ke baahar hai...
Aur phir agar koi ghalti nikaale tou isme buraai kya hai, apni ghalti maan lene se koi chota nahi hojaata,hum sab ghaltiyan karte hain, aur apni ghaltiyan sar jhuka ker maan bhi lete hain,infact hume tou in members ka shukrguzaar hona chahiye ,jo waqt nikaal kar hame sudharne ki koshish kar rahe hain, ulta aap unko hi jee bhar ke galiyan de rahi hain, aapka attitude meri samajh me nahi aaya, aysa aapne pehle bhi kiya tha, per tab main chup hogayi, per is baar aapko maafi nahi milegi
Meri aapse guzarish hai ke, aap isi thread per sajid sahab se maafi maang lijiye aur is maamle ko yahi per khatm kar dijiye....., ya nahi tou aagey se jab bhi aap kuch post karengi, wahaan is thread ka link ke saath main hi likh dungi, "Beware of Radhika ji, ..comment on this thread at your own risk"
Main nahi chahti dubara is site ka koi aur member anjaane me aap ki ghaltiyan nikaale aur aap phir usay bhi beizzat karo..
so the choice is yours..
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To all SDC moderators or members..............
ji ye sub baat khene se phele main Dhaval ji ko PM kiya tha, tub unhone kaha tha aapko jo munasib lege wo aap jawab de sekti hai. agar kuch hota hai to hum dekh lenge.
ji jis thread ki baat aap ker rahe ho, mera reply us thread ke baad ka hai......
woh mere thread per comment nahi kerenge, ye baat to khud sajid ji ne hi kehi hai......
ji galti hogi to zarure maani jaayegi........meri thread per or memberes ne bhi galtiya nikali hai,magar unka ek tarika tha, to wo maani bhi gai........ agar aap ki bhawnao ko hi meaningless khe dege to kya reaction hoga aapka (baat ko apne uper rekher deekhiye)
maafi ka to sawal hi peeda hota,galti meri hogi to maafi maaungi na......kisi ko bewaja beizzet kerne ka shok nahi hai mujhe......
aur ek baat aapne kaha aisa main phele bhi kiya to, to bhi aap sabse phele aayi thi, tab bhi Panpati lawz per galti kisi nikli thi ye bhi yaad hoga aapko.
sajid ji ki baat per sirf main itna khena chaungi ki "agar aap me itni ability hai ki aap jo galti nikale rahe hai to use correct kerke samjha sake to aap galit ko highlight ker, or galti ke baawjood aapko accha laga likha hua to kuch aapricate kerke baat khatam kere.,,,,,aur nahi accha laga to chood do.""that's it.
sajid ji ke is PM per aapka kya khena hai. jo neech maine paste kerke bhej rehi hu or kuch unke comment jo "Maa" wali meri nazam se baad ke hai.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69466
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Tere Shaano Pe Sar Ko Jhukaye Kaise
Na Chaaha Kar Tujhse Door Jaye Kaise
Jo Dekhna Na Chaahaye
Unhe Apne Zhakhm Dikhaye Kaise
Chhodh Gaye Woh Hume Rahaa Main
Phir Se Unhe Bulaye Kaise
Chupaya Tha Apni Wafaa Ko Sabse
Woh Be-wafaa Nikla Bataye Kaise
Teri Ijazat Ke Bagair
'Radhika' Tere Ghar Aaye Kaise
Agar ijazat ho to kuch galtiyaa.N bataye aapki............(reply by sajid ji)
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Hello Radhika - 1st June 2010, 02:46 PM
http://www.shayri.com/forums/private.php?do=showpm&pmid=126384
R u still mad at me..........well agar kuch naya likha ho to PM karo mujhe.
Gussa mat hona tum bohat achcha likhti ho bas thodi se polishing ki zarurat hai aur main hamesha wahi karna chahta tha.
But i beleive helping in PM is better, only between 2 freinds.
Kya pata aage chalkar tum mujhe guide karo...
Ghayel
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Haalki main Sajid ji ko abhi tak koi zawaab nahi diya na PM or na post per,unhe ye pata tha abki baar zarur zawaab aayega radhika ka.
(for eg) kyonki galti kerne wale ko zarure pata hota hai ki wo galti ker raha hai chahe wo chota ho ya bada, ye fact hai. Baat sirf hoti hai accept kerne ki jo accept kerta hai or sahi or jo nahi kerta wo galat.
aur ab wo moderaters ko phele hi apni safai de ker suggestions de rehe, kya aapko nahi lagta ki SDC per politics kheli ja rahi hai.
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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12th July 2010, 07:55 PM
Well well jis cheeze se jitna bach raha tha usi me phir mujhe ghaseeta ja raha hai, Radhika jee maaf kariyega inhi sab maslo se bachne ke liye maine aapko apni Ignore List me add kar liya tha, par jab mujhe yaha ho rahi bato ke bare me bataya gaya to mujhe majbooran yaha apni haziri deni padh rahi hai. Aap yeh bilkool mat samajhiyega ke main yaha kisi kism ki safaiee dene aaya hu safaiee to tab di jati hai jab koi baat samajh me aaye. Aapne itna sara Home work karke yeh matter likha hai ke har baat confuse ho gayee hai....khair ab aa hi gaye hai to kuch kehkar hi jayege.
To all SDC moderators or members..............
ji ye sub baat khene se phele main Dhaval ji ko PM kiya tha, tub unhone kaha tha aapko jo munasib lege wo aap jawab de sekti hai. agar kuch hota hai to hum dekh lenge.
Sabse pehle to aapko yaha Dhaval saheb ka naam nahi uchalna chahiye tha woh bhi is andaaz me, agar aapke aur Dhaval saheb ke beech koi baat hui bhi hai aur unhone agar yeh kaha bhi hai "Agar kuch hota hai to hum dekh lenge" to yeh baat aapko apne tak hi rakhni chahiye thi. Khair aapki in bato se mera vishwaas Dhaval saheb me ratti barabar bhi kam nahi hoga. Par aainda se khayaal rakhe aur PM ki baat PM tak hi rahe to achcha hai.
ji jis thread ki baat aap ker rahe ho, mera reply us thread ke baad ka hai......
woh mere thread per comment nahi kerenge, ye baat to khud sajid ji ne hi kehi hai......
Radhika jee har din itwaar nahi hota na har din insaan ka savbhav ek sa hota hai, ha yeh sach hai ke maine aapke thread par likha tha ke main kabhi aapki post par comment nahi karuga. Lekin uske kuch hi dino baad maine aapki comment apni thread par dekhi aur mujhe badi sharmindgi hui ke mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye. Bas isi baat ko dhiyaan me rakh kar maine aapke kalaam par comment di.......main chahu to aapko woh comment dikha sakta hu jo aapne mere comment ( Main aapki post par comment nahi dooga ) ke baad likhi thi mere thread par.........lekin main zara home work me kachcha hu isiliye aap khud dekh lijiyega.
ji galti hogi to zarure maani jaayegi........meri thread per or memberes ne bhi galtiya nikali hai,magar unka ek tarika tha, to wo maani bhi gai........ agar aap ki bhawnao ko hi meaningless khe dege to kya reaction hoga aapka (baat ko apne uper rekher deekhiye)
maafi ka to sawal hi peeda hota,galti meri hogi to maafi maaungi na......kisi ko bewaja beizzet kerne ka shok nahi hai mujhe......
aur ek baat aapne kaha aisa main phele bhi kiya to, to bhi aap sabse phele aayi thi, tab bhi Panpati lawz per galti kisi nikli thi ye bhi yaad hoga aapko.
Hahahaha chaliye aapko ek kaam deta hu aur yaqeenan baki members bhi padh rahe hai maza aayega, woh panpati wala thread phir nikaliye aur usme agar aapko yeh mil jaye ke maine kahi kaha ho ke panpati lafz galat hai to aapko 100 rupye inam meri taraf se............maine sirf itna kaha tha ke ke aisa koi word maine abhi tak nahi suna hai kindly clarify this word. Aapka kya kaam tha ke apne lafz ki aap khud vazahat karti lekin aapne jo reply diya was totally off the subject aapne technically apne word ko defend kiya hi nahi aur members ne aapko support kiya is mamle me. Infact aapne ek ghatiya line use ki us thread me yaad hai aapko........"Sabki bolti bandh kar di" aur maine fauran baad me kaha ke isi cheeze ka dar tha mujhe. Please sare members woh thread zarur padhe radhika jee aapko link degi unka homework tagda hai.
sajid ji ki baat per sirf main itna khena chaungi ki "agar aap me itni ability hai ki aap jo galti nikale rahe hai to use correct kerke samjha sake to aap galit ko highlight ker, or galti ke baawjood aapko accha laga likha hua to kuch aapricate kerke baat khatam kere.,,,,,aur nahi accha laga to chood do.""that's it.
sajid ji ke is PM per aapka kya khena hai. jo neech maine paste kerke bhej rehi hu or kuch unke comment jo "Maa" wali meri nazam se baad ke hai.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69466
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26th May 2010, 01:42 AM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Tere Shaano Pe Sar Ko Jhukaye Kaise
Na Chaaha Kar Tujhse Door Jaye Kaise
Jo Dekhna Na Chaahaye
Unhe Apne Zhakhm Dikhaye Kaise
Chhodh Gaye Woh Hume Rahaa Main
Phir Se Unhe Bulaye Kaise
Chupaya Tha Apni Wafaa Ko Sabse
Woh Be-wafaa Nikla Bataye Kaise
Teri Ijazat Ke Bagair
'Radhika' Tere Ghar Aaye Kaise
Agar ijazat ho to kuch galtiyaa.N bataye aapki............(reply by sajid ji)
Hahahah thank you so much aapne yaha yeh line likh kar meri izzat me izafa kiya hai............main janta hu aapko kaise halki si buraiee ya islah par gussa aa jata hai isiliye kitni izzat aur ehtaram ke sath aapko maine poocha ke "Agar ijazat ho to kuch galtiyaa.N bataye aapki.........." waise sab janne ko bade utsuk hai ke aapne kya jawab diya meri is guzarish ka "definately u ignore it" qke aapko yaha bhi aisa laga ke main aapka mazak uda raha hu.
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(PM by Sajid ji)
Hello Radhika - 1st June 2010, 02:46 PM
http://www.shayri.com/forums/private.php?do=showpm&pmid=126384
R u still mad at me..........well agar kuch naya likha ho to PM karo mujhe.
Gussa mat hona tum bohat achcha likhti ho bas thodi se polishing ki zarurat hai aur main hamesha wahi karna chahta tha.
But i beleive helping in PM is better, only between 2 freinds.
Kya pata aage chalkar tum mujhe guide karo...
Ghayel
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Chee chee kitni gandi baat hai Radhika jee yaqeen janiye hum members chahe jitna aapes me lade ya behas kare par kabhi itni geeri hui harkat nahi karte........hum kabhi ek dusre ke PM share nahi karte yeh hamare sanskaar hi nahi hai..........par aapne poora msg yaha chipka diya yeh cheeze is baat ka saboot hai ke aap ek behas jeetne ke liye kis hadh tak geer sakti hai.......pehle aapne Dhaval saheb se hui PM me baat discuss ki aur ab meri. Maine itna bada thread banaya abhi thode din pehle ke ISLAH dene ke liye clause hona chahiye jaha tick kiya jaye box me lekin maine kahi bhi aapka naam nahi mention kiya bohat logho ne poocha ke aisa kadam maine q uthaya par main khamosh raha. Yeh meri sharafat thi aur yeh aapki............lekin ab kehta hu ke woh thread banane ki sabse badi wajah sirf aur sirf aap thi aaj jo mere sath ho raha hai main nahi chahta kisi aur member ke sath ho.
Haalki main Sajid ji ko abhi tak koi zawaab nahi diya na PM or na post per,unhe ye pata tha abki baar zarur zawaab aayega radhika ka.
Q nahi diya jawab PM ka, main janta hu aapne q jawab nahi diya. Aapne yeh soch liya hai ke yeh kisi kism ki jung hai aur aapka jawab dena ek kism ka surrender karna hoga.....hahahahahah
(for eg) kyonki galti kerne wale ko zarure pata hota hai ki wo galti ker raha hai chahe wo chota ho ya bada, ye fact hai. Baat sirf hoti hai accept kerne ki jo accept kerta hai or sahi or jo nahi kerta wo galat.
aur ab wo moderaters ko phele hi apni safai de ker suggestions de rehe, kya aapko nahi lagta ki SDC per politics kheli ja rahi hai.
SDC par politics kheli ja rahi hai hahahahahah aap janti hai aapne kya kaha hai do you realize. Aap ne ab poore SDC ko apne is bhadhdhe accusation ki wajah se involve kar liya hai, zahir hai main akayla to politics kar nahi sakta. Radhika jee yeh sab batein sirf aur sirf aapki negative soch ka natija hai......aap ki nazar me jo aapke haq me na kahe woh aapka khula dushman hai.
Ek nahi hazaro martaba mere kalaam ki buraiee hui hai aur maine har buraiee ko apne mathe se lagaya hai........yaha koi perfect nahi hai. Aapko agar lagta hai ke mera wajood meaningless hai to mujhe aapki is baat se bhi koi shikayat nahi aapki soch hai aur main aapki soch ki kadr karta hu.
Mujhe aapse ab koi shikayat nahi hai aap chahe to aur bhi mujhe zaleel kar sakti hai meri bas itni guzarish hai ke aisa kisi aur members ke sath mat karna unke hisse ki bhi zalalat aap mujhe de de.
Allah sabko apni hifazat me rakhe. AAMEEN
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Dear Radhika jee:
namaste!
aapne jab mujhe Khat bhejaa thaa tou uss mei.n aapne kisii ek member ko aapke Thread par Reply nah kare.n ye baat ki darKhaast ki thee mujhse.. usske jawaab mei.n maine aapko yeh kahaa thaa ki yeh aam mehfil haii aur yahaa.n kisii bhee member par yahaan kisii bhee Thread par jawaab dene ke liye rok nahii.n lagaaii jaa saktee
aur maine yeh bhee kahaa thaa ki aapke Thread par uss member ne apni raa'ey raKhi haii .. aap bhee apnaa nazariya peSh kare.n .. kisii bhee Thread par baat bigaRtii hay to hum deKhte hi hai.n.. tou aap fiKr nah karen.. deKh lenge ka matlab bhee wahi thaa ki baat nah bigRe aur aap aap dono.n apni apni soch ek doosre ke saamne raKhe.n jab ke saamne waale member ne aapko wahaa.n raa'ey dee thee!
Gar aapke paas meraa bhejaa huaa PM save ho.n tou aap yahaa.n beShaq sab ke saamne bhee raKh saktee haii.n.. mere kehne kaa nazariyaa uss PM ko paRh ke logo.n mei.n bhee ees ka matlab saaf ho jaaye.ngaa! mere liye har aik member mere apne hai.n aur mai.n kisii mei.n ko'ii farQ nahii.n raKhtaa!
ShuKriyaa'h!
: aap dono.n se yahee guzaariSh haii ki ab ees baat ko aage nah baRhaaye, Parivaar mei.n aapas mei.n pyaar aur saath banaa rahe.n yahee merii koShiSh rahii thee aur yahee koShiSh kartaa rahuu.ngaa hameShaa! :
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
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Today, 12:05 AM
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Originally Posted by zainy
Sabhi ashar bohat hi badhiya haiN Gudia ji, .
Do baateiN aapse kehni thi
1) Teesre sher me aap ne redeef ki ghalti ki hai, zarur typing mistake hi hogi
2)agar aap apna radeef "rahe hai dekho " ki jagah "rahe haiN dekho" likhengi tou aur bhi khoobsurat lagegi aapki ghazal...
keep writing.........
Zainy Ji...... Aapka Gudia Ji ko Samjhaane ka yeh tarikaa ......yaha kuch logo ko aapse seekhna chaahiye.... ! mujhe bahut accha laga....jis tarha aapne unhe samjhaaya.... !
iss tarha likhne waale me vishwaas aur bhawna dono ko bal milegaa .... ! aapke iss udhaaran ka ... Main dil se aadar karta hoon... !
naye likhne waaloN ko unki bhawna toD ke seekhane ka koi matlab nahi...! jaisa abhi haal me dekhne ko aaya hai.... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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13th July 2010, 01:07 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Well well jis cheeze se jitna bach raha tha usi me phir mujhe ghaseeta ja raha hai, Radhika jee maaf kariyega inhi sab maslo se bachne ke liye maine aapko apni Ignore List me add kar liya tha, par jab mujhe yaha ho rahi bato ke bare me bataya gaya to mujhe majbooran yaha apni haziri deni padh rahi hai. Aap yeh bilkool mat samajhiyega ke main yaha kisi kism ki safaiee dene aaya hu safaiee to tab di jati hai jab koi baat samajh me aaye. Aapne itna sara Home work karke yeh matter likha hai ke har baat confuse ho gayee hai....khair ab aa hi gaye hai to kuch kehkar hi jayege.
To all SDC moderators or members..............
ji ye sub baat khene se phele main Dhaval ji ko PM kiya tha, tub unhone kaha tha aapko jo munasib lege wo aap jawab de sekti hai. agar kuch hota hai to hum dekh lenge.
Sabse pehle to aapko yaha Dhaval saheb ka naam nahi uchalna chahiye tha woh bhi is andaaz me, agar aapke aur Dhaval saheb ke beech koi baat hui bhi hai aur unhone agar yeh kaha bhi hai "Agar kuch hota hai to hum dekh lenge" to yeh baat aapko apne tak hi rakhni chahiye thi. Khair aapki in bato se mera vishwaas Dhaval saheb me ratti barabar bhi kam nahi hoga. Par aainda se khayaal rakhe aur PM ki baat PM tak hi rahe to achcha hai.
ji jis thread ki baat aap ker rahe ho, mera reply us thread ke baad ka hai......
woh mere thread per comment nahi kerenge, ye baat to khud sajid ji ne hi kehi hai......
Radhika jee har din itwaar nahi hota na har din insaan ka savbhav ek sa hota hai, ha yeh sach hai ke maine aapke thread par likha tha ke main kabhi aapki post par comment nahi karuga. Lekin uske kuch hi dino baad maine aapki comment apni thread par dekhi aur mujhe badi sharmindgi hui ke mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye. Bas isi baat ko dhiyaan me rakh kar maine aapke kalaam par comment di.......main chahu to aapko woh comment dikha sakta hu jo aapne mere comment ( Main aapki post par comment nahi dooga ) ke baad likhi thi mere thread par.........lekin main zara home work me kachcha hu isiliye aap khud dekh lijiyega.
ji galti hogi to zarure maani jaayegi........meri thread per or memberes ne bhi galtiya nikali hai,magar unka ek tarika tha, to wo maani bhi gai........ agar aap ki bhawnao ko hi meaningless khe dege to kya reaction hoga aapka (baat ko apne uper rekher deekhiye)
maafi ka to sawal hi peeda hota,galti meri hogi to maafi maaungi na......kisi ko bewaja beizzet kerne ka shok nahi hai mujhe......
aur ek baat aapne kaha aisa main phele bhi kiya to, to bhi aap sabse phele aayi thi, tab bhi Panpati lawz per galti kisi nikli thi ye bhi yaad hoga aapko.
Hahahaha chaliye aapko ek kaam deta hu aur yaqeenan baki members bhi padh rahe hai maza aayega, woh panpati wala thread phir nikaliye aur usme agar aapko yeh mil jaye ke maine kahi kaha ho ke panpati lafz galat hai to aapko 100 rupye inam meri taraf se............maine sirf itna kaha tha ke ke aisa koi word maine abhi tak nahi suna hai kindly clarify this word. Aapka kya kaam tha ke apne lafz ki aap khud vazahat karti lekin aapne jo reply diya was totally off the subject aapne technically apne word ko defend kiya hi nahi aur members ne aapko support kiya is mamle me. Infact aapne ek ghatiya line use ki us thread me yaad hai aapko........"Sabki bolti bandh kar di" aur maine fauran baad me kaha ke isi cheeze ka dar tha mujhe. Please sare members woh thread zarur padhe radhika jee aapko link degi unka homework tagda hai.
sajid ji ki baat per sirf main itna khena chaungi ki "agar aap me itni ability hai ki aap jo galti nikale rahe hai to use correct kerke samjha sake to aap galit ko highlight ker, or galti ke baawjood aapko accha laga likha hua to kuch aapricate kerke baat khatam kere.,,,,,aur nahi accha laga to chood do.""that's it.
sajid ji ke is PM per aapka kya khena hai. jo neech maine paste kerke bhej rehi hu or kuch unke comment jo "Maa" wali meri nazam se baad ke hai.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69466
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26th May 2010, 01:42 AM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Tere Shaano Pe Sar Ko Jhukaye Kaise
Na Chaaha Kar Tujhse Door Jaye Kaise
Jo Dekhna Na Chaahaye
Unhe Apne Zhakhm Dikhaye Kaise
Chhodh Gaye Woh Hume Rahaa Main
Phir Se Unhe Bulaye Kaise
Chupaya Tha Apni Wafaa Ko Sabse
Woh Be-wafaa Nikla Bataye Kaise
Teri Ijazat Ke Bagair
'Radhika' Tere Ghar Aaye Kaise
Agar ijazat ho to kuch galtiyaa.N bataye aapki............(reply by sajid ji)
Hahahah thank you so much aapne yaha yeh line likh kar meri izzat me izafa kiya hai............main janta hu aapko kaise halki si buraiee ya islah par gussa aa jata hai isiliye kitni izzat aur ehtaram ke sath aapko maine poocha ke "Agar ijazat ho to kuch galtiyaa.N bataye aapki.........." waise sab janne ko bade utsuk hai ke aapne kya jawab diya meri is guzarish ka "definately u ignore it" qke aapko yaha bhi aisa laga ke main aapka mazak uda raha hu.
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Hello Radhika - 1st June 2010, 02:46 PM
http://www.shayri.com/forums/private.php?do=showpm&pmid=126384
R u still mad at me..........well agar kuch naya likha ho to PM karo mujhe.
Gussa mat hona tum bohat achcha likhti ho bas thodi se polishing ki zarurat hai aur main hamesha wahi karna chahta tha.
But i beleive helping in PM is better, only between 2 freinds.
Kya pata aage chalkar tum mujhe guide karo...
Ghayel
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Chee chee kitni gandi baat hai Radhika jee yaqeen janiye hum members chahe jitna aapes me lade ya behas kare par kabhi itni geeri hui harkat nahi karte........hum kabhi ek dusre ke PM share nahi karte yeh hamare sanskaar hi nahi hai..........par aapne poora msg yaha chipka diya yeh cheeze is baat ka saboot hai ke aap ek behas jeetne ke liye kis hadh tak geer sakti hai.......pehle aapne Dhaval saheb se hui PM me baat discuss ki aur ab meri. Maine itna bada thread banaya abhi thode din pehle ke ISLAH dene ke liye clause hona chahiye jaha tick kiya jaye box me lekin maine kahi bhi aapka naam nahi mention kiya bohat logho ne poocha ke aisa kadam maine q uthaya par main khamosh raha. Yeh meri sharafat thi aur yeh aapki............lekin ab kehta hu ke woh thread banane ki sabse badi wajah sirf aur sirf aap thi aaj jo mere sath ho raha hai main nahi chahta kisi aur member ke sath ho.
Haalki main Sajid ji ko abhi tak koi zawaab nahi diya na PM or na post per,unhe ye pata tha abki baar zarur zawaab aayega radhika ka.
Q nahi diya jawab PM ka, main janta hu aapne q jawab nahi diya. Aapne yeh soch liya hai ke yeh kisi kism ki jung hai aur aapka jawab dena ek kism ka surrender karna hoga.....hahahahahah
(for eg) kyonki galti kerne wale ko zarure pata hota hai ki wo galti ker raha hai chahe wo chota ho ya bada, ye fact hai. Baat sirf hoti hai accept kerne ki jo accept kerta hai or sahi or jo nahi kerta wo galat.
aur ab wo moderaters ko phele hi apni safai de ker suggestions de rehe, kya aapko nahi lagta ki SDC per politics kheli ja rahi hai.
SDC par politics kheli ja rahi hai hahahahahah aap janti hai aapne kya kaha hai do you realize. Aap ne ab poore SDC ko apne is bhadhdhe accusation ki wajah se involve kar liya hai, zahir hai main akayla to politics kar nahi sakta. Radhika jee yeh sab batein sirf aur sirf aapki negative soch ka natija hai......aap ki nazar me jo aapke haq me na kahe woh aapka khula dushman hai.
Ek nahi hazaro martaba mere kalaam ki buraiee hui hai aur maine har buraiee ko apne mathe se lagaya hai........yaha koi perfect nahi hai. Aapko agar lagta hai ke mera wajood meaningless hai to mujhe aapki is baat se bhi koi shikayat nahi aapki soch hai aur main aapki soch ki kadr karta hu.
Mujhe aapse ab koi shikayat nahi hai aap chahe to aur bhi mujhe zaleel kar sakti hai meri bas itni guzarish hai ke aisa kisi aur members ke sath mat karna unke hisse ki bhi zalalat aap mujhe de de.
Allah sabko apni hifazat me rakhe. AAMEEN
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I don't like this at all...!
Bahut kuch main bhi kehna chaahta huN magar ek dost ne mujhe apne zubaan par lagaam lagaane ko kahaa hai...!
Personal matters main SDC ke sabhi members ko ghasiiTa jaa rahaa hai...! Bad, very bad...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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14th July 2010, 06:50 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Well well jis cheeze se jitna bach raha tha usi me phir mujhe ghaseeta ja raha hai, Radhika jee maaf kariyega inhi sab maslo se bachne ke liye maine aapko apni Ignore List me add kar liya tha, par jab mujhe yaha ho rahi bato ke bare me bataya gaya to mujhe majbooran yaha apni haziri deni padh rahi hai. Aap yeh bilkool mat samajhiyega ke main yaha kisi kism ki safaiee dene aaya hu safaiee to tab di jati hai jab koi baat samajh me aaye. Aapne itna sara Home work karke yeh matter likha hai ke har baat confuse ho gayee hai....khair ab aa hi gaye hai to kuch kehkar hi jayege.
To all SDC moderators or members..............
ji ye sub baat khene se phele main Dhaval ji ko PM kiya tha, tub unhone kaha tha aapko jo munasib lege wo aap jawab de sekti hai. agar kuch hota hai to hum dekh lenge.
Sabse pehle to aapko yaha Dhaval saheb ka naam nahi uchalna chahiye tha woh bhi is andaaz me, agar aapke aur Dhaval saheb ke beech koi baat hui bhi hai aur unhone agar yeh kaha bhi hai "Agar kuch hota hai to hum dekh lenge" to yeh baat aapko apne tak hi rakhni chahiye thi. Khair aapki in bato se mera vishwaas Dhaval saheb me ratti barabar bhi kam nahi hoga. Par aainda se khayaal rakhe aur PM ki baat PM tak hi rahe to achcha hai.
ji jis thread ki baat aap ker rahe ho, mera reply us thread ke baad ka hai......
woh mere thread per comment nahi kerenge, ye baat to khud sajid ji ne hi kehi hai......
Radhika jee har din itwaar nahi hota na har din insaan ka savbhav ek sa hota hai, ha yeh sach hai ke maine aapke thread par likha tha ke main kabhi aapki post par comment nahi karuga. Lekin uske kuch hi dino baad maine aapki comment apni thread par dekhi aur mujhe badi sharmindgi hui ke mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye. Bas isi baat ko dhiyaan me rakh kar maine aapke kalaam par comment di.......main chahu to aapko woh comment dikha sakta hu jo aapne mere comment ( Main aapki post par comment nahi dooga ) ke baad likhi thi mere thread par.........lekin main zara home work me kachcha hu isiliye aap khud dekh lijiyega.
ji galti hogi to zarure maani jaayegi........meri thread per or memberes ne bhi galtiya nikali hai,magar unka ek tarika tha, to wo maani bhi gai........ agar aap ki bhawnao ko hi meaningless khe dege to kya reaction hoga aapka (baat ko apne uper rekher deekhiye)
maafi ka to sawal hi peeda hota,galti meri hogi to maafi maaungi na......kisi ko bewaja beizzet kerne ka shok nahi hai mujhe......
aur ek baat aapne kaha aisa main phele bhi kiya to, to bhi aap sabse phele aayi thi, tab bhi Panpati lawz per galti kisi nikli thi ye bhi yaad hoga aapko.
Hahahaha chaliye aapko ek kaam deta hu aur yaqeenan baki members bhi padh rahe hai maza aayega, woh panpati wala thread phir nikaliye aur usme agar aapko yeh mil jaye ke maine kahi kaha ho ke panpati lafz galat hai to aapko 100 rupye inam meri taraf se............maine sirf itna kaha tha ke ke aisa koi word maine abhi tak nahi suna hai kindly clarify this word. Aapka kya kaam tha ke apne lafz ki aap khud vazahat karti lekin aapne jo reply diya was totally off the subject aapne technically apne word ko defend kiya hi nahi aur members ne aapko support kiya is mamle me. Infact aapne ek ghatiya line use ki us thread me yaad hai aapko........"Sabki bolti bandh kar di" aur maine fauran baad me kaha ke isi cheeze ka dar tha mujhe. Please sare members woh thread zarur padhe radhika jee aapko link degi unka homework tagda hai.
sajid ji ki baat per sirf main itna khena chaungi ki "agar aap me itni ability hai ki aap jo galti nikale rahe hai to use correct kerke samjha sake to aap galit ko highlight ker, or galti ke baawjood aapko accha laga likha hua to kuch aapricate kerke baat khatam kere.,,,,,aur nahi accha laga to chood do.""that's it.
sajid ji ke is PM per aapka kya khena hai. jo neech maine paste kerke bhej rehi hu or kuch unke comment jo "Maa" wali meri nazam se baad ke hai.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69466
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26th May 2010, 01:42 AM
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Originally Posted by Radhika_2
Tere Shaano Pe Sar Ko Jhukaye Kaise
Na Chaaha Kar Tujhse Door Jaye Kaise
Jo Dekhna Na Chaahaye
Unhe Apne Zhakhm Dikhaye Kaise
Chhodh Gaye Woh Hume Rahaa Main
Phir Se Unhe Bulaye Kaise
Chupaya Tha Apni Wafaa Ko Sabse
Woh Be-wafaa Nikla Bataye Kaise
Teri Ijazat Ke Bagair
'Radhika' Tere Ghar Aaye Kaise
Agar ijazat ho to kuch galtiyaa.N bataye aapki............(reply by sajid ji)
Hahahah thank you so much aapne yaha yeh line likh kar meri izzat me izafa kiya hai............main janta hu aapko kaise halki si buraiee ya islah par gussa aa jata hai isiliye kitni izzat aur ehtaram ke sath aapko maine poocha ke "Agar ijazat ho to kuch galtiyaa.N bataye aapki.........." waise sab janne ko bade utsuk hai ke aapne kya jawab diya meri is guzarish ka "definately u ignore it" qke aapko yaha bhi aisa laga ke main aapka mazak uda raha hu.
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(PM by Sajid ji)
Hello Radhika - 1st June 2010, 02:46 PM
http://www.shayri.com/forums/private.php?do=showpm&pmid=126384
R u still mad at me..........well agar kuch naya likha ho to PM karo mujhe.
Gussa mat hona tum bohat achcha likhti ho bas thodi se polishing ki zarurat hai aur main hamesha wahi karna chahta tha.
But i beleive helping in PM is better, only between 2 freinds.
Kya pata aage chalkar tum mujhe guide karo...
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Chee chee kitni gandi baat hai Radhika jee yaqeen janiye hum members chahe jitna aapes me lade ya behas kare par kabhi itni geeri hui harkat nahi karte........hum kabhi ek dusre ke PM share nahi karte yeh hamare sanskaar hi nahi hai..........par aapne poora msg yaha chipka diya yeh cheeze is baat ka saboot hai ke aap ek behas jeetne ke liye kis hadh tak geer sakti hai.......pehle aapne Dhaval saheb se hui PM me baat discuss ki aur ab meri. Maine itna bada thread banaya abhi thode din pehle ke ISLAH dene ke liye clause hona chahiye jaha tick kiya jaye box me lekin maine kahi bhi aapka naam nahi mention kiya bohat logho ne poocha ke aisa kadam maine q uthaya par main khamosh raha. Yeh meri sharafat thi aur yeh aapki............lekin ab kehta hu ke woh thread banane ki sabse badi wajah sirf aur sirf aap thi aaj jo mere sath ho raha hai main nahi chahta kisi aur member ke sath ho.
Haalki main Sajid ji ko abhi tak koi zawaab nahi diya na PM or na post per,unhe ye pata tha abki baar zarur zawaab aayega radhika ka.
Q nahi diya jawab PM ka, main janta hu aapne q jawab nahi diya. Aapne yeh soch liya hai ke yeh kisi kism ki jung hai aur aapka jawab dena ek kism ka surrender karna hoga.....hahahahahah
(for eg) kyonki galti kerne wale ko zarure pata hota hai ki wo galti ker raha hai chahe wo chota ho ya bada, ye fact hai. Baat sirf hoti hai accept kerne ki jo accept kerta hai or sahi or jo nahi kerta wo galat.
aur ab wo moderaters ko phele hi apni safai de ker suggestions de rehe, kya aapko nahi lagta ki SDC per politics kheli ja rahi hai.
SDC par politics kheli ja rahi hai hahahahahah aap janti hai aapne kya kaha hai do you realize. Aap ne ab poore SDC ko apne is bhadhdhe accusation ki wajah se involve kar liya hai, zahir hai main akayla to politics kar nahi sakta. Radhika jee yeh sab batein sirf aur sirf aapki negative soch ka natija hai......aap ki nazar me jo aapke haq me na kahe woh aapka khula dushman hai.
Ek nahi hazaro martaba mere kalaam ki buraiee hui hai aur maine har buraiee ko apne mathe se lagaya hai........yaha koi perfect nahi hai. Aapko agar lagta hai ke mera wajood meaningless hai to mujhe aapki is baat se bhi koi shikayat nahi aapki soch hai aur main aapki soch ki kadr karta hu.
Mujhe aapse ab koi shikayat nahi hai aap chahe to aur bhi mujhe zaleel kar sakti hai meri bas itni guzarish hai ke aisa kisi aur members ke sath mat karna unke hisse ki bhi zalalat aap mujhe de de.
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Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
waah radhika jee ek taraf us begane ho chuke shakhs se apnapan aur dusri taraf us apne se ho chuka beganapan khoob nazar aaya hai in do sheron me.. likhti rahen...
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Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
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its a very sweet n heart tchng...keep writin...........
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Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
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behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne radhika ji....
daad qubuul kijiyega....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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Bahut acha likha hai Radhika ji,,,
Daad hazir hai....
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Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
these two are just awesum...........
keep writing...
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya, ye mare bhi favoriute hai........................
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
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Radhika,
tumhari koshish achhi lagi
yun hi kahte rahna .....soch mein pankh apne aap hi lag jayenge
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
yeh sher bahut achha laga
daad
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Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
Ek Acchi Koshish ...............Radhika Ji ! Nice Creation... !
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya.......................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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ji bhaut bhaut shukriya.....................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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hai radhika kafi khubsurat ehsas hai par byangi abki bar kuch khas nahi lagi kuch sher kafi umda rahe par maf karna isse ache padhe hai aapke isliye bol raha hu
to ek sher aapke liye pesh-e-khidmat hai
bewfa pukarenge tujhe duniya wale
aankhein na chura mera dil churane wale
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ji thanks.........................................
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Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
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Koi Apna Hoke Bhi Apna Na Lage
Banke Rishta Kabhi Thamna Na Lage
Laakh Majbooriya Hi Sahi DarmiyaN
Unka Milna Kabhi Sapna Na Lage
Suroor-e-Ishk Kuch Aisa Raha Dil Per
Unka Chhalna Kabhi Chhalna Na Lage
Tasavvur Me Rehta Hai Woh Har Pal
Ab Woh Pal Bhi Kabhi Apna Na Lage
Ishq Ki Ibadat Humne Ki Is Kadar
Tuut Ke Dil Ka Kabhi Basna Na Lage
Issi Dua Me Uthaatii Hai Ab Haath "Radhika"
Apne Pyaar Ka Kabhi Badalna Na Lage
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Radhika
jazbatoan sae bhapoor ae ghazal to maerae dil per kafi asar kergayee
razia
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